Would someone PLEASE proofread my very important research paper?
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I'll take a look at it. E-mail me at jpalsgaard@yahoo.com.
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Hahaha. Perfect. Get people to randomly translate your homework for you. I hope you get burned.
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good luck to you I have a friend who is writing a thesis on some boring thing as you are \nthank you
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Funny, was this torn directly from your assignment or what?\nTry using wikipedia.com or google.\nI could write your paper, but not for free !\n:-)
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It should be fine.\n\nQuestions?  Concerns?  Comments?  Email me through the link in my profile, and I'll get back to you as soon as possible.
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Show a paragraph or sentence that has improper grammar and incorrect punctuation and have the students rewrite the paragraph or sentence with the proper grammar and punctuation.\n\nExample:\nPractice Sentences\n1. They be the best drawings I ever seen.\n2. Our bus arrived in miami at 320p.m., and we was very tired.\n3. Wow The beaches in Cancun are nice.\n\nAnswers:\n1. They are the best drawings I have ever seen.\n2. Our bus arrived in Miami at 3:20 p.m., and we were very tired.\n3. Wow! The beaches in Cancun are gorgeous.
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please rephrase and give details
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The information is well presented, understandable, and technically accurate.  Very good!\n\nFollowing is editorial "nitpicking":\n\nChange page name to something more descriptive.  If I want to bookmark it, it's going to show up as just "laptop".\n\nFirst paragraph: "needs" should be "need".  Second sentence, the "basics" are affecting your decision, not your decision making process.  Last sentence, "innumerous", that's an infinite number.  Suggest rewording the paragraph as:\n\nPurchasing a laptop is a large investment that can be complicated by all of the options, manufacturers, and technical mumbo-jumbo that need to be sifted through. Before you spend a lot of money on a laptop, it is important to spend a little time considering some basics that should affect your decision. This Tech Tip will take a look at a number of things worth considering when buying a laptop computer.\n\nPoint to remember 3 -- grammar error.  Change to: "...the laptop's alternative to ..."\n\nPoint to remember 7, hyperlink to "How to Network Your Computers"\n\nParagraph following "Points..." suggest reword to "... and tendonitis are some ..."\n\nDelete extraneous comma: "...wired or wireless version and generally ..."\n\nMissing comma: "...best option, if available ..."\n\nSuggested change for easier readability: "...separate mouse for ergonomic reasons. Generally it will connect via USB. "\n\nMissing "to": "...starting to feature Bluetooth technology,..."\n\nTense mismatch: "...user to navigate his way to these ..." which isn't politically correct.  :(  How about, "it is up to you to ..."  Tech writers are trending towards use of the second-person, "you", instead of the more formal, stuffy, academic, third-person, "the user".  You've used "you" elsewhere.  It fits your friendly, accessible style.  Stick with it!\n\nSuggested change for easier readability: "..ATI is well known for their high performance graphics products.  They offer ..."\n\nExtra hyphen: "condi-tions"\n\nA general comment, you tend towards long sentences, which is natural because you are thinking of a lot of things at once.  Try to vary between long and short.  It makes your work easier to read.  That is the theory behind some of the suggestions I've made as "readability" changes.\n\nWhew!  Lot of work for two points!  :)\n\nGood luck with your site!
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Please try to check your grammar before posting your question...
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Well, how can we guide you better than this guide does?  So, you have to revise your paper, and how can we help you without having your paper to examine, to see where you went astray?  Did your teacher mark your paper in this and that spot, pointing out where you slipped up?  Are there any comments that were made in writing on the paper or verbally?\n\nI don't see how you can get any significant help with this from what you have posted...we don't even know what the subject of the paper is.
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thanks for that :)\nthat was really interesting to read..\nkeep up the good work
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Please trade your enthusiasm for hunting for an enthusiasm for grammar.\nOh, and to answer your question, NO!
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Dear Madame, \n\n1. Asking the opinions of the contributors of this forum for a research paper isn't in your best interest. There's no telling what kind of psychos you're going to come into contact with.\n\n2. It is politically incorrect for me to tell you where to stand on this issue. I guarantee that you will fail your paper, if you don't put your --ve researched the topic, and become even more knowledgeable.\n\n4. If you don't believe/know about a particular stance, don't take that stance. This only shows your ignorance. \n\n5. Please read my book for more information: "Guns don't kill people, fetuses do."\n\n--Pianoguy