Can you help me with a thesis statement?
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AIDS spreads and effects millions of people each year, by discussing the effects of aids, how it spreads and how it can be stopped one day we may see a difference in the number of cases.
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Well since you have to come up with a thesis statement that tells me your paper is more than likely supposed to be a persuassive one.  I guess you should watch the film and then decide what your arguement is then work on a thesis statement.  Research your arguement and the opposite sides arguement, then write away.\nGood luck!!!
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a project about a topic which have many refrences (as a student) .. about something new unknown and challenging (as a researcher) !!!!
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Dear Jessie,\n\nAre you looking for thesis title suggestions?\n\nHow about:\n(a) The conquest and occupation of Iraq by America is neccessary/unneccesary for the stability of the Middle East.\n\n(b) The crisis at North Korea is a threat to the stability of the Asia Pacific region.\n\n(c) The bird flu is a health risk to the human race due to the advancement of global transportation capability.\n\n(d) Global climate changes are due to man-made influences on the environment.\n\n(e) China is now called the world's factory, can this stay true for the long term?
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A divided thesis would be one that takes more than one approach to proving the thesis statement.  \n\nYour institution may have its own definition, so ask if you are unsure.\n\nA thesis statement \n- declares what you believe \n   and what you intend to prove. \n\nA good thesis statement makes the difference between a thoughtful research project and a simple retelling of facts."
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You basically decide what your thesis statement will be, the main idea your paper will be discussing/proving.  Then, you come up with a handful of facts supporting that statement and then you do the research to find the evidence to support those facts.  But, it's a long and complex process, sometimes you do a bunch of research and find out you're going down the completely wrong path...so don't put it off until the last minute.
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Handicraft sales? Are you kidding? Is there any money in that?\nChange your thesis to one that you can find information and do literature review on! Forget crafts. You must know someone in crafts or do them yourself. Market crafts to Sears or Target? Forget it! Change that thesis! Good luck\n-Howie M.Ed.
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Go to the library.\n\nUse a search engine.\n\nRe-word your STATEMENT in the form of a QUESTION.
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k, a thesis statement, is just stating what u know and what is obvious, but no one really thinks about. Like the fact that everyday we spend millions on gas and havent changed our cars engines to use vegie oil or some other type of fuel. If this is not just about gas, do the same for the other kinds of fuels. then in ur conclusion, kinda restate your thesis, and tell how you proved yourself, like go back to one of ur points and tie it into the conclusion. it is really simple, ur prob confused, sorry. hopefully i helped.
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Depends (a) what subject/s you are taking and (b)where you are based/living. I can suggest some social science and humanities professors who could help you if your thesis is in these areas.
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Just find a good way to summarize your essay. You could try several things, but my main strategy would be to stress the importance of the thesis statement of the essay in the first line, and then elaborate on it with all possible points summarized.. each of which should have been stated in the body of the essay.
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I'm MBA student  I can suggest topic for your thesis on Operation Management as Integrated Inventory-Transportation System.  However you have approached right place for thesis writing help. Thesis Specialist   http://www.thesisspecialist.com is a realiable company to get custom thesis.
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In a thesis statement or a thesis paper?  I guess in a thesis sentence you should place a condensed version of your argument that draws upon the sources and topics that are discussed in your paper.  It is your argument plus things the reader may look at that supports it.  This can be followed by an antithesis which is the opposing argument.  It makes your argument stronger by showing that you've considered more than one side, and often in the end you will have  a strong statement that is qualified and takes into account opposing sides.  I hope this helps a little!
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a good theses staement needs to have a subject(childc....) and then a specific feeling about the issue. the thesis should appear after explaning the issue, so not necisarily in the first paragraph or even the second. your best bet is to put it in the 3rd paragraph for the inroduction. this stands for a 5 to 10 page research paper.
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Yes "The French Revolution brought many changes among all four social classes" is an excellent thesis. It clearly states what your paper will be about. The only thing i would change is the fact that you need to be more specific, for example state what the four social classes are.
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I agree with Dinner Time; the thesis must be your own.  I am currently teaching thesis statements to my classes and I've been very frank that a "borrowed" thesis statement will result in a grade of zero.  You are plagiarizing if you use someone else's work without acknowledgment.  Further, trust your own thoughts; I'm sure you have something important to say on the subject.  Good luck.
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This is such an open question...you're asking for a thesis question statement from people. Why don't you make up a thesis statement and ask people on how to make it better?