How did you all you females like my poem to my previous question?
824190
its good it shows that you want someone back. maybe you should make it more romantic. dont tell the ending about the guy and goign "squirt squirt" lol. sorry but it shoudl be more romanti. just take out the swearing and other vulgar messages and replace them with nicer more sweet romantic ones. the beginging is good though, just not the end..
826692
(m)\n\nNice Poem..... what happened next......
541505
Hehe i liked it and the last couple of jokes that i have heard from you have put a huge smile on my face and i got a good laugh :) so keep up the good work!!!
415430
It is Nice and you have good ideas how ever work on your grammar and it is kinda choppy when reading a style that can be vary effective if used correctly how ever not vary fitting for a love poem. Keep up the hard work.
372729
i LOVE it!!! what do u think of this poem?\n\nI've never felt this way before\nit's all brand new to me\nmy head is spinning, I cant breathe\nYou are all I see.\n\ni long for you to notice me\nI wish you'd ask me out\nso this is what first love is like,\nAnd what a crush is all about.
858932
I know I answered the other one and thank you for the above.  And you are very welcome. Was nice "sharing" with you.  I gave a thumbs up on that one.  I really think the sentiment that Dr. Evil (what a name) gave was one I know would melt me and really seems to apply to you. "Dude! Write down this question on a blank card and then write that there were no answers good enough to say how you feel about her. She would SO DIG THAT!" That really sums it up. Good luck again to you and her.  But with that kind of love you are already luckier than most.  Alda
856968
that was cute.. :)\nthanks good night ..:)
1073647
kick them between the legs. the jerks.\ndo me a service for all human kind. I'd do it, but I'm a guy... and we're not supposed to kick each other in the... \n\nnow then as for us normal morally driven guys, we care about much more than the body. we care about the heart.\nshall I explain in great detail?\nshe and I are... well very different\nwe come from different countries, races, cultures, religions. she's two years older than me. we are physical opposites. but I love her all the more because of our differences.\n it is very hard to describe in words my feelings for her, but I shall have a go at it, though I am certain that far too much will be lost.\nI once wrote her a poem\n\n[her name,]\nyou to have\nyou to hold\nyou to love\nyou as my friend\nforever.\nno matter\nwhat you \nthink \nsay \ndo\nhow you \nlook\nor \nspeak\nI'll still love you\nit's you I love\nand you I want\nto have\nto hold\nforever\n----------------------------\nso?\nyou still think that all guys are superficial, bastards who eat young women for breakfast?\nor have I convinced you yet.\nif you need more persuasion feel free to contact me.
106120
First i made her a candle light dinner. No restraunt could compare to actually cooking her somthing specially if you know what her favorite is. Then i took her out on the town. I like to see alittle bit of a females wild and sexy side. So i took her to a club and do some drinking and dancing.Dancing is one of my ways into a womens heart. Then i took her to my home. Cuddled up and watched a movie. That way i got to see her romantic and intimate side. After that is confidential information.\n\nVincent\nMadison,Wisconsin
975475
LOL.  Well, I liked it.  LOL. \n\nBeing subtle has it's merits.\n\nThank you for the laughs, and have a great new week!
134236
That poem rocks.  I know that it is controversial.  I would be interested to see what people thought of a choice line or two from the poem.
284041
beautiful, if you're serious.\nCute, if you're playful :D
924467
Excellent poem. I printed it & hung it in my Living room wall.\n Thanks
1039242
curled inside your heart\ni want to hide like the pearl\ni felt like saying this many a times\nthat how i wish , you were my girl\n\nadd some much to it with refrences to some special moments you shared with her and whoa! your poem will be ready.
304044
I'm going to take your question as a man wanting some advice so he can lift up his girlfriend and make her feel good VS a man just wanting to get tingly and turned on by some nasty answers.       Okay?\n\nYou could whisperstuff like:\n\nYou are so beautiful.\nYou really turn me on.\nYou mean everything to me.\nYou feel soooo good. \nI really want you.\nI love you so much.\nWill you marry me?\nI need you.\nIt feels sooooooooooo  good to be with you.\nI love when we are this close.\n\nJust to name a few.
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Hey, I am so sorry that I didnt write a poem. I cant write poems very good. LOL. But I just wanted to tell you how good that poem is.I love reading poems about what others went through, and this is the best one yet! I hope everything works out between you and your ex.
534436
Good Poem.......lots of potential! Keep it up!! Good Luck on the girlfriend too.....she's out there!!