Does this paragraph sound okay?
923519
Overall it is extremely well done, but if your not satisfied with it, try looking at it from the way i rephrased it.\n\n“I had crossed the line. I was free; but there was no one to welcome me to the land of freedom. I was a stranger in a strange land.” Harriet Tubman, is a great woman whom I admire and respect along with others. Harriet, an African American, found it difficult to muster up courage to do what was right; work in fields, and travel on the “Underground Railroad.”\n\nthis might not be what you are looking for, but i would suggest adding more sentences as you can't really do much with this! Good Luck!
1184338
Aaaa ... ok. Now I see the fine print. I was going to suggest you tweak your quote to something like, "to be a great speaker, you really need ideas." Maybe you can rework it in a clever way to include both ideas.
424129
Do you prefer it grammatically correct to the last detail??? I can't edit it right now. My head's really aching but here's some criticism:\n\n1) lots of fragments... like \n\n\n"And in this way you create an environment that everybody can't easily spoil with their Farsi witticism."\n\n"Second, bring up various and brand new subjects."\n\n""While I was already a member."\n\n2) She (is she a girl or a boy?)used transistional devices such as FIRST, SECOND, but no FINALLY or LASTLY\n\n3) "By the way, I tried writing something in the club and it just wouldn't permit it."\n\nIN REFERRING TO THE CLUB AS AN ACTION DOER, SHE SHOULD HAVE USED "THEY"\n\n"By the way, I tried writing something in the club and they just wouldn't permit it."\n\n4) wrong use of clauses\n\n\ncan't think anymore.my head's killing me...need to take some pills..\n\n\n\ngenerally, I think when she was writing this letter, it took her a very long time before actually finishing it...hmmmm.....
726787
Its OK.  I think you could do better\nb
863393
go back to your introductory paragraph. You should be rephrasing the introduction to tie it all together.
875600
is it a nice friendly form?:)
153645
It is always going to depend on the sentance, of course.  But in that particular one, I would personally replace the semi colon with a regular comma.  \n\nThen it would read like: "Nothing is truly difficult when done correctly, so you should be completely relaxed."
701585
YES!!!!God help the middle man.to me it shoud b as stated as u first wrote in the question, do it right to start with then the whole prosess would b smooth and come out right in the end
244463
Can you rephrase the question so it is understandable?
116065
Carefully.\n\nIt will help to be grammatically correct as well as comprehensive. \n\nI'd suggest starting over, the way Billy Madison did.
1072926
The statement number 1 is grammatically correct.\n(Other answerers - To be grammatically correct, a sentence should not be meaningful -- Consider this: I saw some cars flying near the bottom of the Pacific Ocean when I was eating iron sheets)
873224
This is fine, down to the last sentence of the first paragraph. You shouldn't start the sentence with 'especially'.  A comma after 'construction', & then,  'especially if the crew doesn't know you are in the building.'\nThe words non-business would be better hyphenated.
794967
Yes use a semicolon\n\nand people, this is listed under HW help..
1169313
Passing over the misuse or grammar I believe that you have a good article. You have still been able tog et your point across. Congrats
372129
that is really good and so so true, nice one mate. the only criticism i have is (apart from some spelling mistakes) put some commas in as some of what you say just runs into the next line, but its still well good :)
243014
Not a good idea.  You should analyze the content of the quotation, and then pull together your paragraph and transition smoothly to the next one.  Even if it's the last paragraph of the paper, it tends to be a lot stronger to end your paper with your words and ideas- not someone else's.
739349
proper grammar first please