I really like this girl and i want to put this poem on her desk. Tell me what you think?
962724
I told you yesterday that I loved it.\n\nPlease tell me that you will hand deliver this to her THIS week!!!!\n\nit's good, it's sweet and she'll get the point.
759893
aww taht is soo sweet, if it were me i'd love, i mean what girl wouldnt?? its soo sweet,,, personnally i would just do it  on a palin sheet of paper, like computer paper, and a black or blue pen,,, thats just me though i think you should just leave it as plain as possible,, you sound like a sweetie why wouldnt she want you!!! good luck love.
958391
Fabulous idea.\n\nif i understood right you want to write a poem which expresses your man of dreams, in other words how you want the person you like to be. Its the best indirect message that can be given to a guy & might no hurt his pride\n\nPoem:\nthink of all the fun activities you would like to do\nthink of all the endearments you would like to hear\nplaces you would like to visit \n\nexpress in such a way that when one line potrays what you want to do, the next line shows how it would make you feel\n\nfor ex:\nseated in a bench with you beside\ni would feel more energized than if i were given a home in the moon to reside\n\nOne mere 'i love you my dear'\nfeels like i have traveled far & near\n\nemphasizing what you feel if given what you want will give enough hints for the guy to enact\n\nRemember you need not rhyme to make it sound like a poem. A poem takes its form when you express what you really feel
483264
You are a very talented writer, you gave me butterfly's and I'm a girl..and STRAIT! If that guy doesn't fall in love with you over that poem than there's something wrong with him! Beautiful!
738669
wow...very, very nice..\n\ni would suggest a white paper and maybe a light sketch or a silhouette of a girl as a backgound...keep it pure...keep it simple..\n\ngood luck...*smiles*
126544
dont give her the poem quite yet, just stay around her, say hi you know. if she seems to like you, ask her out and then read her your poem. if you just walk up to her one day and read a love poem she may be in shock or be embarassed if her friends are around and reject you even if she likes you.\n\np.s can you post your poem
218409
Well I am a romantic at heart so I like stuff like this. The trick is to do little romantic things out of the blue when she least expects it....and not too often (i.e every day) then it will become too mushy or even smothering. But if you surprise her now and then it would be great. And not on those special days like, birthdays, holidays, and anniversaries.\n\nA good example of a surprise would be, say she comes home after a bad day at work. She tells you all about it, you listen and tell her it will be alright. Then the next day she's at work, and she receives that poem via, email, telegram, whatever. And suddenly her work day just got better. Even a non-mushy girl would appreciate that. \n\nShe'll enjoy it. No matter what, how or when you give it to her. Just be honest and straight from the heart. It should work fine.
1167570
you are talented. Every one shows his/her feelings in a way, and one of the most beautiful ways to speak our mind is writing a poem.  :)
929993
Aw, that is so sweet.  Give her a flower, tell her you've been thinking about her.
487166
im thinking if your thinking about taking a shot at being w/ her, I would go for it.. By her response and what you were saying in the poem, to me she is clearly giving a green light.. go for it .. good luck.. nice poem.. I might have to borrow that... lol
588910
why dont you write one for her? she wold love it, sincere words would always work,
43144
All of your poems make me want to cry! They are so beautiful, and Ashley would be proud of you and would love you soooo much if she were here to read them! You are such a loving soul, and Ashley was a very lucky girl to have ever had you in her life!!!
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You just said it all in your question hon.\nTell you you respect her and her opinion, that you think she's beautiful and smart and sexy and has a great sense of humor and you want her to know how you feel about her in every way.\nI'm sure you can even find a few more things to throw in, you seem to be a pretty articulate guy.\nBest wishes!
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you have to figure out what it is that she likes first, after you do that, you have to make it PERSONAL!!!! girls love that, it could be a home made card, roses, teddy bears, it doesn't matter as long  as it is personal!  there is no wrong in writing a little love note with whatever you decide to get.  I guarentee this will work! hope it goes great for you!
473409
Just tell her how you feel and maybe you guys can work something out!
484831
im going to get my girlfriends little sister and brother (3 and 7) to goup to her and hand her some roses and tell her where to meet me for lunch at her favorite restraunt then i will take her to this house i just bought (she doesnt know about the house) in the living room will be an arrow pointed to up stairs on the bed room wall will be spray painted will you marry me? \n\nor\n\nyou could send her riddles that will lead to somewhere she loves and put up a sign that say will you marry me.
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i wish i was your gf. that poem is so sweet it made me cry\nshe is lucky to have a bf like you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!