Grammer - essay help!! URGENT!?
359939
Let's start with spelling, Grammar not Grammer.
202099
It depends on what the instructor asked you to do. If he wants in MLA form (which is most likely) then you need to use the parenthetical within text. But if he doesn't care (highly unlikely) then go ahead and put it in the end/footnotes, but I highly suggest documenting it in the text like in MLA.
727597
Have someone you know help you form a full sentence and use correct punctuation...I don't have a clue what the hell you just tried to ask!
817190
instead of messing around with something like that can you help me with my essay please?!
635806
Sounds like an essay.\n\nDo your own homework.
662941
None because:\n\n1.) There are robots all around making our lives easier.\n(took out comma)\n\n2.) There are robots all around, which make our lives easier.\n(added comma)\n*Note: This seems to be incorrect, so I will say that the answer MAY be #2, depending on how you were taught English.\n\n3.) There are robots all around; they make our lives easier.\n(changed comma into semicolon)
373024
MAKE AN OUTLINE THEN GET FACTS. GET A TUTOR THAT CAN HELP YOU. TYPE IN ESSAY WRITTING TIPS AND SEARCH. IM SURE YOU CAN FIND SOMETHING THERE TO HELP. GOOD LUCK.
661492
http://www.english-at-home.com/  (a good Web site)\n\nhttp://www.englishclub.com/grammar/index.htm (on all of these.. be sure to click on the links on either side of the page.. the links have GREAT information.. verbs, etc etc)
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Do you prefer it grammatically correct to the last detail??? I can't edit it right now. My head's really aching but here's some criticism:\n\n1) lots of fragments... like \n\n\n"And in this way you create an environment that everybody can't easily spoil with their Farsi witticism."\n\n"Second, bring up various and brand new subjects."\n\n""While I was already a member."\n\n2) She (is she a girl or a boy?)used transistional devices such as FIRST, SECOND, but no FINALLY or LASTLY\n\n3) "By the way, I tried writing something in the club and it just wouldn't permit it."\n\nIN REFERRING TO THE CLUB AS AN ACTION DOER, SHE SHOULD HAVE USED "THEY"\n\n"By the way, I tried writing something in the club and they just wouldn't permit it."\n\n4) wrong use of clauses\n\n\ncan't think anymore.my head's killing me...need to take some pills..\n\n\n\ngenerally, I think when she was writing this letter, it took her a very long time before actually finishing it...hmmmm.....
687276
try google to search your word.  \n\ndictionary to get the meaning, \n\nlibrary to find out.\n\ngood luck on your essay.
665969
man, I'm the worst human in the earth in grammar\nI really wish that the scientists made a small chips\nthat we can put it in the head and make us able to write a clear sentence without any mistake in grammar ... :D
593423
I like that you suggest a solution; that is the strongest part of your essay. In fact, I think you should lead with this idea and not spend time explaining the situation. Explain why the hours work with any existing statistical evidence that would indicate teenagers are more likely to get in an accident (passengers present) after 10:00 PM and why it is okay to extend that on a weekend. \n\nEven if you don't rewrite, be sure to have someone edit your essay for correct punctuation and grammar. I saw several mistakes that are easily fixed. Excellent attention to detail will make your essay stand out. \n\nBest of luck in your law class!
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I have a couple grammar suggestions for you:\n\n- I'm not sure if this happened because of Yahoo or if you typed it in this way, but you should only have capital letters at the beginning of a sentence or for proper nouns (like for a person's name, or for a place name like "Paris", or for a product name like "Colgate").\n\n- Also, punctuation is VERY important.  If you don't clearly punctuate your writing, it is hard to understand.  For example, make sure that you have periods at the end of each of your sentences so that readers will know where one thought starts and another thought begins.\n\nIn terms of the clarity of this paragrpah, I here are my thoughts:\n\n- Figure out what the main thing that you're trying to say in this paragraph is, and make sure to state that CLEARLY in your first sentence.  This helps the reader to know what to expect to read in the paragraph.  Based on what you're writtetn, in sounds like your main point is something about how advertising, especially TV advertising, has the potential to influence people's behavior.  I would use the next few sentences to explain, generally, how television advertisements have the potential to influence people (I would do this by explaining how advertising companies target certain ads to certain audiences during certain programs, etc).  I would then say "For example..." and use your example of the Colgate commercial having the potential to influence a child to behave like the child he or she saw in the commerical.  I would then suggest that you have a sentence at the end of your paragrpah that conlcudes your ideas and helps to prepare the reader for what he/she will read in your next paragraph (if there is one).\n\nHope this helps!!
365165
grammar not grammer. You put the comma anywhere your little heart desires. Grammar is power. Don't be a semi colon when you can be a full colon.
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You're doing great!  The one English Language Learner error I consistently see is your difficulty with using articles (a, an, the).\n\nReview your writing and ask yourself the following as you do it: Does every singular noun have an article? Does every plural noun in the subject of the sentence have "the" in front of it?\n\nExamples:\n\nA dog      is eating    a bone.\nA dog      is eating    bones.\nThe dogs   are eating   a bone.\nThe dogs   are eating   bones.\n\nNote the Subject of each sentence (the first noun) always has an article. Note that the Object of each sentence (the second noun) has an article if it is singular.\n\nA proper noun (people and places individual names) does not take articles.\n\nOf course, it being English, there are always exceptions to any grammar rule...lol. But if you follow this, in general, your "sound" in your writing will improve dramatically.\n\nHope that helps!  But like I said before, except for this (and a couple of spelling errors), your English is excellent!
1044944
get some education, your grammer sucks!!!
153273
can u please write it more clearer\n? so we could answer....good luck!