another song i wrote -opinions?
598445
You have very good meter. The words seem to roll effortlessly off of the tongue. KEEP AT IT. I love the rhymes. \n\nI also like the mood you set up with your words. To be very honest, your lyrics are much better than alot I have read. I am not just being nice, either.\n\nAs a songwriter/arranger/musician myself, it is refreshing to read a good piece of material. Like I said before, KEEP AT IT. Good job.\n\nPeace and chicken grease\nJon
1025811
wow. pretty good. I'm assuming this is you? Great vocal range, I would suggest perhaps working on enunciation; some of the words are a little garbbled, but that could be do to the video, not the singer. How big was the audience? I would suggest whether it's you, or whoever, that she get herself heard by some top pros in the business if she hasn't already. She is very good!\nPS I never really cared for Fantasia's singing, so I've never heard her sing that song, but this girl, in my opinion, is a much better singer, but that's just a personal preferance. I'd buy her CD before I'd buy Fantasia's.
1095915
IT'S A GOOD SONG BUT I DON'T UNDERSTAND WHAT THE QUESTION IS. AND LET ME TELL YA, IF THAT IS REALLY YOU IN THAT PIC THIS GIRL FROM TEXAS THINKS YOU'RE  HOT! SO IF THE SONG SUCKED I WOULD PROBABLY SAY IT WAS GOOD ANY WAY. GOOD LUCK WITH WHATEVER IT IS YOU ARE TRYING TO ACCOMPLISH.
628646
You are pretty much right on with what I had in mind-although I prefer "Run to the Hills" for my Iron Maiden song. You have good musical taste in my opinion!! I've sat here for a few minutes and thought about it and I can't think of any other songs that are better than what you already said.
377390
Its interesting, it provides a new twist on the song. I guess the cover was okay, not the best cover ever done though.
624101
amazing grace n songs like that are hymns they dont belonng to anyone band in particular so you should be ok with them but if you are going to record a song that another band wrote then you'll need permission
1162041
No bull but I like your words, were it shorter could be the beginnings of a good song and if  u  want to send me an email\n\nApart from that excellent!!\nThe shooting star lit up the sky etc:::starter for ten
937817
ok which song would you like
371939
Is this a song? No? Then why should this be in the music category?
303265
Yeah........but have already posted my opinions before...so kind of tired now ..:-)\n\nI will let somebody else have a go :-)
188065
I am a British female songwriter/musician/producer and have had songs published by EMI and Song Music and have access to a small studio.  I am from London but live in Nottingham.  I have had a bit of success with artistes that Ive recorded and managed, but now need an investment to get the business up and running properly. Beat Simon Cowell at his own game.  Let me know if you are interested and I could go into my idea in depth.  Thank you for reading.
758446
YES, I LOVE THE FIRST ONE.\nI DO NOT KNOW THE SECOND,\nBUT IT SOUNDS BEAUTIFUL.\nI LOVE THE SONG \nI AM A FRIEND OF GOD.\n&#92;O/ PRAISE GOD &#92;O/
390505
hows ur song go think of things related to it and youll get something to work with
700844
Very nice...you little romantic.......a poem or a song?\n\nYou wrote this....I love it!!!!!
181121
Hi Avivagirl88. Seen your post, and am now curious. Any idea of any of the words in the song? You might be able to string it in a search engine, and automatically find the lyrics
732708
Awesome poem! I like the way it flows, and how you put feeling into the poem. Kick-A**-Tic. Let me know if you write any more. ROCK ON!!
543495
old but still a good song.....i like it