What do u think of my rap?
959377
OH MY GOD...THAT IS SO GOOD!! IM NOT EVEN KIDDING! YOU ARE DEFINATELY RIGHT UP THERE WITH NELLY!
177670
Car Thief by the Beasties Boys as well as Brass Monkey by them. Runs House- Run DMC. Ya Cold Ya Wanna Be With Me by *sorry cant remember! but its good!Ny rap. People like Cool Moe D,Big Daddy Kane and CL Smooth just to name a few, favorites can be found.
867909
It looks great. It all rhymes and it flows very well. You  have done a nice job. The last paragraph -- move "and" to the second line to that beam and team rhyme. Your spelling and grammar are perfect.
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I think it's a GREAT start and maybe you can improve it witha different word here or there but speaking as a songwriter, your "concept and approach"to songwriting is EXCELLENT...STUDY the great songwriters and analyze THEIR lyrics and their meters and rhythms....what does "lime trip" mean????Do you mean "lyin' trip???"....OK, "cry" "Sky" now end the LAST LINE witha word that RHYMES with Those two:goodby, high, sigh, shy, fly etc etc etc  YOU HAVE TALENT:maybe you should finf a music instrument person to collaborate with and maybe form a band with???????????  Study lyrics by great songwriters:Beatles, Sly Stone, Cat Stevens, Stevie Wonder and sort of "copy"their patterns at first(there are certain "timing and rhythm"rules that are universal...you can also study great poets to get ideas..Langston Hughes...Henry Wadsworth Longfellow...Dylan THomas...find a cd by The Last Poets:they were sort of rap godfathers
29990
Hip-hop/rap is uncreative, unimaginative crap.\n\nMoney this, cars that, ho's this, bling that and on and on and on.
407957
I Love It!  (I own it too)\n\nI think it is a great example of what an awsome poet Tupac was.  His was more than just a rap artist, he was very articulate and had meaningful things to share with everyone.
375622
U HAVE A GOOD VOICE!!!
163215
I was skeptical, but I went to your site.  Your ballads are awesome.  I like Someday the best, because it is soulful, almost "blusey".  Say What You Mean reminded me of the Beatles.  You HAVE to include How Can I Miss You.  Not because it's great music--because it is novel and will get a chuckle.  That will be the one to make you rich if you make it.  Whether you give me any free music, I am inclined to buy a track or two.  I pray for your success--you have something good going there.  Do you write your own music?
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never heard of you before so cant really say.how aboout leaving a place for the answerers to check it out before giving their opinions.\n\n\nwell i found u on myspace and i am listening to it now .honestly i dont like it .the music nothing standing out ,the singing kind of sounds like the singer from rush higher pitched.and the singing is almost like if you go to a drive in and u watch the movie and the sound comes in the lil box on the side of ur car.didnt mean no offence i figured u were asking for constructive criticism .well i hope it helps u .
755055
i think ur usuing ur talents in the wrong way. Y dont u re read ur poem then ask ur self what is wrong with it
774247
not bad, but i think it still needs a little more work!  \n\nare you a professional singer or still an amateur?
918136
Try look up Eminem and 50 Cent lyrics.\n\nWhat Habin8or said was completely unacceptable! I do know everyone is entitled to their own opinions but recently I have been seeing a lot of people being unfair to the rap and hip-hop genre. People are going around talking like the music is pure shit and it's not! Rap and hip-hop is just another expression of feelings and actions through music.
702182
How about Run DMC- classic rap ( if that's a word ). Nothing offensive there. \n\nGrandmaster Flash\nSugarhill Gang
1095915
IT'S A GOOD SONG BUT I DON'T UNDERSTAND WHAT THE QUESTION IS. AND LET ME TELL YA, IF THAT IS REALLY YOU IN THAT PIC THIS GIRL FROM TEXAS THINKS YOU'RE  HOT! SO IF THE SONG SUCKED I WOULD PROBABLY SAY IT WAS GOOD ANY WAY. GOOD LUCK WITH WHATEVER IT IS YOU ARE TRYING TO ACCOMPLISH.
141080
Now is the time to deny your child rap "music."  If you encourage this preference he has for this genre he will not relish "kiddy-friendly" rap for his entire life.  This type of music is not wholesome - it does the opposite of encouraging good citizenship and morality.\n\nIntroduce him to Mozart.
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something u like my opinion
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i love it. your a true star. i would buy it a billion times.go you. my daughter and husband loves it too.keep on rapping.i love the whole thing. add a little more and you got a great hit.