Help me closing my essay please.?
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How about a closing paragraph/sentence about how beneficial it would be to incorporate all those strategies into university life and the difference it could make to overall success?\n\nI hope this helps.
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I think this might help you with your essay.\n\nhttp://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/557/01/
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Use an outline. Ask anyone who knows anything about Rome how and then your essay will be organized, trust me, all you need is an outline. It looks like but isn't extra work, it's help..
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Read and write.. essay.. should go together
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Try the following link.  In fact, do all your essays and what-not from this that particular website. Chock-full of info.
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Hey, I am right there with you. My thesis is due on Thursday, May 4th and... here I am. I am almost done though. Just have to tie up all the loose ends and edit.\n\nSend me a message and I will try to help you. Let me know what  your specific topic is and what type of info you need. Smart Kitty will help---no worries :-)
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instead of messing around with something like that can you help me with my essay please?!
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My suggestion is to begin the essay with the opposite point of view (from yours).  Use the additional paragraphs to discredit that argument.
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after you read the question, take a minute (literally, not more) to write a quick outline of your essay on some scrap paper or the margin- that way you'll know where you want to go with your essay, and you'll be able to leave out time-consuming stuff that doesn't add to your argument.  Beyond that, practice keeping an eye on the clock.\n\nWorked for me in AP history/government. Good luck.
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If this a formal essay paragraph, stay away from idioms such as "pick of the bunch", "friend for all seasons", and "fair-weather one".\n\nDoes the prompt to this paragraph deal with religion or God?  If not, abstain from mentioning that.\n\nAs the other guy said, your conclusion should summarize what you said and restate your thesis, or main point.  You could possibly be relating each characteristic listed in your conclusion to a support previously mentioned, but those don't relate too well.\n\nAnd don't use big words when nice, smaller ones will do.  When people see big words such as cordiality and magnanimity, they just think "huh?" and move on.\n\nExplain your support a little better and clearer.  What does it mean to have one's "moral principles" "in conformity with each other so you have the minimum contrast"?\n\nIf you're going to say a proverb, be sure to explain it and how it supports your thesis.\n\nGood luck editing and hope this helps!
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Take a REALLY deep breath and start asking your questions ONE AT A TIME\n\nReading through your essay makes answering you a horribly daunting task.\n\nWe WILL help but you need to take the time to ask simple, clear questions - and not jumble everything together.\n\n"......i still cant seem to get stuff freed up. plus i cant run internet on it becasue we don't have a modem internet provider and i have to have the cd for the wireless card to hook up which i dont. plus i was wondering....."  \n\nEeeeeek!\n\n\n\n\n**update**  Uzzfluz, not all older PC's can drive XP I'm afraid, though I would be surprised if Windows 98se wouldn't be managable. He could even use his usb ports then too :)
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Begin with Dear Formal Name.  Before you start, answer these 4 questions in complete sentences.  This might sound silly, but it is quite effective.\n\n1.  What is my topic?\n\n2.  What is the purpose of this essay?  Complete:  I want to _________________.  \n\n3.  Who is my audience?\n\n4.  Write your "working" thesis statement (to be tweaked in revision).  \n\nEven though it sounds silly, this is one of the most important parts of organizing an essay.  We often have an idea of what we want to write, and may think we are quite focused.  However, I often find that I wasn't really as focused as I thought when I complete this simple worksheet.  \n\nSince this is a letter, you want to keep it short.  Choose three specific points to argue.\n\nWrite an outline.  Yes, I really do write outlines for important letters.  \n\nDon't wait until the last minute.  Allow time for at least 3 revisions.  Also, you should allow enough time to "walk away" for 24 hours before the last revision.  That way you view it with a fresh mind.  \n\nPROOFREAD!!!!  \n\nUse the first person as little as possible.  That is sometimes difficult in a letter, but it can be accomplished.  Do NOT begin a sentence with "I think."  Ther reader knows you think it.  Otherwise you would not be saying it.  \n\nEven those this is a letter, it is still formal writing.  Therefore you should eliminate the 2nd person altogether during revision.  \n\nThis sounds like an important letter, so you should take the time to really polish it up.  The more professional you sound, the more seriously you will be taken.  \n\nGood luck!
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Form an outline of what you want the essay to cover. (You can do this while your at work.) Figure out what you want to cover in each paragraph, figuring this is a five paragraph essay you should have your Intro, then 3 supporting paragraphs then your conclusion. You should also get plenty of sleep, drink lots of water and just suck it up and jump in. =) I know I procrastinate and overanalyze and get down on myself for not doing instead of just doing it. Good luck!
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Perhaps you could ask an actual question rather than copying directly from your book.  Sorry, but I won't write your essay.  You have to at least put forth some effort yourself.
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Oh, yeah, right.\n\nIf that is really you're intention, go to your local library tomorrow morning and ask the librarian for a book of essays.
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You should write your own essays.  Ask for specific information that you can integrate into your essay.
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There are few gramatical errors --> "I know should never think of only myself" instead use something like " I know I shouldn't  think of only myself " or " I know I should think about others too." There is something missing in the essay. I am not sure what though. I think you need to use more "diffucult" words rather than simple ones. I really love your starting and your ending but the middle needs a little perfection. Right now your essay according to me is 7/10 which is great. But using more "difficult" words yet understandable would really make your essay stand out. I think you should also add why you can't be what you want to be and what's that proffesion that you want to be. Avoid using words such as "cool", they bring the quality of your essay down. And being nurse doesn't mean you don't have problems. Infact, nurses can get in lots of problems, such as people can sue you for stupid stuff. I volunteered in a hospital last summer and they wouldn't let us touch patients AT ALL. We had to call professionals because they could sue us saying that while helping them we caused a bruise or whatever and now they are in terrible pain and blah blah blah but back to your essay. "I’m a teenager; I should enjoy life and have fun. Isn’t I’m being too stubborn, too selfish to think like that?" make this statement more clear im not sure if i am understanding what you are saying but i get the idea.  "I know that it’s my responsibility not to take my studies for granted." It's not your responsibility. You are making it sound like studies is a job or something. Not exactly what your teachers want to hear. Use more like "I know that studies should not be taken for granted" or maybe " my studies are important and serious to me". "because if it wasn’t for them I won’t be able to grow like this." use "because if it wasn’t for them I would not have been the person i am today."  " I should be greatful to have a family who cares and love me." make it sound you are grateful so use "I am grateful to have a family who cares and loves me."