i need help correcting sentences on grammer?
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No,Mr.Burns, you should mail your request for reservations to: 515 North Drive Highway, South Bend, Indiana  46637
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First, let me suggest a great book called "Eats, Shoots, Leaves" by Lynn Truss. I think you would appreciate it.\n\nSecond, let me embarrass myself by tackling your sentence.\n\n(H)ey, what(')s or what is up with my gramm(a)r?\n\nThose were the obvious errors. Of course, I reserve the right to find more, but that is it for now.
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That is correct English, do not try to change it, just remember it, English is a majority rule language, and you are in a definite minority, so, tough luck, if you want to change English grammar rules keep using it and if it gets accepted, well done, till then, tough
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There are three errors in this sentence. What are they?\n\nThere are only two grammatical errors, so the false statement is the third error.
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No grammar error, but its awkward. Try this: "This article is written entirely in French"
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1. u put the semicolons after Oregon and California\n2. it's they're instead of their and its Scobee's an also their's should be theirs\n3. Quotation before Upon and after the ?\n4. " after the period is all i could see wrong
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one about correct comma placement?
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After reading your question my recommendation is that you buy a book on spelling, grammar, and sentence structure.  You will then learn the following things:\n\n1.  First letters of sentences should always be capitalized.\n2.  The word "should" only has one "o".\n3.  Personal pronouns (such as "I") are always capitalized.\n4.  The words "best" and "friend" are two separate words--not one.\n5.  The word "friend" has an "e" in it.\n6.  Your use of the word "have" is an error. called "subject-verb agreement"--your choice does not agree.  You should have used the word "has."\n7.  The word "woman" is not spelled with an "e".\n8.  You have written two sentences as one--this is called a run-on sentence.\n9.  You do not need a period AND a question mark.\n\n\nWow, only 19 words and nine errors.  Hopefully, this boyfriend you seek is not very smart, because if he is he is going to run from you like you have a rifle.
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Please learn to compose a sentence that makes sense.
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need to pas spelling first
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Sentence number 2 is correct.\n\nThe reason sentence 1 is not correct is because it has a dangling participle. In other words, the participle cannot distinguish what it wants to describe. \n\nIt could be that you realize how much different you have been than before (like in sentence 2)\nOR------\nit could be that you realize how FREQUENTLY you have been different than before.\n\nIf you read sentence 1, you will realize that both senerios could be true. \n\nHope this helps\nThanks\nJon
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http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/\nhttp://englishplus.com/grammar/\nhttp://andromeda.rutgers.edu/~jlynch/Writing/\nhttp://www.wsu.edu/~brians/errors/errors.html\nhttp://www.englishpage.com/\n \nGood luck
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Do you prefer it grammatically correct to the last detail??? I can't edit it right now. My head's really aching but here's some criticism:\n\n1) lots of fragments... like \n\n\n"And in this way you create an environment that everybody can't easily spoil with their Farsi witticism."\n\n"Second, bring up various and brand new subjects."\n\n""While I was already a member."\n\n2) She (is she a girl or a boy?)used transistional devices such as FIRST, SECOND, but no FINALLY or LASTLY\n\n3) "By the way, I tried writing something in the club and it just wouldn't permit it."\n\nIN REFERRING TO THE CLUB AS AN ACTION DOER, SHE SHOULD HAVE USED "THEY"\n\n"By the way, I tried writing something in the club and they just wouldn't permit it."\n\n4) wrong use of clauses\n\n\ncan't think anymore.my head's killing me...need to take some pills..\n\n\n\ngenerally, I think when she was writing this letter, it took her a very long time before actually finishing it...hmmmm.....
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get some education, your grammer sucks!!!
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Go to high school. Learn english grammer.  Ask question again.
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Huh? What are you trying to ask here? You need serious help with your grammar skills. Maybe you should ask for help with your grammar instead.
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learn how to spell and learn how to form proper sentences!