what do you think of my lyrics..............?
966373
you rock!  your song is beautiful
719750
sorry dude, even I'm, the music mania.... can't figure it out..\nThis is just to vague!\nCan you gave me another lyrics? i mean.. another clue? then i could help...
6792
Post the lyrics and someone might be able to help you.  Better yet, try Google...
924467
Excellent poem. I printed it & hung it in my Living room wall.\n Thanks
743107
If you are looking to also put music to lyrics, I can help! I've written 16 albums ranging from prog rock, to pop rock, to hip-hop and R&B. Go to my profile thingy on Y!A and e-mail me if yer still interested in it and I'll get back to ya.... I'm not at all comfortable with handing out my e-mail address.
98994
try going on to http://www.lyricsondemand.com/p/p10/html
930599
i think this song is veryyy funnyyy...it just gets a little annoying after a while though...\n I give it a 7.5 \n\nHugs to all<3 \nD
1169961
I like my song. :-) I enjoy making up my nasty songs that fit my mood! Try it\n\nyou have a wart on your nose,\nand I hate it when you pose\nin front of MY camera,\nnot yours, MY camera!\n\nYour eyebrows resembles that of a bear;s\nand your clothes are what granny wears.\nyou think that you are the best\nwhen your toes are infested.\n\nI wonder why I even date you,\nwhen you stink like poo.\nI think that you belong in a zoo\nand yes, all of the above is true.
596242
When you get this, you'll thank me, have used them for 2 years, and my friends keeps thinking i'm a song freak :) :p\n\nThere is no song they do not have and they are current, accurate and up to date.\n\nhttp://lyrics.astraweb.com\n\n\nCiao!
891342
Awesome poem!\nAmazing!! lol...\nu were 10 or 11? that's so amazing!
259595
go to lyricsondemand.com
368946
Excellent, the 'feeling' is there, clear and precise. That is my honest view. However, never worry what others think. Write it for yourself and someone dear to you.  Poetry is, and should be personal.  I do not wish to distract from yours, by I wrote 'Dreams' a long time ago. Just for you and not for comment:\n\nDreams.\n\nOh, dreams of youth, now gone with time,\nThe heights you said you once would climb,\nYou kept your feet set in the clay,\nNow all those hopes seem far away.\n\nYou’d be the boss within five years,\nYou kept your mouth shut, you were all ears,\nYou never noticed what was being said,\nYou sadly never turned your head.\n\nYou trusted those you should not trust,\nYou praised those, you should have cursed,\nYour thoughts and plans, you freely gave,\nYou should have stood back, and not been brave.\n\nBut where are they now, while you’re still here,\nSad and broken, they’re full of fear,\nAfraid of what will come and why,\nAfraid of what happens when they die.\n\nWhile you are happy and content,\nMortgage paid, you pay no rent,\nFinances secure, children grown,\nNothing borrowed, all your own.\n\nWhile they all worry day by day,\nYour out whenever, your golf to play,\nSo don’t be sorry, what’s done is done,\nConsider yourself, the luckiest one.\n\nFor you can hold your head up high,\nAnd when it comes for you to die,\nYou’ll stand before the Man above,\nJust tell Him, that you lived and loved.
577050
Sounds pretty good to me, I like it :)\n\nI think either way you should finish your songs/album, just for yourself, ya know? to get that sense of completion...\n\nJust keep it as a side thing, so you don't feel like it's interfering too much with your work, etc.
802222
Honestly?  I think the poem is too gushy.  If you'd been dating for a while, it'd be great -- but from an anonymous person, the parts about "you're irreplaceable to me" and "my heart will never stop beating  . . ."  are a little creepy.\nI would change it to:\n\nWhen I think of the perfect girl,\nYou come instantly to mind\n\nWith the intellect of a genius,\nEyes that sparkle like gems,\nHair as soft as silk,\nAn angelic voice that sings beautiful melodies to my ears,\nCheeks as adorable and round,\nAnd a smile that lights up even the darkest room\nIt's obvious you are God's work of art\n\nYou're an amazing girl, an amazing person\nSo special to me\nAnd my heart beats gladly\nFor it lives off these feelings I have for you\n\nGood luck!
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http://www.songmeanings.net/lyric.php?lid=3530822107858534982\nhttp://www.songmeanings.net/lyric.php?lid=3530822107858534775
970500
A bit repetitive, but then lots of songs are.\nIf you penned it, keep it up. Everyone starts somewhere.
582345
If you have the lyrics, please post it. I'd love to help cause I'm a huge fan. I have lots of their stuff...over 60 cd's bootlegged and all. Waiting on you.