need your professional development , how can change my sentences to a better one, my english is poor?
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How alcohol affects a developing fetus and some of the characteristics of children with the syndrome.\nFetal Alcohol Syndrome or FAS is abnormalities which occur when the parent drinks alcohol when pregnant. The babies are exposed to the alcohol.  When the fetus is exposed to the alcohol the babies might be born with abnormalities. This can occurs due to the mother drinking too much alcohol. \n\nYOU have done good you have good ideas. This is an interesting pragragh. Your paper will be good.\n\nmaybe try  to add some children to your paragragh too because you mention children in your paragragh. Fetuas and children are two different things. Or maybe just say how alcohol affects a developing fetus. then go one writing your paragragh.
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I am not sure what your proficiency is. But you could try reading to increase your vocabulary. Even better if you can get a translation with it. Wikipedia runs hundreds of articles in numerous languages. Give them a try.
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This is just a suggestion.  First improve your spelling, and  then learn how to compose grammatically correct sentences.
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the best way to become better is to just talk.  find someone who speaks fluent english and just talk to them regulalrly.  they'll be able to correct any mistakes you make and, over time, you'll be speaking fluently.\n\nhttp://miltizme.blogspot.com
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Try to learn some English, before putting up questions in English!
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english next time please
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try a remedial English course first...
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im here for any help ,dear...i'd be happy to help you improve your language and don't worry..i teach well and am very patient . ;)\nhere are my emails so u can contact me : proudlygirl@hotmail.com and proudlygirl@yahoo.com
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practise with native english speaking people, if you can't do that then try and find the BBC world service on the radio.\nit is people speaking perfect english. listen to it as much as possible
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You have to start by helping yourself.  Read as much proper english as you can.  Here is not the place.  Try\nwww.bbc.co.uk\nwww.guardian.co.uk\nThe level of english is good.  The worst thing you could do is pick up other people's bad habits.\n\nWatch films in english.  That's a good one too.
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With all due respect - my heart went out to you when I read your subject line - but I can also see what the problem is. You may study hard and know what you are learning, but your presentation is lacking - as I can't even figure out your question...\n\nI am assuming that english is not your first language - if I were you I would take English, English, English and if needs be a tutor to work on your grammar and writing skills. If you can get your syntax right so ppl can understand what you are trying to say, you will be just fine. \n\nAnother suggestion is to read a lot in english language and speak english only - as much as you can -  practise makes perfect. good luck to you and don't give up!!!
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What the hell did you say.  Write it in English
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I would suggest learning proper sentence structure.
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That is correct English, do not try to change it, just remember it, English is a majority rule language, and you are in a definite minority, so, tough luck, if you want to change English grammar rules keep using it and if it gets accepted, well done, till then, tough
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The first thing you should do is to write proper English. If you write things this poorly, every one will reject you outright.\nThe next thing to do is to go to a library and look up scholarships. It sound simplistic but you apply for every thing you can and do it for several months if not years. Sooner or later some scholarships will come in. \nWhile this is all going on, you must be willing to work in the lowest of low jobs and put up with hardship while showing great dedication to getting an education.
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You also seem to have a poor English background. Focus your passion for education there.
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take some grammar classes then try to talk with someone, they might understand you a lil better