I have to write a poem using the numbers 2,3,4,5,6- what do you think, will she like it?
912003
That's absolutely awful.
793415
If u don't put that poem in a book , magazine.or something then u have a problem. I LOVE THAT POEM! It's like...... unexplainable. But i myself love it, i wish that i could find a intelligent,sweet, caring man like you. That is my wish. I wish you the best of Luck for who so ever you're with. She has no choice but to love!!!
495793
10 is the next number in the series,\nI hope that I have answered your queries.\nThe 2 and the 3 misplaced they may seem,\nBut the squares of 4 and 9 are members of this team.\nI hope you found this helpful, along with my explanation,\nI'm truly better with numbers than with my rhyming sensation.
231805
the poem is very good!!!
321230
It's good, and sounds like you like her alot. Good that you can write the thoughts down. Keep writing, keep a jounal.
700844
Very nice...you little romantic.......a poem or a song?\n\nYou wrote this....I love it!!!!!
732708
Awesome poem! I like the way it flows, and how you put feeling into the poem. Kick-A**-Tic. Let me know if you write any more. ROCK ON!!
937934
First off,She is a Young Lady,and it may be more stupid for you to call her dumb seeing as how you the one who don't know how to confront her.Apparently you like her too if your willing to write a poem for her.Back off that dumb and chick stuff,You may be surprised at what she likes.,seeing as how you probably don't know her that well.To answer the question,Yes Young Ladies do like poetry.
547373
Good use of symbols. I like how line 2 fits with the last two lines, it brings unity to the poem. Towards the end I think I got a little bit of a glimpse of what the poem might be about, but ultimately I feel like the message is hidden from me. It seems the third- and fourth-to-last lines are the culmination of the poem; is it possible to reword some of the earlier lines so as the reader can share what you're feeling when they reach the end?\n\nRegarding parenthesis: as long as you know what they mean then they're fine.
488692
In all honesty it is such a lovely poem but once u get to the additional info @ 2 minutes, it is a little bit too full on. I personally am a very romantic sensitive person who also writes stuff, but it goes too deep even for someone like me at that point. Despite this if a guy wrote me that poem i would go totally mushy anyway!
538472
It's a pretty poem :D keep writting them, you are good.
856647
no way man, i didnt even read this poem and i know its a bad idea. if you like a girl and nothing is going down yet, a poem will sink your ship my friend. way, way too much. think simpler
466980
Although grammatically incorrect and lacking steady timbre, there is no doubt as to the feeling and emotion expressed in your poem. I don't know about your friend but if he or she read it I am sure that they would continue to be a friend for life. Good luck.
306985
Don't stress too much - a poem does not have to rhyme. Write down a few quick impressions, organize them in a certain order, use symbolism (such as a rose - "a rose by any other name" in full bloom - 1st love, then fading, the petals dropping one by one, etc)pull it together. It does not have to be sappy. Good luck.
202534
Basically it is a poem of 5 lines and must have a set number of syllables\nThe normaly set is a 5 7 5 7 7 ( each number being the number of sylables in each line)\n\nThese sorces will help
415430
It is Nice and you have good ideas how ever work on your grammar and it is kinda choppy when reading a style that can be vary effective if used correctly how ever not vary fitting for a love poem. Keep up the hard work.
294943
it depends on the title!!! \nsometimes there are poems with 800 lines !!! in diffrent languages or in english doesnt matter...its all depends on the meaning of the poem