Will you critique my poem?
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A LITTLE ON THE DARK SIDE, BUT VERY FULL OF EMOTION\nI LIKED IT.
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I don't have the poem with me but I can email it to you if you give me your email address. The first verse is this:\n\nI'll write you a poem,\nA poem with a twist.\nI'll write it with a razor,\nThen carve it on my wrist.
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You have very good meter. The words seem to roll effortlessly off of the tongue. KEEP AT IT. I love the rhymes. \n\nI also like the mood you set up with your words. To be very honest, your lyrics are much better than alot I have read. I am not just being nice, either.\n\nAs a songwriter/arranger/musician myself, it is refreshing to read a good piece of material. Like I said before, KEEP AT IT. Good job.\n\nPeace and chicken grease\nJon
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Hi, I'm a Poetry, and I'm a yahoo answerer!!!
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I'm guessing that you are in High School.  My advice is NOT to go get someone else's opinion on a poem.  What does the poem make YOU think about?  What do the images mean to YOU?  How do you feel after reading the poem?  That is what your teacher is looking for--- NOT for your on-line web-searching skills.  There is a good book called Understanding Poetry but Cleanth Brooks and Robert Penn Warren that can help you think for yourself, though.
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Awesome poem!\nAmazing!! lol...\nu were 10 or 11? that's so amazing!
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id listen to your poetry i love poetry and write a little myself but its not that good I am guessing that your a teenager and so am i and Im pretty mature myself so email me!!!!!!!!!
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a poem praising someone or something....maybe
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Wow that's pretty deep. I think you are a good poet. I love writing poetry too. Keep up the good work! If you get some negative answers on here just ignore them because some people will just try to be mean to hurt your feelings. Don't be discouraged though, keep on writing. You can only get better.
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Your poem gives me a smile. If your poems are as good as this one, i think you should publish more poems. I have heard that Xlibris will publish some quality poems. try to look into their website... in case you are interested.
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It would help if you post the poem or a link to the poem.
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Well... You can look for the website yourself, really, but maybe you could put up the poem so ppl can read it and give you some commentary on it, might be easier.
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nice poem is it a haiku
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Yes, but the real question is: am I going to do all that work for you for only 10 points?\n\nWant to hear the answer? It's NO!\n\n\nNote: Maybe if there were only 5 words to make a story or poem with, I'd do it, but you gave like 25 words!
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you are talented. Every one shows his/her feelings in a way, and one of the most beautiful ways to speak our mind is writing a poem.  :)
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Its really not bad.  For only 13 you do show a lot of talent.  It shows both love and hardship.  I would give it a 7.5.  If you are planning on giving it to a girl though, I would try something on the more lighter side.  Girls like sappy.  Also, submit your poem to poetry.com.  Its free and you get a free copywrite for it.  Good job
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Aw, that's cute. :)\nI probably could whip up a poem for you, but I usually charge. I'm a published poet you see. I'll do things for free for my friends though.\nJust send that poem. If you wrote it yourself it will be that much more special to your friend. :)