I really like this girl and i want to put this poem on her desk. Tell me what you think?
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I think you should just change it a little.  I think you should have said a smile that lights up the room or a laugh that brightens your life.\n\nAnd don't worry not all poems rhyme.
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Well I am a romantic at heart so I like stuff like this. The trick is to do little romantic things out of the blue when she least expects it....and not too often (i.e every day) then it will become too mushy or even smothering. But if you surprise her now and then it would be great. And not on those special days like, birthdays, holidays, and anniversaries.\n\nA good example of a surprise would be, say she comes home after a bad day at work. She tells you all about it, you listen and tell her it will be alright. Then the next day she's at work, and she receives that poem via, email, telegram, whatever. And suddenly her work day just got better. Even a non-mushy girl would appreciate that. \n\nShe'll enjoy it. No matter what, how or when you give it to her. Just be honest and straight from the heart. It should work fine.
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It's a pretty poem :D keep writting them, you are good.
490265
Nice poem!!!! can I quote?
487166
im thinking if your thinking about taking a shot at being w/ her, I would go for it.. By her response and what you were saying in the poem, to me she is clearly giving a green light.. go for it .. good luck.. nice poem.. I might have to borrow that... lol
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aww taht is soo sweet, if it were me i'd love, i mean what girl wouldnt?? its soo sweet,,, personnally i would just do it  on a palin sheet of paper, like computer paper, and a black or blue pen,,, thats just me though i think you should just leave it as plain as possible,, you sound like a sweetie why wouldnt she want you!!! good luck love.
935947
I think u should tell her how you feel.. only nicely tho!! (good luck!)
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why dont you write one for her? she wold love it, sincere words would always work,
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I told you yesterday that I loved it.\n\nPlease tell me that you will hand deliver this to her THIS week!!!!\n\nit's good, it's sweet and she'll get the point.
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dont give her the poem quite yet, just stay around her, say hi you know. if she seems to like you, ask her out and then read her your poem. if you just walk up to her one day and read a love poem she may be in shock or be embarassed if her friends are around and reject you even if she likes you.\n\np.s can you post your poem
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Fabulous idea.\n\nif i understood right you want to write a poem which expresses your man of dreams, in other words how you want the person you like to be. Its the best indirect message that can be given to a guy & might no hurt his pride\n\nPoem:\nthink of all the fun activities you would like to do\nthink of all the endearments you would like to hear\nplaces you would like to visit \n\nexpress in such a way that when one line potrays what you want to do, the next line shows how it would make you feel\n\nfor ex:\nseated in a bench with you beside\ni would feel more energized than if i were given a home in the moon to reside\n\nOne mere 'i love you my dear'\nfeels like i have traveled far & near\n\nemphasizing what you feel if given what you want will give enough hints for the guy to enact\n\nRemember you need not rhyme to make it sound like a poem. A poem takes its form when you express what you really feel
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dedicate a song to her, or write a poem if you can....or simply just say "i like you so much"
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Go to bath and body works, pick a couple different things. All of their stuff smells great and who doesnt love great smells? To me you cant go wrong with that. If you dont have one in ur area, then find her some nice perfume, make her a cd, write her a poem that would be sweet. Good luck hun.
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well, if i'm desperiate, i always uze the spel chek. \n\nseriously, think of some creative way to do it. poetry, a riddle, something that will make her think, 'awww, how sweet of him.'\nmaybe you should just go for it, even if her friends are there. if you do something creative and suave in front of her friends, so much the better.\n\nas a good man once said, 'There's nothin' to it but to do it!'
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All of your poems make me want to cry! They are so beautiful, and Ashley would be proud of you and would love you soooo much if she were here to read them! You are such a loving soul, and Ashley was a very lucky girl to have ever had you in her life!!!
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If you're decent at writing poems, and if the girl likes poetry, then yes.  Otherwise do what you're comfortable with.  Not every girl likes to get poetry, and not every guy can write poems.\n\nPoetry is not the only way to a girl's heart.  If you can write poems, and think/know she likes that kind of stuff, then go for it!\n\nGood luck!
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lol i'm very happy for you.. just to start it off... but i have this blog on my myspace that says like "for guys to read and what not" so i think i'll just post it here.... i know it probably will just be a waste of space. but maybe it'll benefit just a tiny bit? i would say propose or what not but i dont think that it's appropriate just yet... wait a few more months or something till you're sure. I know i've thought i was in love a few times myself and everytime it's ended badly for me.... but anyway here ya go! hope it helps!!!\n\nthings guyz should know.... \nCurrent mood:  hopeful \nCategory: Romance and Relationships \n\n\n19 ways to win a girls heart\n\n1. Hugs from behind.\n2. Grab her hand when you walk next to each other.\n3. When standing, wrap your arms around her.\n4. Cuddle with her.\n5. DON'T FORCE HER TO DO ANYTHING.\n6. Write little notes.\n7. Compliment her and have it come from the heart.\n8. When you hug her, hold her in your arms as long as possible.\n9. Be super sweet to her.\n10. Call her at night to wish her sweet dreams or just to hear her voice.\n11. Comfort her when she cries.\n12. Wipe away her tears.\n13. Love her with all your heart.\n14. Pick her up and flirt with her (she'll scream and say put me down but really she loves it).\n15. Be a gentleman (hold the door for her).\n16. DON'T let your friends talk trash about her, it'll get back 2 her\n17. Take her for a long walk at night!\n18. Draw on or rub her back as she is tryin to rest or sleep\n19. Bring her flowers just because its some day of the week. \n\n26 Ways To Make A Girl Smile....\n\n1. Tell her she is beautiful. not hot!\n\n2. Hold her hand at any moment . . . even if its just for a second.\n\n3. Hug her from behind\n\n4. Leave her voice messages to wake up to.\n\n5. When she is upset, hold her tight and tell her how much she means to you.\n\n6. Recognize the small things . . . they usually mean the most.\n\n7. If you're talking to another girl, when your done talking, walk over and hug her and kiss her....let her know she's yours and they arent.\n\n8. Write her notes or call her just to say "hi"\n\n9. Introduce her to your friends . . . as your girlfriend.\n\n10. Play with her hair.(except if she spent alot of time curling it)\n\n11. hold her and dont let her go.....\n\n12. Get upset if another guy touches her and she doesnt like it\n\n13. Make her laugh\n\n14. Let her fall asleep in your arms.\n\n15. If she's mad at you, kiss her.\n\n16. If you care about her, then (we all know this is a challenge) TELL HER\n\n17. Every guy should give their girl 3 things: a stuffed animal(she'll hug it everytime she goes to sleep), jewlery(will treasure it forever), and one of his t-shirts (she'll most likely where it to bed) and don't forget to bring her flowers or something special once in a while.\n\n18. Treat her the same around your friends as you do when your alone.\n\n19. Look her in the eyes and smile.\n\n20. Hang out with her on weekends\n\n21.Kiss her in the rain (girls love this)\n\n22.Kiss her just for the heck of it\n\n23. If your listening to music, let her listen too.\n\n24. Remember her birthday and get her something, even if its simple and inexpensive, it came from YOU. it means all the world to HER\n\n\n25. when she gives you a present on your birthday, Christmas, or just when ever, take it and tell her u love it.\n\n\n26. Always call her when you say you will, it may not seem like it, but it does hurt her and makes her thinks you don't care so call even if you can only talk for a minute.\n\n\nEvery Girls Dream---boys read this!! Its so true!!\n\n1. Getting kissed in the pouring rain\n2. Have that one hott kiss where your pressed against the wall\n3. Have a guy that thinks you're the world\n4. Have a guy that holds on as long as possible when giving hugs\n5. A guy that whispers he loves you in your ear\n6. Have that moment where you just ga