what u think of my song?
358216
i love it. your a true star. i would buy it a billion times.go you. my daughter and husband loves it too.keep on rapping.i love the whole thing. add a little more and you got a great hit.
1177048
Not bad.\n\n\n--- LeeeN
903921
I like the song. The video looks kind of cheesy though ;)\nThe album is called "Believe" by the way!
163215
I was skeptical, but I went to your site.  Your ballads are awesome.  I like Someday the best, because it is soulful, almost "blusey".  Say What You Mean reminded me of the Beatles.  You HAVE to include How Can I Miss You.  Not because it's great music--because it is novel and will get a chuckle.  That will be the one to make you rich if you make it.  Whether you give me any free music, I am inclined to buy a track or two.  I pray for your success--you have something good going there.  Do you write your own music?
300186
I like that song\n\nHappy Birthday!!!!
846974
Natasha Bedingfield - Unwritten\nI hope u like it! ;)
598445
You have very good meter. The words seem to roll effortlessly off of the tongue. KEEP AT IT. I love the rhymes. \n\nI also like the mood you set up with your words. To be very honest, your lyrics are much better than alot I have read. I am not just being nice, either.\n\nAs a songwriter/arranger/musician myself, it is refreshing to read a good piece of material. Like I said before, KEEP AT IT. Good job.\n\nPeace and chicken grease\nJon
157505
Its really not bad.  For only 13 you do show a lot of talent.  It shows both love and hardship.  I would give it a 7.5.  If you are planning on giving it to a girl though, I would try something on the more lighter side.  Girls like sappy.  Also, submit your poem to poetry.com.  Its free and you get a free copywrite for it.  Good job
970500
A bit repetitive, but then lots of songs are.\nIf you penned it, keep it up. Everyone starts somewhere.
749598
I like how u think...
964797
Hi, great song. you can watch it on you tube\n\nhttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3zD9W9SZj9w\n \nhope this helps
523567
I personally find it annoying, but my sisters love it.\n\nIt's a dance song; it would be perfect for your talent show. Good luck!
1129277
Oh my gosh!!!!!!!!\nThat's is a way better song than what I wrote.\nI love it!!!!!!!!!\nWhat's your inspiration for this song?\nLove it!\nLove it!\nLove it!
1127733
what songs do u want I have a few, email me if u like fi19817@btinternet.com
629577
i dunno, but i like da song!
807283
It's interesting, as a poem I would have stopped at struggle to change as a song its fine to continue, Some grammatical and punctuation errors, I would accept it as a work in progress. :-) good luck and keep writing
275264
listen to ur fav song