Write a poem about a fish--make it a love poem.?
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On a quiet beach I walked alone,\nI didn't want to be\nThen I noticed something strange,\nA Fish was next to me.\nHalf of her was fish and fin\nThe top was woman (perfect skin).\nWe talked till the tide was leaving her dry\nThen I had to say goodbye.\nShe swam away and I still wish\nI had said "I love you fish".
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It's interesting, as a poem I would have stopped at struggle to change as a song its fine to continue, Some grammatical and punctuation errors, I would accept it as a work in progress. :-) good luck and keep writing
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In your heart.  It would be way better than someone else's even if your not a regular poet, just poetically tell him what you want him to know.
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Not sure, but you could check out my poems on my yahoo 360 \n\nand post a comment and vote for your favourite!!\n\nOh ok..try the links below as well!!\n\nGood Luck\n\nJimmy
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Here is a poem, but please use it only as inspiration:\nO' to hear the birds chirping, tweet, tweet!\nIt is such a lovely sound, O' so sweet.\n\nThis is what your teacher wants, but please write your own.
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Something simple, like\n"ten poems I like"\nOr "a dozen poems, minus two"
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Very nice...you little romantic.......a poem or a song?\n\nYou wrote this....I love it!!!!!
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http://www.poemsforfree.com/thanpo.html\n\nBrowse their selection and pick the one best suited for your situation.
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An eye care poem? Really? That's a pretty specific request.\n\nI suggest you find a love poem on the internet, and eveytime you see the words "I LOVE YOU" replace them with "EYE WASH IN A WARM SALINE SOLUTION".\n\nOr something like that.
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I think this is a great question (opportunity really) to get some of us closet writers to post our own writing...maybe even get some fun feedback, or just enjoy reading some other writer’s work as well. So, thanks for the chance. Well here is one of my earlier poems:\n\n"A Passing, Sulfur-Green Passion"\n\nThose green eyes, once filled with rage-rampant fire,\nFueled a whim obsessed fervor that partook of every desire.\n\nNot once did any glance go unrewarded in a closed-door fashion—\n   A youthful body withered by long nights of unprotected (un-sustained) passion. \n\nFeeling ephemeral stares, \nImagining they seek out what lurks behind badly salt-stained eyes, omens-old\nShe is forever surrounded by sulfur-smoke, \nLost in sustained moment of grey-cold.\n \nAnd those wet orbs cannot receive a spark of compassion\n \n   For anyone’s love.
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Maybe collect some photos or other artwork (digital images of course) that go with the imagery in the poem, timed to an audio track of you or someone else reading selected passages. \n\nIf you also have to give background info, images of Whitman, the first edition of the book, etc. might be useful with bullet points outlining key themes, dates, facts, quotes, interpretations, or whatever you feel is most important.
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Good Poem.......lots of potential! Keep it up!! Good Luck on the girlfriend too.....she's out there!!
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Here's a little poem I wrote for a dear friend whom I love so: The Song of Love\n\nSo many a time has a woman passed by \nand cause my eyes to yearn.\nMany a lady has my senses stunned \nand my body began to burn. \n\nBut these are the things that fade with time,\nthe beauty we all croon. \nWe live, look, admire, and smile\nand nature sings its tune.\n\nThere’s another song that wells within; \nit’s magic I must presume.\nFor its sound fills the voids \nfor which nature can’t consume.\n\nThe song is passion and is full of strength\nand ruled by desires within. \nIt falters and fades if we let it \nand leaves us empty again. \n\nThere is a song that is stronger \nand can be awakened still.\nIts name is love and is fragile \nand comes out of a humble will.\n\nIt gives when none is given\nand lives on when all is lost.\nIt waits in patience as long as it must \nand stays even if there’s a cost.\n\nIt judges not by eyes or ears \nand has no need to boast.\nIt deeply looks into the soul\nand gives comfort to most.\n\nI hear the song of love, \nits rhythm and its rhyme.\nIt is sweet to those who know it\nand stands the test of time.
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Awesome poem! I like the way it flows, and how you put feeling into the poem. Kick-A**-Tic. Let me know if you write any more. ROCK ON!!
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only if he wrote the poetry himself, that'll be sssoooo romantic..;D
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have you tried making up a poem yourself? make a list of things that you love about your fiancee and work that into a poem.  it would be heartfelt because it came from you!\n\ngood luck
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is this your homework? tell your thoughts on the poems, what they make you think of, feel, discuss use of symbols.Like in the 1st you can talk about the use of the bird, state if you beleive in the message in the dream.The second discusses emotion, talk about that.And as for #3 tell how it sets a good mood about friendship.