"She was going to give me the clothes for free, but I didn't want to be in ______ to her."\nObligated?\nBe----------?\nEm_________?   thanks!
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Indebted, beholden, or 'under obligation'. They would all do..!
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Not a cool thing to do, and you should apologize for it, but unless you're leaving out details, are people overreacting a little bit?  If she was wearing clothes, albeit a swimsuit, it isn't as though you broke any laws.  I don't see the blackmail side of it.  Did you demand payment from anyone in return for the photos?  Too many gaps in your story.  Sounds fishy.
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What does the husband think? If there is an understanding between the two of them, then I think its fine. Whatever her real agenda is going on a trip alone without her husband, if she does have something hidden behind her sleeves, then its she is taking an advantage of her husband's trust. And if thats the case, I feel pity for her and the husband as well.
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1 is ok. \n2...you should say she asked my opinion on whether I thought the thought the weather was nice today \n3. sometimes, I regret that I didn't help her or that did not (not haven't)
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Un chico promedio de una sola mujer.\n\nThat's a tricky sentence dude. I didn't even catch it in English at first.
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she said provide which mean contribute to or give...sounds clear to me..\n\nThen why are you confusing us with your wording of her question. Copy and paste is all it takes to keep from confusing people..one word can change an entier sentence
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Romeo is trying to purchase poison from a chemist.  The chemist knows what Romeo intends to do with the poison and his oath to never intentionally bring harm to another prevents him from selling it to Romeo.\n\n"Your clothes are worn and tattered, yet you would prefer to live.  You are hungry and need to provide for yourself, but you have a hard time doing so.  The world will not help you with these, nor make you rich.  I'm offering you a great deal of money for the poison; just make the sale."\n\nIn simpler terms:\n\n"Overlook your morals just this once.  I'm offering a lot of money and you need it.  Look to your own welfare and don't worry about mine."
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Oh,PLEASE give me another chance!\nl can do it, l know l can! (grovelling on hands and knees,now..)\nM y whole family saved up for me to appear on American ldol.They would be devastated...oh ,please,PLEASE.......\n(breaks down into uncontrollable sobs as Security gently leads her offstage.)
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Overall, this is good, an apt description of a courtroom scene.  \n\nSome suggestions I would make:\n\n1) Your verb tenses are all over the place - past, present, etc.  You are describing what happened 3 days ago, so it should all be past tense - Suddenly Ralph [rose/got up/stood angrily] and [screamed/accused], "You're such a liar!"  - for example.\n"Flew" is the past tense of "fly."\n\n2) Did Ralph attack Jack or not?  The first paragraph says yes, the second paragraph says no, "almost."\n\n3) The courtroom did not start out a hush, it started out a courtroom.  It could have started out IN or WITH a hush, but a better way to put it might be "All voices were low and hushed as the court proceedings began.  Soon the murder trial started.  Jack seemed to be making very opinionated/wild/outlandish statements." ["incredible" is your opinion - are you supposed to be neutral?]\n\nA good start!  Good luck!
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Number one problem right off the bat: you are shifting tenses. You dashed and you waited, as in past tense. Then your sister "comes" to you in present tense. Make it all the same.\n\n(dashed out of the gate)...why were you in such a hurry? (I dashed out of the gate, nearly dropping my books, and hoped I would make it to the sidewalk in time. If I was late, my sister would bail, and I'd end up walking home alone) or something like that.\n\nGet rid of the (I waited for ten minutes) that's like saying, "nothing happened for ten minutes". Use that time to explain who Michelle is. (I hit the sidewalk at precisely 3:02, gasping for breath and flushed in my face -- but at least I was there. My older sister, Michelle, was just coming down in the street. Her school was three blocks away, which was the only reason I got to meet her at this spot.) \n\nget rid of (as minutes passed by) again, that's saying, as nothing happened for a while. (we made our usual trek back home, through the park, down the alley by the post office, and onto Beale Street.) Use every line to give your reader more information.\n\n(a big black dog with cherry beady eyes staring back at us.) overall, not bad. but where is this dog? is it behind a fence. right in front of you? how close? do you have time to run away?\n(a big black dog with cherry beady eyes had come onto Beale Street, right onto the street where we were walking, and was standing right in front of us. he growled and started edging closer.)\n\ndetails add to the picture, make it easier for people to see.\n\n(we both stopped quickly when I asked my sister..) too much going on in that sentence. break it up. (we both stopped abruptly, staring back at the dog. he was directly in our path, and behind us was nothing but brick. I whispered to Michelle, "what do we do now? he's blocking our only way in.")\n\n(Michelle paused to think, careful not to make any sudden noises. We reached for each other's arms, and slowly huddled together. "What if we go to Claire's house?" Michelle offered. It's not too far away. I think we could make it.")\n\nagain, get rid of the (we ran for about three minutes). not very descriptive. (we ran fast as lightning, swerving our way down Beale Street, the buildings around us nothing but a blur. we could hear the dog running behind us, barking and snapping. I'd never seen Michelle run so fast.)\n\nand lastly, change (we just sat there and hung out) try something like (we made it to Claire's house safely, and we bombarded her door with frightful poundings. Claire let us in and listened to our story, which we must have told her a dozen times over. We were so scared we didn't want to walk back home. So we spent an hour on Claire's couch, retelling the horror of the vicious dog of Beale Street, until our dad came and fetched us at 5:00)\n\nhow's that?
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just say.\n"hey, the costume i loaned you had some dirt and holes in it, i was kinda upset, can you tell me how they got there?"\nyou don't havbe to be shy, you asked her somthing, and she didn't listen.\nyou go grl!
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I didnt read this story for years, but i know i learned it in school. I might be able to look through my notes later and give you a more detailed response. Here is what i remember:\n\nI just a correction with what General wrote. The women went to a store right away to get a replacement. She did not have enough money, so she made a deal to pay it back slowly. She was indebted for many, many years. The rich lady got back the necklace right away. Years later the poor women met her, and was full of resentment. She told the lady, do you know what you did to me? The lady had no idea. When she told her all about what she did the lady couldnt believe it, she told her it was a fake.\n\nThe story has irony, the poor lady could now get the necklace back, and cash it in and be rich.\nPoint of view is also important to the story because we get to see the anguish the poor lady had. If it would be through the rich lady's eyes we would know all along that it was a fake. In this case it was a surprise.
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Sisterhood of the Traveling Pants.\n\nLena to that guy in the boat: All my life, everybody has seen me a certain way. What do you see?\n\nBridget to Carmen: So um, are you gonna put them on yourself, or are we going to have to do it for you?\n\nBridget to someone at her moms funeral. I think it's Carmen: Hold my shoes for me. I think I'll run home\n\nCarmen to the lady selling her the dress: And unlike you and your daughter, she has an ***!"\n \nCarmen to her dad: I feel like an outsider who doesn't even belong to you anymore. Tell me dad, are you ashamed of me?!
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i am a naturally easygoing person. my dream of becoming a freelancer has now become a reality. Now I have become even more carefree than before, with no worries. \n\nsorry i didn't translate the last sentence, but im not sure if my translation is 100% accurate.\n\nedit: i just re-read it, and i think it means: hey, that guy looks familiar.\n\nonly it seems to have nothing to do with the rest of the excerpt.
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~That is seriously aweful!!!  Is there any way you can request something else you can wear instead?  I feel for you.  The only thing I can suggest is that you just wear pants until you serve the sentence.  Good luck.~
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Or maybe he wants to say that he is very confused, so he can't do at the moment what you have asked him for.\nOr...\nsorry, I do not cope very well with the interpretation of phrases in english, oh, believe me, it's a messed up situation!\n\nHope you appreciate the humor!\n\nKaterina
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that is her cheap way to say, "i don't want to be with you"\nsorry.