i need help with writing a poem?
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It really kind of defeats the purpose if someone else writes it for you.  Wouldn't you feel like a fraud?  Anyway, here you go:\n\nRoses are red\nViolets are blue\nI'm nothing without you\nNothing but poo.
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The world needs more Poets.\n\nI agree grammar is important..unless misuse is deliberate.\n\nI did get a laugh over someone chastising you for poor \n\ngrammar by stating one word was "more correct"!!!\n\nCheck my poems on my Yahoo 360 and let me know what you \n\nthink by posting a comment and voting for favourites.\n\nA 360 site would be a good way for you to post your works \n\nas well.\n\n\nGood Luck\n\nJimmy
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There are lots of poems on line for and about teachers.  check out the websites I've included.  The poesms are not necessarily good-bye poems, but some of them would work I think.  \n\nI hope these help.
739038
A poem need not rhyme. Just go with what you know in a lyrical flow and you will have a lovely poem. Good Luck!
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Good one :]\n\nBut one exception to your poem:\n\nI can't FORGET your funny poem.(My forgetter would become a little worse) :]\n\nHave a nice day :]
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Sure, but you're question is a bit vague. What, specifically, do you want to know? I can type out the entire poem for you, if that's what you need.
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lol...that's so sweet...\ni dunno..mayb u can make one up based on any other poem,or just start from scratch?\ni just hope laura n corey culd live happily evr after!!gud luck!!
652071
a poem praising someone or something....maybe
668269
well, if u wrote it, CONGRAGULATIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!, if not i think this is just a ordinary poem, probably written to impress a lady or something. I have a friend who published poems, and this poem would be an B- or 7.5/10 grade, which would not make it to the poem industry. But as I said, this poem has a lot of rich text that is exceptionally enriching. It takes great skill to write that, and that is why we are not all writers.
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Try breaking words down into sep-a-rate parts,  and say them like that in your mind. \nLearn like words together - like "here and there"  - not "their"\nTry Google for "helps with spelling" - useful advice and games.\n\nBut don't rely on your spell-checker,  as this little verse shows: \n\n\nOde to the Spell Checker\n\nEye have a spelling chequer, \nIt came with my pea sea.\nIt plainly marques four my revue\nMiss Steaks eye kin knot sea.\nEye strike a key and type a word\nand weight four it two say\nWeather Eye am wrong oar write\nIt shows me strait a weigh.\nAs soon as a mist ache is maid,\nIt nose bee fore two long,\nand Eye can put the error rite -\nIts rare lea ever wrong.\nEye have run this poem threw it\nI am shore your pleased two no,\nIts letter perfect awl the weigh.\nMy spell chequer tolled me sew. \n\n\nHope that helps!
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Poetry or writing\n(I know it sounds lame)
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Post the poem or at least a link to it, and be more specific about what you need help analyzing.
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Well, I tried but I need to know more about the lines in the poem.   Maybe you'll have better luck with these sites.\n\nhttp://www.bartleby.com/\n\nhttp://www.allexperts.com/user.cgi?m=4&expID=50938&catID=678\n\nhttp://www.online-literature.com/forums/showthread.php?t=12717\n\nhttp://www.thent.com/poetry.htm\n\nhttp://lii.org/search/file/poetry
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I bet your poems are great. I can recommend to you Xlibris, a self-publishing company. They have this free publishing guide that you can request from their site. It's nice because it's free :) and also you can get an idea on how to publish your works.
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Basically it is a poem of 5 lines and must have a set number of syllables\nThe normaly set is a 5 7 5 7 7 ( each number being the number of sylables in each line)\n\nThese sorces will help
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you are talented. Every one shows his/her feelings in a way, and one of the most beautiful ways to speak our mind is writing a poem.  :)
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1) Read lots of good modern contemporary poetry\n\n2) Write in free verse\n\n3) Think in specific concrete/sensory details to lead people to experience the poem\n\n4) If any abstract words creep in, cut them out.  Find specific ways of communicating the same info.\n\n5) If any cliches come into your writing, cut them as well.\n\n6)  Pick two representive compounds and describe them in detail.  Describe what happens if you put them together.  Describe interactions, the lab, the equipment...etc....\n\n7) DO NOT use anybody's first four lines, that is plagarism.  Furthermore they are likely to be very different then what you would write, and thus make a major headache for you in unifyingi your poem.  You chose a difficult topic, but YOU need to make it work for yourself.  You sell yourself short by asking for four lines prefab.\n\n8) NO RHYMING WHATSOEVER  Rhyme does not work without meter.  It is a very difficult task to be able to write good sensoraily detailed poems in meter, and adding creating non-sing songy rhymes slant rhymes and such is a difficult skill that only practiced poets should attempt.