What do U think about my poem?
484023
I really like your poem. It says alot about how women & young ladies are treated these days. Ladies, we are not like Burger King when it comes to men..it is either their way or no way. Be honest..How many men out there can say its' not my way honey its yours??? Most look outside of the box but they need to step back and try to figure out what the inside is all about.
860190
I am not an 'expert' on poetry but then, who is? Poetry is a very personal thing. \nAs far as your poem goes, I think it is well formed and obviously well thought out. It seems to describe what a lot of people feel in this day and age, in that we can all take something from previous experiences and it is up to us whether that is positive or negative for us and the others involved. \nI am sure that someone else will see this poem completely differently from me but even if you get negative comments do not let that dissuade you from carrying on writing.
547373
Good use of symbols. I like how line 2 fits with the last two lines, it brings unity to the poem. Towards the end I think I got a little bit of a glimpse of what the poem might be about, but ultimately I feel like the message is hidden from me. It seems the third- and fourth-to-last lines are the culmination of the poem; is it possible to reword some of the earlier lines so as the reader can share what you're feeling when they reach the end?\n\nRegarding parenthesis: as long as you know what they mean then they're fine.
444360
i can say to u thatz my best Poem...\nand the count.. of it is:\n\nBeware the fantasy that speaks,\nThe vague ideal that springs a soul.\nNo marriage can avoid the shoal\nThat lies beneath such sun-drenched peaks.\nNo love but may retreat to stone\nAs sirens sad the heart entice.\nTwo names entwine in paradise\nWhile here two lovers lie alone.
542771
Hey, I am so sorry that I didnt write a poem. I cant write poems very good. LOL. But I just wanted to tell you how good that poem is.I love reading poems about what others went through, and this is the best one yet! I hope everything works out between you and your ex.
826692
(m)\n\nNice Poem..... what happened next......
401359
Your poem gives me a smile. If your poems are as good as this one, i think you should publish more poems. I have heard that Xlibris will publish some quality poems. try to look into their website... in case you are interested.
503338
Good one :]\n\nBut one exception to your poem:\n\nI can't FORGET your funny poem.(My forgetter would become a little worse) :]\n\nHave a nice day :]
231805
the poem is very good!!!
1049444
its a beautiful poem\n10/10\nyou have a talent my darling\npursue it!\n\n\nStay Hungry, Stay Foolish
713057
the poem is really touching..i loved it,,i know u are gonna give it to ur best friend who is upset with u for some resons..am i right??all the best,i know u'll definately get the problem solved and ur best friend will come back to u if she really understands ur feelings.
331567
sounds good to me,  nice lil poem, good for a card.
1110390
sent you an em about your poem    it was nice but you seem sad
900519
This was a very good poem. I like to write poems too and I thought this one had a lot of feeling in it. You definitely get the message when you read it.
540723
I think it is good because it is graphic, shows details that can be visualized and which belong to each other; the only jarring element is 'the innermost part of our souls' because there you have left your own pictures and, although not deliberately, used a cliché.\nYour poem is much better than the one that follows oin one of the answers - by far.
399651
something u like my opinion
999685
A poem on LIFE! (just for u!)\n\nA Life Poem \nLife can seem ungrateful and not always kind. \nLife can pull at your heartstrings and play with your mind... \nLife can be blissful and happy and free... \nLife can put beauty in the things that you see... \nLife can place challenges right at your feet... \nLife can make good of the hardships we meet... \nLife can overwhelm you and make your head spin... \nLife can reward those determined to win... \nLife can be hurtful and not always fair... \nLife can surround you with people who care... \nLife clearly does offer its Up and its Downs... \nLife's days can bring you both smiles and frowns... \nLife teaches us to take the good with the bad... \nLife is a mixture of happy and sad... \n\nSo...  \n\nTake the Life that you have and give it your best... \nThink positive, be happy let God do the rest... \nTake the challenges that life has laid at your feet... \nTake pride and be thankful for each one you meet... \nTo yourself give forgiveness if you stumble and fall... \nTake each day that is dealt you and give it your all... \nTake the love that you're given and return it with care... \nHave faith that when needed it will always be there... \nTake time to find the beauty in the things that you see... \nTake life's simple pleasures let them set your heart free... \nThe idea here is simply to even the score... \nAs you are met and faced with Life's Tug of War