Grammar check my short writing please?
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First line, Popular, Turkey.\n\nSymbol, line 6.
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Try spelling and punctuation for starters.  I'm not trying to be facetious, but future employers DO judge your application by how neat it is and how well you use your grammar skills.
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Awesome essay! You have very poetic writing. The essay had barely any errors, but there are just a couple small things I would change:\n\nMakes sure you underline A Tale of Two Cities. I know you can't do that in Answers, but just in case you didn't know.\nIn the first sentence, the colon should be a comma. In the second paragraph (first sentence) conveys shouldn't be capitalized, and in the last sentence, "thing" should be "things." Also, the second sentance isn't complete. I would probably rephrase the first sentence of the last paragraph, "This section in chapter five describes the miserable condition of the peasants in Paris, France during the 1800's, and the Jokers graffiti foreshadows the war that is soon to come." There's also a period missing at the end.\n\nOther than that, it was very, very good and you should be very, very proud. Nice vocabulary, by the way.
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Nicely written. Particularlyl the beginning. Work on the finale. It is missing its purpose at the end. But the rest is pointing to something meaningful. \n\nSuggest that you are missing your ending...you are writing about something personal to you.
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hi..\n\nmight this link v'll help u\n\nhttp://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/one.htm
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Your first sentence is a run-on sentence.\n\nBut not to bad.  Clean it up a bit and worry more about your flow.\n\n6 out of 10
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Great question.  May I suggest a project on correct spelling and grammar usage?
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No grammar error, but its awkward. Try this: "This article is written entirely in French"
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wat is zis man? cant understand a shit of what u've written.. get some punctuation in
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I have a couple grammar suggestions for you:\n\n- I'm not sure if this happened because of Yahoo or if you typed it in this way, but you should only have capital letters at the beginning of a sentence or for proper nouns (like for a person's name, or for a place name like "Paris", or for a product name like "Colgate").\n\n- Also, punctuation is VERY important.  If you don't clearly punctuate your writing, it is hard to understand.  For example, make sure that you have periods at the end of each of your sentences so that readers will know where one thought starts and another thought begins.\n\nIn terms of the clarity of this paragrpah, I here are my thoughts:\n\n- Figure out what the main thing that you're trying to say in this paragraph is, and make sure to state that CLEARLY in your first sentence.  This helps the reader to know what to expect to read in the paragraph.  Based on what you're writtetn, in sounds like your main point is something about how advertising, especially TV advertising, has the potential to influence people's behavior.  I would use the next few sentences to explain, generally, how television advertisements have the potential to influence people (I would do this by explaining how advertising companies target certain ads to certain audiences during certain programs, etc).  I would then say "For example..." and use your example of the Colgate commercial having the potential to influence a child to behave like the child he or she saw in the commerical.  I would then suggest that you have a sentence at the end of your paragrpah that conlcudes your ideas and helps to prepare the reader for what he/she will read in your next paragraph (if there is one).\n\nHope this helps!!
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I'm sorry I'm replying without answering the question, but please, PLEASE, PLEASEEE never never NEVER put an unnecessary apostrophe in the posessive form of "its." I can see maybe leaving out a necessary apostrophe if you're too lazy, but adding one just demonstrates ignorance, because technically it takes more time to do so. Please don't, for the more sensitive among us. Open a grammar book. It's a tragedy the subject's not taught these days.
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Are you sure you've written out the coeffients correctly. Please repost.
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The first one is correct.\n\nThe second would be correct if you changed the is to has.\n\nHTH
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Huh? What are you trying to ask here? You need serious help with your grammar skills. Maybe you should ask for help with your grammar instead.
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english next time please
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Don't you know?\nDid you get the grammar wrong (if so congrats)\nIs this code for something?
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The semicolon should be later, as in:\n\nPhysical beauty: with disease it fades; with age it dies.