help me with this paragarph, grammar problem and flow?
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You are having a lot of issues with run on sentences, passive voice, incorrect apposition, incorrect verb tense and punctuation. You also tend to use words that are redundant to describe things. I've taken an initial pass for you. It very definitely needs further scrubbing, but here's an initial pass.\n\nHerbicide contains two specific ingredients: glyphosate or 2,4D. (WHERE ARE THE TWO?? - you need to specify them with AND)\n\nThese chemicals are commonly used in farms, parks and golf courses.  Farmers and gardeners use the chemicals to kill unwanted plants, but they don’t realize that the chemicals do not stay on the plants. The herbicides are getting into our water, rivers and, subsequently, into the rain. It could kill fish, beavers, frogs and birds. \n\nI found that some researches have proven that weed killer is toxic to the environment. John Struger, a scientist at the Canadian Centre for Inland Waters, analyzed urban streams and detected nine types of herbicides. Tyrone Hayes, the developmental endocrinologist at the University of California at Berkeley, said that over-use of herbicide is directly effecting male tadpoles in the laboratory.  He tested the level used in the environment, and found that this chemical removed the testicles of a male tadpoles, and prevented male characteristics from fully forming. He concluded that herbicide exposure turns the tadpoles into hermaphrodites (creatures with both male and female sexual characteristics). If there are no more male frogs, frog populations will decrease, and, without the frogs to consume them, bug populations will increase.
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What in the world are you trying to say?  Is there a question here that I'm missing?  Try again, but next time to form complete sentences, use periods and capital letters!  I just don't get the point.  sorry
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Flow\nFloss\nFloral\nFloran\nFlorances
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This is fine as it is. The few grammatical mistakes that there are just aren't worth correcting.\nGood job, and good luck on your speech!
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Dude, I've read your question like 6 times and am still confused. How about correcting the grammar and spelling, then forming cohesive sentences.
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Okay...serious grammar....\n\nFirst, you cannot put a comma after town. Second, the rules have changed in regards to a series of items. You must put a comma before the conjunction ("and"). (When I went to school, it was against the rules. Now, it is against the rules NOT to use it.)\n\nThe grammar problem you have is called parallelism. When you are listing items, they must have the same structure. (For example, you wouldn't say, "I like to go to the beach, to the mountains, and shopping at the mall." You would need to change "shopping at the mall" to match the other structures. "I like to go to the beach, to the mountains, and to the mall.")\n\nThe above sentence is an easy example. Let's look at your three items in your list: \n\n-low crime rates\n-a good school district\n-is in good standing with the city\n\nIs it easier to see the error that way? If not, take the first part of the sentence, "It is...has" and attach it to each of the listed items. (For example, "It is a secluded part of town that has low crime rates.)  I'm sure you'll be able to see the error now.\n\nI better structure would be, "It is a secluded part of town that has low crime rates, a good school district, and an excellent reputation." (I couldn't come up with another word for "in good standing.")\n\nI hope this helps. Parallelism is a common error, but not always addressed.
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Your statement and grammar awnsers that question
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Dont worry , I know the book that has done it for you.\nthat is :"Compilers: Principles, Techniques, and Tools. Alfred V.                    Aho, Ravi Sethi, Jeffrey D.Ullman"\nif you could not reach that book search its slides on the web or refer to Jeffry D.Ullman web site to get lecture notes at: http://infolab.stanford.edu/~ullman/\nit has a complet source code for a lexical analyzer for a sample grammar.\nat first step you must write a garmmar that has no left recortion\nand for any nonterminal write a function that calls other nonterminals or matches terminals.
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You diagram sentences within the paragraph, not the entire paragraph.  You should have studied that (and spelling!) already.
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pronuciation: go-yeti
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paraphrase is a re-wording\n\ncommentary adds extra materials and expounds
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"He is a good dancer" is the corrent, you need an article "a" or "the" so the second sentence is incorrect and the third one has the words in the wrong order.
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1. \nGreat.\nRains.\nIf.\n\n2.\nAfter.\nGain.\nSir.\n\n3.\nIts (could also be sit).\nGrain.\nFear.\n\nAre these words supposed to flow logically as if in a sentence? If so, the best way to approach this may be to find all words you can in the jumbled letters and then try to combine them making sure that no letters are duplicated that aren't supposed to be.
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Your first sentence is a run-on sentence.\n\nBut not to bad.  Clean it up a bit and worry more about your flow.\n\n6 out of 10
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I'd say you ought to start by defining a grammar for your language. I know that was where we started in my Master's level compiler class. You might also try publishing some info about your ideas on a website (Geocities would provide free hosting) and try to solicit comments. Posting the URL on forums (like this one) might attract some feedback. I've never done something like that before, but I think that's what I'd try.
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go back to your introductory paragraph. You should be rephrasing the introduction to tie it all together.
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Sentence number 2 is correct.\n\nThe reason sentence 1 is not correct is because it has a dangling participle. In other words, the participle cannot distinguish what it wants to describe. \n\nIt could be that you realize how much different you have been than before (like in sentence 2)\nOR------\nit could be that you realize how FREQUENTLY you have been different than before.\n\nIf you read sentence 1, you will realize that both senerios could be true. \n\nHope this helps\nThanks\nJon