Revise my article.. 1/2?
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First, let me tell you about a small café in Taitong Chupping named "Shaun Chi Nue Ro Mean"  which only sells beef noodles.  You could say they have a monopoly on beef noodle sales in Taitong Chupping! \n\nWhen you are travelling in Taitong Chapping, be sure to visit the hot spring.  Stop and enjoy a soak and afterward you may be a little hungry.\n\nThe café I told you about, Shaun Chi Nue Ro Mean, is very easy to find.  It is located within Chapping Town Centre, along the busy main road.  Just ask one of the locals and they should be able to give you directions.
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How 'bout not wasting my time and save this for a blog entry or a chain email.  Thanks for the 2 points.
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I do editing and proof reading of manuscripts part time. If you like I can take a look at your work. Let me warn you I can be a brutal critic I don't temper my thoughts to appease the writer. If you have something viable I can give you suggestions on how to have yor work seen by the right people. You can contact me through this site.
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dude, edit your question and make it more understandable, read it through before submitting
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as far as an article on a magazine, you should try and submit to smaller magazine first, probably short run presses.  SOmething topic related.  If the magazine is about restaurants, try to go review a restaurant.  If your writing about a certain movie, right a movie review.  If the magazine is about real estate, write an article for real estate trends in the next 18 months.  Sumbit the article, however i don't think you will get paid for your first article, if the magazine publishes, and then they might ask you to write another article in their next issue, and may want to pay you for it.
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No grammar error, but its awkward. Try this: "This article is written entirely in French"
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It depends. Depending on how many words are on the page, font size, etc. Check out my source. Have a good one!
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A good way to do it is to basically say the same thing you said in your introduction, just word it differently.  Both the intro and conclusion should summarize the rest of the paper.
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try $2.00 per page......
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please reword your question or check for spelling errors, then edit.
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Yes. Instead of me rewritting it just take a look at the link:
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thats really good....u should get this published.....if its not already
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Copy and paste it into word. . . .
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Yes use a semicolon\n\nand people, this is listed under HW help..
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The information is well presented, understandable, and technically accurate.  Very good!\n\nFollowing is editorial "nitpicking":\n\nChange page name to something more descriptive.  If I want to bookmark it, it's going to show up as just "laptop".\n\nFirst paragraph: "needs" should be "need".  Second sentence, the "basics" are affecting your decision, not your decision making process.  Last sentence, "innumerous", that's an infinite number.  Suggest rewording the paragraph as:\n\nPurchasing a laptop is a large investment that can be complicated by all of the options, manufacturers, and technical mumbo-jumbo that need to be sifted through. Before you spend a lot of money on a laptop, it is important to spend a little time considering some basics that should affect your decision. This Tech Tip will take a look at a number of things worth considering when buying a laptop computer.\n\nPoint to remember 3 -- grammar error.  Change to: "...the laptop's alternative to ..."\n\nPoint to remember 7, hyperlink to "How to Network Your Computers"\n\nParagraph following "Points..." suggest reword to "... and tendonitis are some ..."\n\nDelete extraneous comma: "...wired or wireless version and generally ..."\n\nMissing comma: "...best option, if available ..."\n\nSuggested change for easier readability: "...separate mouse for ergonomic reasons. Generally it will connect via USB. "\n\nMissing "to": "...starting to feature Bluetooth technology,..."\n\nTense mismatch: "...user to navigate his way to these ..." which isn't politically correct.  :(  How about, "it is up to you to ..."  Tech writers are trending towards use of the second-person, "you", instead of the more formal, stuffy, academic, third-person, "the user".  You've used "you" elsewhere.  It fits your friendly, accessible style.  Stick with it!\n\nSuggested change for easier readability: "..ATI is well known for their high performance graphics products.  They offer ..."\n\nExtra hyphen: "condi-tions"\n\nA general comment, you tend towards long sentences, which is natural because you are thinking of a lot of things at once.  Try to vary between long and short.  It makes your work easier to read.  That is the theory behind some of the suggestions I've made as "readability" changes.\n\nWhew!  Lot of work for two points!  :)\n\nGood luck with your site!
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A good article review requires careful reading, critical thinking, and clear, well-organized writing. \n\nBelow is a link to a small series of guidelines which may help.
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Duh, care to edit your question?