is anything wrong with these poems?
488692
In all honesty it is such a lovely poem but once u get to the additional info @ 2 minutes, it is a little bit too full on. I personally am a very romantic sensitive person who also writes stuff, but it goes too deep even for someone like me at that point. Despite this if a guy wrote me that poem i would go totally mushy anyway!
924467
Excellent poem. I printed it & hung it in my Living room wall.\n Thanks
813890
You can find them a couple of places. Enjoy them, because they're amazing. All sources below are good. Enjoy reading his poems.
1105261
And there are so many other oddities and absurdities about the English language.  I love sharing this poem ....\n\nWhen the English tongue we speak\nWhy is break not rhymed with freak?\nWill you tell me why it’s true\nWe say sew, but likewise few?\nAnd the maker of a verse,\nCannot rhyme his horse with worse?\nBeard is not the same as heard,\nCord is different from word,\nCow is cow, but low is low,\nShoe is never rhymed with foe.\nThink of hose and dose and lose,\nAnd think of goose and yet of choose,\nThink of comb and tomb and bomb,\nDoll and roll and home and some.\nAnd since pay is rhymed with say,\nWhy not paid with said I pray?\nThink of blood and food and good;\nMould is not pronounced like could.\nWherefore done, but gone and lone -\nIs there any reason known?\nTo sum up all, it seems to me\nSounds and letters don’t agree.\n\nAnd also the poem at this link.
747164
i think its acrostic poem..not sure though
334020
I love it, I write poetry myself, you should keep going with it :) It is very deep , Good job
214596
Is  There Something Wrong?
849706
you're ok, writing disturbing poems is not an indication that you need help... the cutting is more of a problem... keep writing what you feel and let it out
755055
i think ur usuing ur talents in the wrong way. Y dont u re read ur poem then ask ur self what is wrong with it
452357
Being a poet myself, I have to say it's a good poem, but what it's saying is you are not really dealing with the pain and hurt too well. My heart goes out to you. I hurt for you, and also, identify with you. I'm compiling a book of my poems, called "Pain On Paper". The poetry for us is a release of our pain...........keep on writing! You're doing good! Talk to somebody though, a friend, a counselor.......\nSOMEBODY! Get the pain out!!
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There are a lot of poems out there.  Could you be a little more specific in what you're looking for?
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I bet your poems are great. I can recommend to you Xlibris, a self-publishing company. They have this free publishing guide that you can request from their site. It's nice because it's free :) and also you can get an idea on how to publish your works.
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Not sure, but you could check out my poems on my yahoo 360 \n\nand post a comment and vote for your favourite!!\n\nOh ok..try the links below as well!!\n\nGood Luck\n\nJimmy
660516
A real eye opener that chills you right to the bone. A harsh reminder why those sickos need to be stopped.\nIF this poem is regarding your own life then please seek help. Don't be afraid to tell someone, a teacher, a doctor, even a trusted aunt or other relative. They WILL take you seriously and something WILL be done. Telling someone and making it stop is surely better than continuing life as you are now.
501179
I actually think this is a good poem, did you actually make this up?, if yes good job!
715159
poetry is a gift I can appreciate, cant help you on the question though, God bless
859920
lol : ) I'm sorry, I shouldn't be laughing. He is just trying his best to make you happy and expresses his feelings the best way he can to show how much love he has for you. If you tell him the truth that his poetry sucks, you are going to hurt his feelings BIG time. This is not about poetry, this is about what he is doing and the efforts he is taking to make you happy, in the best way HE can. These poetries probably take many his sleepless nights and aches of his heart and mind. I think, for you it will be only a good manner to appreciate his efforts.