if you had to write a essay on the word inhibition what would you say?
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restraint,or resistance to a thought action. As mary liked to go tanning she had inhibitions about tanning because of the links to uv rays and skin cancer and premature aging of the skin, Their for Mary restrained her self from going to the tanning salon for about a week, then mary overcame her inhibitions and went to the salon anyway.
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My suggestion is to begin the essay with the opposite point of view (from yours).  Use the additional paragraphs to discredit that argument.
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I would tell a story, a passage in time, an anecdote which changed my life. Give details, describe as though people can actually visualise it. Put adjectives, move around a bit, mimic (OK not everybody can do that but it calms your nerves at the same time).. Make it very lively, don't use long and big, elaborate sentences and go straight to the point.
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My advice for editing: a kindergartener called you a low-life inferior? use a more realistic term there... I don't know what the relevance is of the summer heat... "run" should be "ran". Get rid of the "of courses". First off, it is redundant to start two sentences in the same way back-to-back, and secondly it indicates a tone a little too casual for the essay. fix "going busting", change "can" to "could" (don't change tenses). "remembered" should be "remember", "hide" should be "hiding" .\n\nAside from all proofreading, I hate to tell you that the point of the story is moot. It is a great idea to use a story to illustrate something about yourself for college apps, but make sure that the story is applicable to what you're trying to say about yourself!\nA story about an elementary school fight is hard to relate to an epiphany about trying hard in school. Sure, you were berated, but not in a way that relates to your level of education necessarily. Maybe say something about your mother telling you to always try hard in school so that you can lift yourself to a higher place in society?\nGood luck with northeastern (if you choose it)! both my girlfriend and best friend attend, and they love it!
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naivete\n\nThat was easy.\n-MM
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I did one on pseudo-scientific experiments by Nazis during World World II.  It was absolutely repulsive but the people in my class were riveted.  Pick something that others will find interesting and that you want to share with them.  When I felt that people were really listening and thinking about what I was saying and not concentrating on me, I was a lot less nervous about being up in front of so many people.
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Poetry or writing\n(I know it sounds lame)
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Procrastination...\n\nI think. No wait.  I'll tell you later.
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I would use appearance, mannerisms, actions. \n\nI found a link that addresses the subject, also. Good luck.\nhttp://www.soulwork.net/sw_articles_eng/abnormal.htm
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It would help to know a topic.  Do you have to write on something specific, or anything you like?  Give us more details.  keep in mind that when writing an editorial, you are giving your opinion and you may be surprised/hurt when you get a negative response.
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An Ability to Resist.
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instead of messing around with something like that can you help me with my essay please?!
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calm\n\nmoderate\n\ntyphoon
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then its best to write about something pertaining to that, enlisted below are my best bets,\n\nyou can write about:\nTHE BLUES BEHIND THE TRANSITION FROM SCHOOL TO COLLEGE or\nWHAT TODAYS WORLD DEMANDS FROM GRADUATES/FRESHERS or\nWHAT QUALITIES A STUDENT SHOULD INCORPORATE IN HIMSELF TO SUCCEED IN HIGHLY COMPETITIVE ENVIRON.OF COLLEGE AND THE WORLD or\nWHAT IS THE CATALYST BEHIND EVERY ACHIEVEMENT AT COLLEGE or\nWHAT STRATEGIC TACTICS INSTITUTES TODAY SHOULD ADOPT TO CATER TO THE NEEDS OF THE WORLD or\nHOW CAN EVERY COLLEGE STUDENT PLAY A ROLE IN THE OVERALL PROGRESS OF HIS NATION or \nHOW DYNAMIC A COLLEGE STUDENT SHOULD BE TO RISE ABOVE OTHER FELLOW STUDENTS\n\nWell...........i will stop now,hope ya got the picture as to what you should write about,trust me ,an essay should be a perfect balance of yr own original views and ideas ,that armed with an elegant touch of style of presentation and conclusion will be your coup de gra'ce to the essay.\nMy winning technique is to start the essay like this: suppose you are writing about the first topic that is school-collge transition blues ,you may begin the essay like this:\n"as I pull the blinds up on the morning of my first college day \nI cant help but get a tingling feeling in my heart that this day\nhas pulled the curtains down my school days,paving way \nfor a new beginning , a new exciting phase of my life as\na student,as I embark on my journey to college today,\nI stand sillheouted against the backdrop a new dawn,but\ncant help as I watch the rising sun with a little apprehension\nas I wonder what my college life will bring?\n\nDad somehow senses my convoluted thoughts slaps my\nback,jolting me to reality ....\nEvery student has to pass through this emotionally exciting\nas well as taxing phase of his life....".(now you begin the main crux of your essay)\n\nHope you got my point,this has always been my winning technique and hope it proves to be the same for you too!!\n\nso...what put on yr thinking cap on and 'write' your way to college!\nALL THE VERY BEST!!
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Pause for a moment, try one of the following to give yourself some time to think.\n\n"That's an interesting question"  \n"I've never thought about that, let me think...."\n"Give me a moment to think about that"\n"I don't have much experience with that, what do YOU think?"\n\nThen use basic, simple words.
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i would write down how i really see the world...i would tell everyone that i still believe in fairies even though i am an adult. I would write about butterflies, the sun touching small white flowers, about ducklings paddling in the water. I would write about painful memories..the ones i am denying my soul to remember, words would reveal that i am still just a child...forcing myself to be rational and smart
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well, i could write a book on the topic, but i think it can best be summed up in one word: power.\n\nsecond word: insecurity.\n\nsomeone who's insecure about their own personal power is a dangerous person.