I need a more original title...creative people?!?!?
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I'm not sure the topic or your newspaper article...but here are a couple of general suggestions:\n\nTerm Telegraph\nCopious Communication - Copious means lots of something
899109
OMG, another imposter!  How boring is this!!
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For not knowing the plot or what part of the story you've given us, I'm rather impressed and sad to be given such a small portion.  I hesitate to say "good for 15" because there are published writers three times your age that don't write as well, but you have very solid potential.  I would second what bunnicula said about not posting more until you have it copyrighted, but keep us updated--I look very forward to purchasing it one day. (And I'm jealous of your close friends who will be able to read the rest before then)
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Hey, you gotta pick SOMEONE- it might as well be me since you sure as hell don't seem to want to do this boring, pointless, and thankless job.\n\n\nSorry, that's the best I can do without knowing a name to make a rhyme or catchy slogan to.
320642
hire a programmer or just make it some simple mind game, or steal other peoples ideas online for ideas of online games, and just cut and paste
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I love the idea and can't wait to see what you come up with.  Unfortunately my creative juices aren't flowing right now.  \n\nHey I think that people are afraid to write what they want to because of all this government condoned invasion of privacy crap that's happening.  We don't want the men in the black suits showing up at our doors :)\n\nI'd like to see a comic about Bush and his cronies trying to live like the lower middle class........."What do you mean I can't go to a ball game?!?!  I used to own an entire team."
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Think of a VERY original idea. Even if you base it on other projects you've seen, don't copy any popular projects. Start with something that interests you and ask why or why not?
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it depends on what your like\nit has to be original
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use your creativity. dont implement ideas from here. it wont be fun
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I recommend your choice for Another Kind of Fire.  It brings one to interest and is eye catching.  It sings! (the tone of the title is like music). A variation of this might be A Special Kind of Fire.  Or use of the word Flame instead of Fire.  or even this ALTERNATIVE FIRE! However, your initial choice works very well.\n\nHollywood Ending, sound more like a newspaper headline or a movie title.\n\nThe Faintest Spark is good, if it reflects a special series or the high light song then it may be a good choice.\n\nRemember a title must catch and hold their attention and make them curious.  If it does not grab them they are unlikely to buy.  It needs to be easy to remember so that word-of-mouth or other advertising will help them remember the title.\n\nSuccess to you.
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So everyone doesn't end up spelling and thinking like you.\nWe need to have at least some intelligent people to create new things.
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You have tried your best but you still lack some professional contents. Add some photos with genres such as nature, obscure, life, people, environment, village etc.\nhope you make it more better.\nForum discussion and privacy policy link are not set.\nmake it quick and post privacy statement and forums.\n\nhttp://s3.invisionfree.com/emaxis
818314
Rent a brain.. haha!!! The first guy had a good site... I'd just let someone else do it though!
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KEEP IT FUN.\nNOTHING MORE.
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personally i would really love it if somebody gave me something they made or crafted themselves it't just really thoughtful and always unique.\n\nS\nx
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Hey how about an AUTHOR!
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a short story with a title