to all girls rate my poem?
138229
awww a solid 9!!!and a half lol
410218
www.netpoets.com/poems/friends
755055
i think ur usuing ur talents in the wrong way. Y dont u re read ur poem then ask ur self what is wrong with it
980984
nice poem is it a haiku
1131998
it sounds pretty good!!  youre creative--I could never do something like that--and your lyrics are soo true!! :)  keep it up you are doing great!\n\ngood job!
488692
In all honesty it is such a lovely poem but once u get to the additional info @ 2 minutes, it is a little bit too full on. I personally am a very romantic sensitive person who also writes stuff, but it goes too deep even for someone like me at that point. Despite this if a guy wrote me that poem i would go totally mushy anyway!
102856
I wrote this poem when me and my little girl's father went our own way, I hope you like it and it will help you,\n\nA BEAUTIFUL WOMEN.\nWe went through so much,\nI can't thank you enough.\nYou gave me the best thing that you could give.\nMy gorgeous little girl,\nand she's getting so big.\nNo matter what you did, the things you do,\ndeep down inside, I do love you.\nAll the love that I had, all the love that you gave,\ncan not underestimate, the pain that's within!\nThat's why we have to go our own separate ways,\nlive our lives our own little ways.\nAs hard as it is going to be for me to leave,\nI know that it's the best thing that ever could be.\nFor you my man are a wonen's man,\nand I need the love of just one man.\nI hope that we can go our ways,\nour friendship is one thing that will always stay.\nCause we will always be together no matter what we do!\nfor we have something that is half me, and the other half is you. \nOUR DAUGHTER, she will live through it, \nand it will not jeopardize her life in the end.\nWe will show her nothing but love,\nand that you and me will always be friends,\ngive her the strength for her to go on,\nher own way of life having so much fun.\nKnowing she has a mother and a father when ever she needs one.\nThis will be the only thing that I ask from you,\nso she will know her parents did the best they could do.\nTo keep the love they had so strong.\nFor her to turn out to be a Beautiful Women.\n                                       Tiffany Smith.
802222
Honestly?  I think the poem is too gushy.  If you'd been dating for a while, it'd be great -- but from an anonymous person, the parts about "you're irreplaceable to me" and "my heart will never stop beating  . . ."  are a little creepy.\nI would change it to:\n\nWhen I think of the perfect girl,\nYou come instantly to mind\n\nWith the intellect of a genius,\nEyes that sparkle like gems,\nHair as soft as silk,\nAn angelic voice that sings beautiful melodies to my ears,\nCheeks as adorable and round,\nAnd a smile that lights up even the darkest room\nIt's obvious you are God's work of art\n\nYou're an amazing girl, an amazing person\nSo special to me\nAnd my heart beats gladly\nFor it lives off these feelings I have for you\n\nGood luck!
1006324
Hey Sweety I lefted muh comment but it was only a 'wink' if I could I'd write you a poem! \nTo wish you'd never be alone!\nOk gimme a break it's only 9:00 AM here I needs more kawfee!\n\nhttp://www.total-knowledge.com/~willyblues/
1039242
curled inside your heart\ni want to hide like the pearl\ni felt like saying this many a times\nthat how i wish , you were my girl\n\nadd some much to it with refrences to some special moments you shared with her and whoa! your poem will be ready.
111934
Better than some of my poems, and I used to think I was pretty good. I like your style better though.
401359
Your poem gives me a smile. If your poems are as good as this one, i think you should publish more poems. I have heard that Xlibris will publish some quality poems. try to look into their website... in case you are interested.
157505
Its really not bad.  For only 13 you do show a lot of talent.  It shows both love and hardship.  I would give it a 7.5.  If you are planning on giving it to a girl though, I would try something on the more lighter side.  Girls like sappy.  Also, submit your poem to poetry.com.  Its free and you get a free copywrite for it.  Good job
993368
I hope you can take constuctive criticism. I think you're thoughts are good but it's too Rhymie. It's more like a limerick than a poem. And I personally don't like that 3rd line, "People near me makes my fun." I don't understand that.\n\nSorry for the honesty!
259481
Wow, very beautiful and powerful.  I particularly love the first 3 lines as well as the lines about sending peace and love, but little hate or envy.  \n\nKeep on writing!  :)
548590
That was amazing. If you wrote this you have an immense amount of talent. You seem to know what you want to say and have a perfect way of putting in on a piece of paper. You should go to www.howtowritepoetry.com and enter it in their contest. I think that was a beautiful poem and you should continue writing because you have pure natural talent that i think people can relate to and are touched by because i know i was.
913647
i love your poems i wish i could write poem that well