what is wrong with this paragraph?
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fixed paragraph\n\nHi everyone, I am Luis. I live in Florida. I like to play sometimes, but I like to play so much, that I get tired. Then, I go to the pool. I don't ever want to get out because I like it so much, I could live in it.\n\nYour major flaw, is that you can't live in a pool.
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Try right-clicking on the paragraph and choose Paragraph.  Make sure that under Indentation, under Special choose None.  Also make sure that the left and right are set to zero.
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go back to your introductory paragraph. You should be rephrasing the introduction to tie it all together.
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I don't understand.  Can you explain the problem a little better?
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It's a style error. Instead of explaining what an object is, the writer just names it, or places it in a category. This "Rumpelstiltskin effect" assumes that by naming something one has explained it and has it under control. \nExample: Leukemia is a cancer.
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Your post isn't correct, grammatically...Read it again...
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Ask your teacher. If you can get it back, you may use the paragraph provided you put it in quotes and give the source.\n\ns
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First, let me suggest a great book called "Eats, Shoots, Leaves" by Lynn Truss. I think you would appreciate it.\n\nSecond, let me embarrass myself by tackling your sentence.\n\n(H)ey, what(')s or what is up with my gramm(a)r?\n\nThose were the obvious errors. Of course, I reserve the right to find more, but that is it for now.
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Quote:  "I like her teaching and BUTT, why I do not know?"\n\nThe 'and' in that sentence is the real problem. Misspellings aside, if he were only trying to convey that he is not certain why he likes her teaching, the 'and' makes the sentence totally grammatically incorrect. It does look as if the child was trying to convey that he likes her teaching and her backside. Proper grammar can go a long way to correcting for spelling mistakes. The sentence, if truly intended the way the child says, should read: "I like her teaching, but I do not know why."
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*sigh* \n\nYou have no idea how hard it is  to not correct the grammar! The spelling? I can let that go. But the grammar...YIKES!! But I kindly put my red pen away at 3:00 and just let down my hair and become a yahooligan too. So bring on the errors. I can grin and bare it!
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A paragraph is a collection of related sentences dealing with a single topic. It should contain a topic sentence and the following sentences should support the topic sentence or main idea.  When you start a new paragraph, you should indent five spaces.\n    I wish you the best on learning English.  I am proud of anyone making the effor.
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Good paraphrasing.  What's the question?
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It's not grammatically wrong, but it is long and awkward. The double "to" is a grammatical error--or more like a typographical one. Otherwise, it's an issue of style.
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It does sound confusing. The two paragraphs contradict each other.
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Seems like you are missing some parentheses and an exponent. Please check to make sure yiu have copied the problem correctly and resubmit.
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That is called a "word salad" and I can't fix it.  I would have to print it out and totally re-write the entire mess.\n\nIt's too long, it's too repetitive, it's too confusing, poor sentence structure, no paragraphs... verbs, nouns.. ahhhh  grrrrr,,,,\n\nno, I can't fix it for you.  do it again.. shorten it and get to the point.
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Hello\n\nGo to the source link, this problem is taking care of.\n\nneed more help email me.