can u help me make my personal statement?
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No offense, but if you have to solicit help on the internet to write your personal statement, than maybe you're not quite ready for college. Or, maybe you should ask those who know you well for help. \n\nI will give you one bit of advice, though: don't substitute "u" for "you" in your statement.
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if you give me a day and a half i will write it for you, it's actually a paper i wrote last semester and got an A- on.\n\ni need to rework it just a bit and i'll post it Friday night. so go out and code up your myspace page or buy some shoes or go drink, whatever, i'll hook you up.
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It is likely that there are books on writing college admissions essays in your public library.  My gut feeling is that if the essay is a personal statement, it should not have a title.  If the school asked you to write an essay on a particular topic, perhaps a title would be appropriate.  I still think you should look at some examples in a book.
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fill out an application!!!!!!!!!! duh
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note card. Label them properly according to source and subject, and they will be immensely helpful to you.\n\nGood luck.
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Begin with Dear Formal Name.  Before you start, answer these 4 questions in complete sentences.  This might sound silly, but it is quite effective.\n\n1.  What is my topic?\n\n2.  What is the purpose of this essay?  Complete:  I want to _________________.  \n\n3.  Who is my audience?\n\n4.  Write your "working" thesis statement (to be tweaked in revision).  \n\nEven though it sounds silly, this is one of the most important parts of organizing an essay.  We often have an idea of what we want to write, and may think we are quite focused.  However, I often find that I wasn't really as focused as I thought when I complete this simple worksheet.  \n\nSince this is a letter, you want to keep it short.  Choose three specific points to argue.\n\nWrite an outline.  Yes, I really do write outlines for important letters.  \n\nDon't wait until the last minute.  Allow time for at least 3 revisions.  Also, you should allow enough time to "walk away" for 24 hours before the last revision.  That way you view it with a fresh mind.  \n\nPROOFREAD!!!!  \n\nUse the first person as little as possible.  That is sometimes difficult in a letter, but it can be accomplished.  Do NOT begin a sentence with "I think."  Ther reader knows you think it.  Otherwise you would not be saying it.  \n\nEven those this is a letter, it is still formal writing.  Therefore you should eliminate the 2nd person altogether during revision.  \n\nThis sounds like an important letter, so you should take the time to really polish it up.  The more professional you sound, the more seriously you will be taken.  \n\nGood luck!
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don't be lazy. try contacting some women's network groups like 'unique' get a 5 minute interview and there's your essay
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I’d outline the points that I want to make.  Start off with a sentence or two that summarizes your position.\n\nList the points in chronological order (Don't include the numbering system)\n\nFinish by making a similar summary to the opening one that emphasizes your thesis.  For example:\n\nFaith in the one, true God and understanding that His love assures us that He has our best interest in mind provides believers with security and protection from depression.  \n\nPoint 1)\n\nPoint 2)\n\nChronic depression often finds it’s root in fearful anxiety and an understanding of God’s love can alleviate the effect of fear and replace that uncertainty with the confidence and assurance necessary to live a full and productive life.\n\nJohnny
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if u r writing on some situation then try to imagine urself in that situation .write accordingly .... suppose you r writing on and public place then imagine you r present on that place and write what u see and how u feel.\nif u r writng on ny celebrity then u hv to start with introduction abt that personality ,why u like it and then it's personal history...\nremember introduction and coclusion should b writtne with good ,impressive language....\njot down all the point that came into your mind regarding that topic. arrange then in particular order and then elaborate it.\ndo ur best and gud luck.....   :)
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You can get someone that knowns you personally to write it in your behalf!!!!
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I would love to help you. Along with your essay, make a small project like a tree, and how each BRANCH(get it) works. Unfortunatly, You waited until last minute. I have done that; it is not the way to go
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Something that will make you stand out among all the other applicants.  Something that will make them remember you.  If your educational goal has to do with something you experienced, discuss that.  Explain how it brought you to your decision to major in whatever.  Try to relate a personal story with your decision.  Don't forget to include why you want to go to that particular university.  This isn't a statement all about you - it's about you and why you want to go there.  Is their a particular program you are interested in - and why.  A particular instructor's research?  Why this university?  Tailor your statement to each particular university you are applying to.  \n\nMost importantly - don't forget proper grammar, sentence structure and spelling.  Have someone else review your final copy.  No errors!
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Be creative about it.  A lot of people start by introducing themselves.  I started mine with a quote from a poem.
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Yes sure I can .But you need to give me a little more details.\nAnd I will gladly help you in making it
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tell her 2 make lists!!! i was so stressed out last wk. had to finish my personal statement, start revision for january modules,  do normal work for my courses and still be awake and alert for work at the weekends.\n\nJust make alot of lists - what you want to accomplish, when, break down large topics. With the personal statement BRAINSTORM!!! The first sentence is usually the hardest to think of. Try a quote maybe. But dont start with 'I' or 'My' eg, 'I would like to study.....' as it just sounds blah!!\nWish her gd luck frm me!!
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Do a usefull topic like, "How I spent my Grammar Class and why I speak so well today"  !!!  Not to mention your stellar writing skills.  :0
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I would be happy to help you write your essay.  Please pick a topic that you are familiar with.  Have you ever been to the fair or public library?  Well, which ever situation you have been in tell me and we will get started.  You can reply to this message by clicking on my name or pic and then clicking the contact coloryst button.  Best wishes