poem for the ladies, tell me what you think?
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AWWW! I LOVE IT! i love poetry that is written from the heart and that poem was! great job!!!! why aren't there more men like you out there! you're gonna make some girl very happy! :)
666947
haha written just for you and thanks for another 2 pts. \n\ni wanted to write a poem to show you that i'm sorry\nbut my poor englsh is worst then dreaded cancers,\nso in order to appologise for my mistakes\nall i could do was ask yahoo answers,\nsome stranger wrote this poem for you\nbecuase i think as bad as i write,\ni just hope you will forgive me\ncause i do not want to fight.\n\n\ntada there you go :-)
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You can go the cliche route and discuss your feelings, blah blah blah! But if you want one they'll really make her smile, then I'll give you my successful recipe: start with describing your location, don't tell show it through your words. Then start talking about smells, and her eyes, sensations, hopes and regrets etc. etc.... then move on to your thesis, pour your heart out to her, give her your heart (I'm assuming this is for a girl).... use figurative speech, and repetition. Don't tie yourself down with rhymes, and break the poem up with several stanzas.
259481
Wow, very beautiful and powerful.  I particularly love the first 3 lines as well as the lines about sending peace and love, but little hate or envy.  \n\nKeep on writing!  :)
43144
All of your poems make me want to cry! They are so beautiful, and Ashley would be proud of you and would love you soooo much if she were here to read them! You are such a loving soul, and Ashley was a very lucky girl to have ever had you in her life!!!
401359
Your poem gives me a smile. If your poems are as good as this one, i think you should publish more poems. I have heard that Xlibris will publish some quality poems. try to look into their website... in case you are interested.
50251
i have a lot but i am not gonna post them on here because people may steal them and if you really want to read some of them you can email me at soulful_lies@yahoo.com and i will email you back or you can get poems from some other person who types them here
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beautiful, if you're serious.\nCute, if you're playful :D
1006324
Hey Sweety I lefted muh comment but it was only a 'wink' if I could I'd write you a poem! \nTo wish you'd never be alone!\nOk gimme a break it's only 9:00 AM here I needs more kawfee!\n\nhttp://www.total-knowledge.com/~willyblues/
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Hey, I am so sorry that I didnt write a poem. I cant write poems very good. LOL. But I just wanted to tell you how good that poem is.I love reading poems about what others went through, and this is the best one yet! I hope everything works out between you and your ex.
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Well... this is more of a lust poem, but he may like it. A woman once gave it to me, and I was flying for days!\n\nO Blush Not So! \nby John Keats \n\nO blush not so! O blush not so! \nOr I shall think you knowing; \nAnd if you smile the blushing while, \nThen maidenheads are going. \n\nThere's a blush for want, and a blush for shan't, \nAnd a blush for having done it; \nThere's a blush for thought, and a blush for nought, \nAnd a blush for just begun it. \n\nO sigh not so! O sigh not so! \nFor it sounds of Eve's sweet pippin; \nBy these loosen'd lips you have tasted the pips \nAnd fought in an amorous nipping. \n\nWill you play once more at nice-cut-core, \nFor it only will last our youth out, \nAnd we have the prime of the kissing time, \nWe have not one sweet tooth out. \n\nThere's a sigh for aye, and a sigh for nay, \nAnd a sigh for "I can't bear it!" \nO what can be done, shall we stay or run? \nO cut the sweet apple and share it!
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How should every woman be treated\nAs if without her you're not completed\nAnd when her world is rocked with emotion\nShe should feel our unswaying devotion\nAnd when she wants more and more\nStill we'll hold that open door\nAnd when her world is coming apart\nShe will know she still has our heart\n\nI hope this get's the attention of the right girl for myself as well
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If u don't put that poem in a book , magazine.or something then u have a problem. I LOVE THAT POEM! It's like...... unexplainable. But i myself love it, i wish that i could find a intelligent,sweet, caring man like you. That is my wish. I wish you the best of Luck for who so ever you're with. She has no choice but to love!!!
247708
i like a poem with really deep poetic lines...something that moves me after reading it...something that could possibly change how i feel about a subject after reading it...
328486
You luuuuuv poetry thats for sure, to think of so much stuff is great. I like it however I find myself confused about the meaning. Are you making fun of passion or beeing coy? I think you are holding back! Don't be shy, there is alot of "passion" in your poetry. Don't hold back!
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There are a lot of poems out there.  Could you be a little more specific in what you're looking for?
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heres a couple for u ......\n\n\nYour eyes, \nthey mesmerize.\nI,m enticed\nand tantalized.\nall tongue tied,\nalmost paralyzed\nin my dreams \nyour idolized.\nin my heart\nimmortalized\nmy desires\nnearly realized\nplease lets dance\njust one more time\n\n\nIf I told you that I want you,\nWould you ever feel the same?\nIf I told you that I’m lonely,\nWould I hear you say my name?\n\nIf I told you that it’s over,\nWould you even cry for me?\nIf I told you that I’m jealous,\nWould I be all you see?\n\nIf I told you there was someone else, \nWould it really break your heart?\nIf I told you I was going away,\nWould our feelings fall apart?\n\nIf I told you that I lied to you,\nDo you think you will forget?\nIf you ever were to lie to me,\nIs it something you’d regret?\n\nIf I told you that you hurt me, \nWould you hold me while I cry? \nIf I told you that you’re beautiful, \nWould you blush because you’re shy?\n\nIf I told you all these things,\nAnd if I told you even more.\nThe love we share would be bigger,\nStronger than it was before.