we had to write a poem, and i had folded my poem in half, and put it between a peice of paper, only after i gave it to him, did i realize that it was my entry for my diary explaning, when & where i wanted to do suicide, well he's only stared at me, he hasn't confronted me or anything. guidance hasn't called me down, i was wondering why?
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It's hard in a situation like that.  I coach fifteen year old girls and I had a similar incident and I wasn't sure how to go about helping her.  It took me awhile to try and get her help because I wanted to make sure and have the best action plan.
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He couldn't have wrote the suicide note. He was clenching the pen in his hand right? Well if the cause of death was cyanide then he couldn't have been CLENCHING the pen..... all of his muscles were limp! :)
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hmmm...sounds like a suicide attempt. I  wanted to ignore your post, but I want to tell you, there's counselors in almost every community.  \nSeek help and don't slice that wrist.
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I'm not sure what you are saying because your question is not clear.  If you have some sort of financial agreement with this person you would have needed to get it in writing not a verbal agreement.  \n\nI would send a new question in and be very clear the way you ask.  It almost sounds like you are saying you had an agreement involving your friends suicide, thats just bizarre.
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The poet has just given the description of the house in the poem and all inferences are left to the reader.\n\nIts a poem in which on the bare description is given, no thoughts or ideas of the poet reflect in it.\n\nNow, you write your own synopsis of the poem
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Many people think about suicide when they are hurting. They just want the pain to stop, be it physical or emotional. I haven't done this myself but I once watched a friend try to kill herself without being able to lift a finger to help! She ran across two lanes of traffic than got down on her knees and sommersaulted across the meridian and two more lanes of traffic. When she got to the other side (thank god!) she turned around and sommersaulted her way back again. There were too many cars passing for me to do anything but grab her before she could try it again for a third time. She had a guardian angel looking after her that day. They say God takes care of fools and drunks and I believe it now! I swear I lost five years off my own life that day, watching her go! She was horrified at what she'd done when she sobered up of course. Friends should always stick with friends when they are trying to drown their sorrows. You never know what they might take it into their heads to do while they are intoxicated. Not that I was much help at the time! It all happened so fast that I was caught flatfooted. You are lucky your friend was there to help you and I'm glad that you appreciate it, and that you are both still good friends. Many people avoid others after displaying such abberrant behaviour in front of them. That's what happened with me and my friend. I reminded her too much of what she'd tried to do and she was ashamed. Not that I said anything mean to her about it, but she only had to see me to remember everything and she didn't want to be reminded.
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In the last line change you'll to YOU. It sounds like your forcing this person to stay in ur life.\n\nOtherwise, it's a good poem. Very straightforward and whatnot and it has a universal theme so everyone can relate to it.
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haha written just for you and thanks for another 2 pts. \n\ni wanted to write a poem to show you that i'm sorry\nbut my poor englsh is worst then dreaded cancers,\nso in order to appologise for my mistakes\nall i could do was ask yahoo answers,\nsome stranger wrote this poem for you\nbecuase i think as bad as i write,\ni just hope you will forgive me\ncause i do not want to fight.\n\n\ntada there you go :-)
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i write poetry,\nbut unfortantly.\nmy best write.\nis out of my sight.\nso i will leave this one with you,\nthanks for the two. (points)\n\n\n\ni know that one sux, but some of my best poetry, & yes it is good, i can't seem to find right now, & that FRUSTRATES me!
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you're ok, writing disturbing poems is not an indication that you need help... the cutting is more of a problem... keep writing what you feel and let it out
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Although grammatically incorrect and lacking steady timbre, there is no doubt as to the feeling and emotion expressed in your poem. I don't know about your friend but if he or she read it I am sure that they would continue to be a friend for life. Good luck.
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you just really need totalk to someone. i lost a frien to suicide unfortunately i was in the room when it happened. i know how hard it is. i also had to attend 23 funerals in 10 months jst a few years ago between friends and family i wasn't surei wold make it either i really felt like my world was caving in on me. the thing that got me throgh it was my husband he always talked me through things, to this day he still makes sure i don't forget thememories of those friends and family members. one other thing i did was write letters to the people i was closest to especially my mom when i was feeling as you are now. i've read them at later times some i just keep in a box. good luck and please talk to someone!
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how old are you? dont think a poem will help much, talk with him and then it will be sorted.
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I write poetry regularly, i am the only one who reads it but i find writing things down helps me organise my thoughts and when things get tough its good to get it all down on paper.  it stops it festering inside and making you feel even worse.  keep it all though cos its good to go back to in happier times
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No worries, my friend. We're all crazy. I know I am!\n\nBesides, you're right. It matters not what the world thinks of you. It only matters what you think of yourself...and what God thinks. \n\nMoreover, you are very poetic! I liked some of the visions you explained- like the bird flying on the winds of the desert. It kind of alludes to the existential isolation that we all must bear in this indifferent universe.\n\nMaybe the voice was God- maybe it wasn't. But he does exist, and he does speak to us.\n\nYou lived on for a reason. Maybe sometime, a revelation will emerge forth, and you will understand why you haven't completed your mission in life just yet.\n\nI almost died at least on one occasion, myself- life is sacred to me now, and although life is painful, it's worth living.\n\nMark my words- you are okay in my book. The truly sick people are out in the streets, my friend- they don't even know that they are sick. They are the ones that belong in a hospital.
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Translation...Need someone to talk to?  Do you need someone to talk you out of doing crimes, or talk you out of killing yourself, or someone else, or you need advice, or relationship help, or if there something else you want or need help with or anything. Add my email address (***).  Well I know this is weird and you might think of me as some rapist or kidnapper or anything else I'm not. To tell you the truth I'm only 16 and I have talked more than 37 people out of killing themselves in just 1 month but I have been doing this 4 almost a year believe it or not and well I know I am a stranger and you might not believe me but give it a chance you I know your thinking 1 chance might cost your life or someone elses but believe me and give me a chance and if I am one of those poeple like a kidnapper then why would I give out my information like I'm 16 or my email address and I know it can be fake but its not well I got to go so talk to you soon and remember I'm here to help you not to "dishelp".  \n\nIt was just too exhausting to correct any grammatical or punctuation errors...so I interpreted it as well as I could.  I hope this helps everyone.  And for portugese_person...you sound like you really care about others.  Kudos for you!!!
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First whatever I say don't take it to heart. I would hate to say something that would make it worse. This seems to be a very sensitve subject and I don't want you to necessarily follow what I say. Visit your guidance counselor or one of your teachers. Do you have any friends that you do trust? Really the best thing you can do is talk to someone. Find someone you trust enough to let into your life or your situation. Whenever you feel suicidal it is always helpful to talk to someone you trust or who knows you. I feel for you and will pray for you. And I'm sorry about whats going on .