Help! Correct my grammar please.?
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It probably should be "home of". Also the second sentence is a little wierd. Maybe it could read, "MBW is focused exclusively on covering female celebrities and models around the world."\n\nYou could add words such as achievements, goals and characters. If you need more words, or are looking for different words go to reference.com and use the thesaurus.
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pretty much perfect, i would change only the following:\n\nI am [removed also.  no need for it, since you have not expressed any other concerns previous to this sentence.] concerned for the safety of anyone who may be in the building at other times. There are potential dangers in a building that is under construction, [add comma] especially if the construction crew doesn’t know you are in the building.\n\nIn order to be sure the construction crew is aware of your presence [you used the phrase "in the bulding" to finish the previous paragraph.  avoid repetition.], I am asking you to please [added please.  it's both cordial and professional to say please when requesting something from employees.]sign in with the security office during non-business [added hyphen] hours. In addition, the construction crew has requested that {added "that."  grammatical.] you use the front entrance, as opposed to the east or west entrances.\n\n\nhope this helps.
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what??? english please!
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Ask the experts on this field and that would be teachers/instructors who had been teaching the English Grammar for so so so long.  Better still hear them first when they talk and ask them personally of the correct usage.
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Use Microsoft Word. This software has a built-in grammar and spell check and will make suggested corrections.
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Where! Where! Aaaaaaargh!\n\nno\n\n\nPS Well done for getting the plural right.
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Try proper English.\n\nSplooch!
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None of them.  \n\nA, C, and D are grammatically incorrect.\n\nB is wrong because the pronoun is not capitalized correctly.
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The 2nd sentence is correct and very formal; there is something like an old subjunctive form hidden in it.\nThe 1st sentence is (informally) not incorrect and could be found in British English.
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Your sentence is good as it is.  The only word I would question is "also".  (I'm guilty of over-using it also!!)  I would remove it if it isn't necessary to the meaning of the sentence.  Best of luck.
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"Grammar"\n\nIn the second half of your continueing sentence you are referring back to the first half when it should be treated as two seperate sentences at a minimum.
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english please, and check spelling
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Can you be more specific in plain english. Your grammar is horrible.
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use spell check please.
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Passing over the misuse or grammar I believe that you have a good article. You have still been able tog et your point across. Congrats
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It is incorrect, grammatically.  It should read:\n\nJohn was sitting in the reception room by the operator.\nor\nJohn sat in the reception room by the operator.
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Show a paragraph or sentence that has improper grammar and incorrect punctuation and have the students rewrite the paragraph or sentence with the proper grammar and punctuation.\n\nExample:\nPractice Sentences\n1. They be the best drawings I ever seen.\n2. Our bus arrived in miami at 320p.m., and we was very tired.\n3. Wow The beaches in Cancun are nice.\n\nAnswers:\n1. They are the best drawings I have ever seen.\n2. Our bus arrived in Miami at 3:20 p.m., and we were very tired.\n3. Wow! The beaches in Cancun are gorgeous.