I just wanted to know what i should include in my statement.
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Just state the facts.  Don't elaborate, be as brief as possible. \n\nDo not mention anything such as "i saw so-and-so and he did not run the red light that he got the ticket for..." or, "the cop is wrong," or "he shouldn't have gotten a ticket."\n\nDon't give a hint to your opinion state ~only~ what you observed.  No more, no less.\n\n"Just the facts ma'am." ;)
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There are few gramatical errors --> "I know should never think of only myself" instead use something like " I know I shouldn't  think of only myself " or " I know I should think about others too." There is something missing in the essay. I am not sure what though. I think you need to use more "diffucult" words rather than simple ones. I really love your starting and your ending but the middle needs a little perfection. Right now your essay according to me is 7/10 which is great. But using more "difficult" words yet understandable would really make your essay stand out. I think you should also add why you can't be what you want to be and what's that proffesion that you want to be. Avoid using words such as "cool", they bring the quality of your essay down. And being nurse doesn't mean you don't have problems. Infact, nurses can get in lots of problems, such as people can sue you for stupid stuff. I volunteered in a hospital last summer and they wouldn't let us touch patients AT ALL. We had to call professionals because they could sue us saying that while helping them we caused a bruise or whatever and now they are in terrible pain and blah blah blah but back to your essay. "I’m a teenager; I should enjoy life and have fun. Isn’t I’m being too stubborn, too selfish to think like that?" make this statement more clear im not sure if i am understanding what you are saying but i get the idea.  "I know that it’s my responsibility not to take my studies for granted." It's not your responsibility. You are making it sound like studies is a job or something. Not exactly what your teachers want to hear. Use more like "I know that studies should not be taken for granted" or maybe " my studies are important and serious to me". "because if it wasn’t for them I won’t be able to grow like this." use "because if it wasn’t for them I would not have been the person i am today."  " I should be greatful to have a family who cares and love me." make it sound you are grateful so use "I am grateful to have a family who cares and loves me."
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yes you should.It is always in a persons best interest to back up and clarify themselves if their question is mis- percieved.\n\nNow that you have done so maybe others will understand the point you were attempting to make.
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This is my oppionion:\nPut it in this type of format.\nfirst part \nSituation : I was fired due to blah blah (whatever happened)\nForm (don't write that just giving you an idea) Write down exactly what happened and why you responded the way you did...and with your apologizes or whatever (even if you don't feel that way) for creating any upset with the company...why you like the company etc..\nAt the bottom next paragraph put how long you have worked there...how you have done or whatever on your job and why you are an asset to the company...and that it will never happen again.\n\nGet it? gosh sorry that happened....sounds like they were a bit tough on both of you really....you should have at least gotten a warning or something :(\nHope this helps! :) good luck xxxooo\nHey worse case You will find another job that knows your worth.
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I would like to give you a hand but I am not sure what you have in mind. Perhaps you could shed a little light on the subject by adding details of the kinds of things you expect to hear?
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It would really *really* help if you gave us a bit more information about what you're doing and what your terms mean.\n\n\nDoug
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Start with a prief about your business, services, samples of your work, and your contact info, and pick me as your favorite answer :)
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If you have Microsoft Word, go to Tools and click Auto Summary after you have copied what u need from the Internet. It sort of summarizes it for you. You might have to add some things to make it sound correct.
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This is going to sound a bit snarky, but it sounds like your writing needs a good critique.  Your question is basically incomprehensible.  The first thing a writer should do is make his point clear.
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i like to use a quote or a short story that deals with the issue.  it gives you some evidence at the very beginning, and it depending on the quote, it can give you a very powerful introduction, which is exactly what you want in a debate.
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I included it in my resume that I used for a teaching position.\n\nWhat kind of employment are you looking for? If you are looking for employment as a teacher then definately include your sub time.\n\nOtherwise, describe your work as a sub such as; developed lesson plans, organized daily activities, kept attendance records, etc.
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Sounds good. Maybe the only thing I would add is perhaps a direct quote that Ned said, and then reference which page it came from. Or maybe even 2 quotes. Have a great day.
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You should have a list of your questions and answers in my Q&A.
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Do you need the name of the editorial? Im not sure what the question is
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how about some more details?
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I think you are very brave to speak out the way you do.  You deserve the have the same rights as others to write what you think. We write our opinions only. We do not force anyone to agree with us..so you should have the same rights.
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what do you want to know? I can tell you nearly eveything but you need to be a bit more specific!