how ami doind so far with my essay.? its about coal?
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Well, it's pretty great so far...except I think you should put a little bit more vocabulary - spice up the whole thing, and knock off your teacher's socks! Use a thesaurus if you can't think of any good words to replace lame ones!
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What about it?  \n\nPick a point to your essay and write it.  Use what you've learned in class and away you go.  100 words is only like 10 sentences.  Not too hard.  Good luck to you.
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is this piece of homework still due?
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I am not impressed with your paper.  You should do more research and write more than two sentences.
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It will probably take you three pages on a standard letter sized page.  Good luck with your essay :)!!!!
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I wrote a long essay about it \n\nhttp://www.jimmyr.com/Ruska.James.History1301.24312.CommonSense.rtf
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These sites should do it for you.  Good luck with your essay.
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You want us to write your management essay for you? Are you serious? OK fine, here is my critical analysis:\n\n"Privatization is bad. The whole thing was a mistake. What's a PSU?"\n\nHand that in. I promise you an A+.
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In the introduction, give a general idea of the issue, question, or ideas you are going to write about. It's especially good if you can get in a "hook" or attention grabber to capture people's interest. For example, "By the year 2060, ninety percent of the country of Bangladesh may be underwater."\nIn the conclusion, summarize your point of view and bring closure to the essay.  \nHere's a website with hints on essay writing.\nhttp://members.tripod.com/~lklivingston/essay/
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To start out my essays I usually question the reader...that way they will think about what it is they will be reading. Or sometimes try to start with a statistic or interesting fact so that they will be interested in reading your essay.\n'What are some things you think may put out a fire ? Household materials are proven to work during a fire emergency, such as baking soda ,salt,flour......."  Then you could keep on with what you wrote. If this is a 5 paragraph essay though you would need more than an intro. sentence.If its a 5 paragraph essay you can think about using \n'What are some things that you think may put out a fire ? Some household materials are proven to work.In the next few paragraphs you will find out what some of these materials are.\nAlthough they are simple materials that you can probably find next to you in the kitchen you will find this information helpful to know. Also here you will read about a controlled experiment that will determine which liquid or material turns out the fire faster.' \n That is just an idea that you can use for your introduction paragraph. Then after the Introduction paraghraph you can re- write exactly what you have already done. For the thesis paragraph you have to prove whether what you hypothsised was correct or not. After you get your result you can do your thesis paragraph. * one thing though....i would reconsider in trying to put out a fire with gasoline....just to be on the safe side. Hope that this all helped !!! \n\n^-^ :-)
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Wow, things have surely changed since I was in school. Requiring a 3rd grader to write an essay, that was unthinkable a few years ago. We had to write papres about "What I did on my summer vacation" but not essays. Try this website, it's called How to Write an Essay:\nhttp://www.english.bham.ac.uk/staff/tom/teaching/howto/essay.htm
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What will you be addressing in your essay?  I'm assuming you are addressing the pros/cons?  \n\nAdd more detail to your question and I will come back and respond.
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Coal is not animal. It is not vegetable. There is only one thing left. Mineral. Deduction. It works.
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writing an essay is my guess\nit really sucks to be u \nand ill just point out that least and most contradict each other\ngood luck on the paper with those grammer skill\nno, i am a nice person\nsomewhere in the shriveled black heart lies some sympathy\nnow back on topic:\n\n1.  ecosystems are balanced, and all species share resources with other species, and are dependent on each other because if one side eats too much, there is less food for the others, adn they die\n\n2.   an ecosystem is everything that life has anything to do with.  So, if say a human pollutes the air, a plant cannot breate, the herbivore cannot eat, adn everybody dies again\n\n3. humans recieved this most wonderful gift of travel, but the rest of the animal world hates us for it now.  what i am saying, since really nothing stops a human from adapting the habitat to fit in.  we are really quite good at fitting in.  so, natural restrictions that normally limit a species from entering, dont even trip us.  We come into hte place and take space away from others, effectively pushing species onto each other, and they compete for the things htey need even if there is not enough, they then adapt and we futher evolution\n\nin the end it is all about resources, and competition (try Darwin)\ni hope my rambling helped
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ok, post your essay and we will read it!
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I would rate this essay a B.  There were quite a few grammatical errors and essay rule errors as listed below that I would change to bring up the grade:\n\nDo not use contraction.  In order change it's to it is, wouldn't to would not, don't to do not, let's to let us, doesn't to does not, wasn't to was not, doesn't to does not, you'll to you all, don't to do not, let's to let us and don't to do not.\n\n1st paragraph - 2nd line - ambitious teacher she (change she to who) - charming wife. Mrs. Lana Neville. to charming wife named Mrs. Lana Neville.  Mrs. Lana Neville by itself is not a sentence. 3rd line - question to questions - 5th line - I would change teaches grade one through grade 10 to teaches grades one through ten.  You shouldn't use one actual number and one number word, but you're also not supposed to used actual numbers for the lower numbers so you should use both word numbers. - 6th line - impressed of the skills should be impressed by the skills and she show us should be she shows us and place a comma after So.\n\n2nd paragraph - line 2 - place a comma after moreover and make it one word and change her to she - line 3 - stay on should say stay out of - line 4 - place a comma after otherhand and make it one word and place a period after campus and begin She thinks it as a new sentence.\n\n3rd paragraph - lline 2 - place a comma after In addition - line 3 - boys then should be boys than and you should say she has a harder time instead of she has harder time - last line last word - sake should be sakes because you're talking about more than one boy.\n\n4th paragraph - line 1 - place a comma after predictably and defiantly should be definitely and graphic should be plural (graphics) - line 2 - weather is mispelled in this context - it should be whether - line 4 - be ware is one word - beware and miss behave is one word - misbehave and quite should be quiet - line 5 - there should be a comma after students and but in should be but at - line 6, place a comma after well - line 7 - foward for should be forward to and a astonishing should be an astonishing and place a comma between year and which.\n\nParagraph 5 - line one - place the word a between had and really - line 2 - Put Let us before the word hope and expectation should be plural (expectations) - acheivable year is high should be achievale year are high because expectations is plural changing is to are.  Make Just do not worry one sentence and begin Do your best as another sentence.\n\nI hope this helps out.
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