Is this rhyme good/intricate?
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Looks like some folks are plugging the word into rather poor "Rhyming dictionaries" that don't pay attention to some of the fundamentals of rhyme (or perhaps the users aren't paying attention).\n\nharmonica and Hanukkah are not very good rhymes for America, for one good reason:  good rhymes need to 'echo' beginning with the word's main ACCENT, specifically with the vowel of the accented syllable.   In this case, that means with (M)ER-  which is why "Erika" is, in fact, a perfect rhyme.   (But ER does not rhyme with ON/AN!)\n\nThere are actually rhyming dictionaries that match more than just the last syllable (as you need in this case), and I'll link to some below.  (For this word you need to rhyme the last THREE syllables.)\n\nBut even these may not solve your problem. Because it's very ujlikely you are going to find a PERFECT fhyme (with exact correspondence of all sounds) that will suit your needs.  So you'll have to look for CLOSE or NEAR rhymes, where most of the sounds are echoed and the ones that don't (especially if they're vowels) are reasonably close or don't 'draw much attention' to themselves.  (Just matching the vowels is often called simply "assonance", though that may be enough in some situations.)\n\nA couple of notes on the word's sounds.\n1) Most important are the syllable with the primary accent (ER) and the ending of the word (which has a secondary accent), especially the vowel.   The /i/ in between has no real accent, so the vowel is short and barely pronounced (and other short vowels might easily be substituted for it, as well as a long E, which corresponds to the short /i/).  Thus the sounds you especially want to pay attention to are those capitalized here:  a-mER-i-kA\n\n2) MER -- note that this E coming before an R is not very far from a "long A" sound (compare "AIR"), so either a long A or short e might be a good match.  As for the R (which may be a bit less important), it is closely related to L, so that might be a promising direction to look\n\n3) the final -A has the sound of "uh" -- though a word ending in an -ah sound might well be close enough to work. \n\n4) the k -not as important to match in a near rhyme, though it might help if you use a "related sound" -- like /g/ (which is the same as /k/ but with the voice added), or a /t/ or /d/ (which, like /k/ and /g/, is a "stop", made by completely stopping the flow of air with your tongue).  You might also be able to get away with dropping it completely. That's why "hysteria" is a pretty good near rhyme  (and why it is used in the Calvin & Hobbes parody of the Pledge of Allegiance:  "I pledge allegiance to Queen Frag, and her mighty state of hyseria. . . . ")\n\n5) You might be able to add a consonant to the end and still have it work, so long as it's not too 'strong' or emphasize a sound.  \n\n(Also, with ALL of these near rhymes, you may find that what sounds close enough in some instances, does not work in others.  This may have to do with how formal a work you're working on, but also where the rhyme falls in the overall rhythm of what you're writing.)\n\n------------\n\nUsing some of the sugestions above, some possible near rhymes (to varying degrees!!) might be:  \n\nAngelica, Celica, hysteria (as noted), area, malaria\nsilica, basilica, Seneca\nFarragut, chimerical, numerical\nempirical, spherical, miracle, lyrical\narial,  imperial, ethereal, terrible, repairable\ncommisariat, lariat,   (h)airy cut (?),  sherry cup(?),  belly up\nwary of,  care/rare/fair/share/spare enough,  theory of, imperative\nfairy dust, Harry does, bury us, various, gregarious, perilous \nnecesSARy/seconDARy cut  (that's a bit off --the primary accent here ordinarily falls on the first syllables [Ne/Se] but in some instances, mostly humorous verse [e.g., limerick] you can take some liberti
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I actually think this is a good poem, did you actually make this up?, if yes good job!
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it's not a sonnet. sonnets have very specific patterns.\nI'd need to see the actual poem to tell you more.
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its a beautiful poem\n10/10\nyou have a talent my darling\npursue it!\n\n\nStay Hungry, Stay Foolish
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Its really not bad.  For only 13 you do show a lot of talent.  It shows both love and hardship.  I would give it a 7.5.  If you are planning on giving it to a girl though, I would try something on the more lighter side.  Girls like sappy.  Also, submit your poem to poetry.com.  Its free and you get a free copywrite for it.  Good job
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It's interesting, as a poem I would have stopped at struggle to change as a song its fine to continue, Some grammatical and punctuation errors, I would accept it as a work in progress. :-) good luck and keep writing
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a poem about life --- from birth to death...\n\nbut when i read it it sounded much like a song...probably because of the repetitive lines that appear at the end of each verse... honestly I understand the verses except the lines about his ways/ his days... and I don't understand why those two lines need to be repeated so much and then it's not even the title.. sorry\n\noh I think "With desperate fire, his gray will sets to blaze" should be "With desperate fire, his gray will set to blaze"\n\ncontinue writing...much luck!
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It is Nice and you have good ideas how ever work on your grammar and it is kinda choppy when reading a style that can be vary effective if used correctly how ever not vary fitting for a love poem. Keep up the hard work.
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Well I wont make up the entire song for you, but lets see if i can think of some useful rhymes:\n\nHere I'm gonna sing a song\ni promise it wont be too long\nThis Is a song i love to sing\ncuz the southern colonies were so interesting\n\nAll the people lived on farms\nThey didn't have smoke alarms\n\nThere was no such thing as school\ncuz parents teaching their kids was cool\n\nSome lucky boys would leave the nation\n& go to europe for a better education\n\nThat's all I've got. I didn't say it'd be very good! But, good luck
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“What’s your name? "\n"Puddin Tane.\nAsk me again, and I’ll tell you the same.”\n\nAll I know is the it is considered a "traditional African American children’s rhyme."  I looked and looked...this was all I could find.
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its the rhythm of the poem
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it is an excellent poem.I like it .good job.well-done
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That's absoulutely hilarious. Unfortunately, a great deal of meaning can be lost in writing, particularly when one is being factitious or sarcastic. Am I wrong to assume that this was meant to be be a joke? (It seems that no one else is interpreting it that way.) Neither of the words that you listed are diminuitive at all.\n\nThese are the lyrics from a song by Nelly - a famous rapper. It's just a joke people.
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And there are so many other oddities and absurdities about the English language.  I love sharing this poem ....\n\nWhen the English tongue we speak\nWhy is break not rhymed with freak?\nWill you tell me why it’s true\nWe say sew, but likewise few?\nAnd the maker of a verse,\nCannot rhyme his horse with worse?\nBeard is not the same as heard,\nCord is different from word,\nCow is cow, but low is low,\nShoe is never rhymed with foe.\nThink of hose and dose and lose,\nAnd think of goose and yet of choose,\nThink of comb and tomb and bomb,\nDoll and roll and home and some.\nAnd since pay is rhymed with say,\nWhy not paid with said I pray?\nThink of blood and food and good;\nMould is not pronounced like could.\nWherefore done, but gone and lone -\nIs there any reason known?\nTo sum up all, it seems to me\nSounds and letters don’t agree.\n\nAnd also the poem at this link.
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Honestly?  I think the poem is too gushy.  If you'd been dating for a while, it'd be great -- but from an anonymous person, the parts about "you're irreplaceable to me" and "my heart will never stop beating  . . ."  are a little creepy.\nI would change it to:\n\nWhen I think of the perfect girl,\nYou come instantly to mind\n\nWith the intellect of a genius,\nEyes that sparkle like gems,\nHair as soft as silk,\nAn angelic voice that sings beautiful melodies to my ears,\nCheeks as adorable and round,\nAnd a smile that lights up even the darkest room\nIt's obvious you are God's work of art\n\nYou're an amazing girl, an amazing person\nSo special to me\nAnd my heart beats gladly\nFor it lives off these feelings I have for you\n\nGood luck!
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the poem or the phrase?  Please explain in more detail.