i have competition of essay in my school on the topic of india of my dreams can you please tell me some points
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i am just writing the main points-\n1) liberty,equality,fraternity\n2) bridging the gulf between rich and poor\n3) great need of socialism\n4) economic inequality should be uprooted\n5) everyone should have enough to satisfy his needs but none should have more  to meet his greeds\n\n " think less of money;\n          use less machinery;\n   depend less upon govt;\n          produce fewer children;\n    follow religion more."
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I was taught to write the best argument then least important after and then at the end summarize again your main argument. You want the reader to think that your points are interesting, the arguments that are not so important I would just stick to the basic points I would not go into useless detail about them (main points).\nbut it can also depend on who is marking your work and what that teacher likes, ask them if you can.
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:)\n\nNow I'm guessing your teacher really wants your opinion. (not mine) But here.....let me help you get started....ok here we go:\n\nDid the story sound like a myth? Perhaps it was an explanation that the people of the time created because they didn't have science and technology to explain things. Perhaps it was a tale passed down from generation to generation that was embellished along the way. \n\nIn your paper, tell what your true opinion is of the story and why people created such a tale. \n\ngood luck.....you can do this!!
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i wrote one about america, but it isn't so patriotic.  it's more about our society's flaws, and how we've forgotten where we came from.  it isn't "america bashing", but it does make one think.\n\ni should write something patriotic.  i am proud to be an american, and am so blessed to have been born here rather than elsewhere.  thanks for the encouragement.
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Congratulations!  Study on your Native Indian status.  YOU have rights to all kinds of things that most Americans only dream of and rightly so.\n\nTake Care
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These sites should do it for you.  Good luck with your essay.
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hi vinay\ni'm 4m hyd, and im in CBSE too\ni chose human rights\n1) i spoke about definitions and history of rights --- INTRODUCTION\n2) talk about human rights organisation like the UNHRs, ASEAN, and others --- GOOGLE it\n3) talk about human rights charters like the UNDHR, the Aisan charter, the Human Rights Act (India) --- --- GOOGLE and http://www.nhrc.nic.in/\n4) Human rights violations: use the many case studies in the NHRC website above\n5) discuss apartheid --- wikipedia\n6) talk about nelson mandela and martin luther king jr\n7) discuss human rights violations under Indira Gnadhi\n8) use facts and figures from the Amnesty website http://www.amnesty.org/\n9) CONCLUSION --- write about world human rights day\n10) n u could also create a comparison between China and US in human rights\n\nmail me 4 more
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I wrote a long essay about it \n\nhttp://www.jimmyr.com/Ruska.James.History1301.24312.CommonSense.rtf
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You may want to look at a helpful web site for "How to write an essay." It is\nwww.english.bham.ac.uk/staff/tom/teaching/howto/essay.htm \n\nI found it very interesting, may be it can help you.\nCordially,\nIndia.Magica
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http://www.english.bham.ac.uk/staff/tom/teaching/howto/essay.htm
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These links should get you started, and will lead you to many othr links.  If you consider they were each from different countries, think about that in terms of their perspectives.  \n\nGood luck with your paper.
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Awesome essay! You have very poetic writing. The essay had barely any errors, but there are just a couple small things I would change:\n\nMakes sure you underline A Tale of Two Cities. I know you can't do that in Answers, but just in case you didn't know.\nIn the first sentence, the colon should be a comma. In the second paragraph (first sentence) conveys shouldn't be capitalized, and in the last sentence, "thing" should be "things." Also, the second sentance isn't complete. I would probably rephrase the first sentence of the last paragraph, "This section in chapter five describes the miserable condition of the peasants in Paris, France during the 1800's, and the Jokers graffiti foreshadows the war that is soon to come." There's also a period missing at the end.\n\nOther than that, it was very, very good and you should be very, very proud. Nice vocabulary, by the way.
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Do you get to pick your own topic?  Can you choose a short story? If so, write a paper on the group cohesiveness (how a group of people can influence a single person or smaller group) in the short story "The Lottery" by Shirley Jackson.  You can compare and contrast to today's society.  I used this topic for a college paper and got a great grade.  A hint, teachers don't like reading the same paper over and over so if you know that a certain topic is really popular, try to either steer clear of it or vary it somewhat. \n**Also, make sure you use the 5 paragraph format (first paragraph introduces your thesis and 3 main points, next 3 paragraph supports each point, final paragraph reinforces points and thesis before closing).
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talk about the colonization, and particularly, what happened when they left. When they left, because the africans wanted freedom, they took all of the educated people with them. They basically left (through various means) the africans with no experience in running their own country, no education, no recourses, no help, etc. Corruption quickly sprang up, lots of civil wars and discontent ensued. Good luck with the essay! Hope that helped a bit!
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the conclusion should just briefly summarize the main points in the body of the essay. you can also include your general opinion
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how about your own lense on life....what do you know better. i'm sure there have been some significant things which happened to you our people you know which you could describe in great detail...take us on a journey to a place only you have been. no one else knows what is going on in anyone elses mind. your own brain contains all you need for this essay.
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I would love to help you. Along with your essay, make a small project like a tree, and how each BRANCH(get it) works. Unfortunatly, You waited until last minute. I have done that; it is not the way to go