Acrostic poem help please!!!!!!!!?
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Here is one complete and help with the others  ...\n\nHateful hell\nOn all sides\nLeaving everyone behind\nOr die on the spot\nCancer of society\nAshes in the air\nUntil you can't breathe\nStifling\nTorment \n\nDenial\nInsinuation\nSneaky\nCriminal\nRuin of society\nInstitutionalized\nMarginalized\nIntimidating\nNegative\nAngry\nTreacherous\nIntense \nO\nNever\n\nSly\nThief\nE\nRip off artist\nE\nOn the make\nT\nY\nPenny pinching\nE
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OK, I'll give it my best shot...\n\n* Who is the speaker or speakers in the poem, and what is the situation?\n\nThe speaker appears to be a military trainee, learning about the names of parts in (bolt, breech, saftey, etc. ) and functions of his rifle.\n\n* What basic contrasts are represented by the trainees and by the gardens?\n\nThere are several:\n"..eloquent gestures, Which in our case we have not got."\nNot much eloquent about cleaning a rifle...\n\n"If you have any strength in your thumb. The blossoms\nAre fragile and motionless"\nStrength vs fragility\n\n"Easing the spring. And rapidly backwards and forwards\nThe early bees are assaulting and fumbling the flowers:\n          They call it easing the Spring"\nTwo different definitions of spring, one in the rifle, one a season.\n\nand more...\n\n* What statement does the poem make about war as it affects men and their lives?\n\nWar is about hard, cold things like rifles and all that goes with war, whereas the gardens represent beauty, silence, peace.\nThe gardens bring out the best in man, wars the worse.\n\nHope this helps!
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It's ok, but just not my style of poetry.\nIt needs to have a rhythm.\n\nIt might work better using the japanese haiku style.\n\nOk, I did just a slight altering. See if this works better.\n\nI really like sports football is my thang,\nAnd Peyton Manning is the man of the game. \n\nI love the colts  and you might be surprised, \nthat any girl on the planet likes to watch sweaty guys\n\nI really like football and someday I'll be\na pro football player on a pro football team.
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Basically it is a poem of 5 lines and must have a set number of syllables\nThe normaly set is a 5 7 5 7 7 ( each number being the number of sylables in each line)\n\nThese sorces will help
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Good use of symbols. I like how line 2 fits with the last two lines, it brings unity to the poem. Towards the end I think I got a little bit of a glimpse of what the poem might be about, but ultimately I feel like the message is hidden from me. It seems the third- and fourth-to-last lines are the culmination of the poem; is it possible to reword some of the earlier lines so as the reader can share what you're feeling when they reach the end?\n\nRegarding parenthesis: as long as you know what they mean then they're fine.
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u can go to lovingyou.com to find the love poem. it's have alot of them there.
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haha written just for you and thanks for another 2 pts. \n\ni wanted to write a poem to show you that i'm sorry\nbut my poor englsh is worst then dreaded cancers,\nso in order to appologise for my mistakes\nall i could do was ask yahoo answers,\nsome stranger wrote this poem for you\nbecuase i think as bad as i write,\ni just hope you will forgive me\ncause i do not want to fight.\n\n\ntada there you go :-)
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Well Ness I believe that sundae_mornings is right but know what I can help U! Here is an alliteration.\n\nSally and Samuel saw that Susan was sad. Sally and Samuel said oh my, she seems shocked and sobber. I wish you sister could shine her day said Samuel. Their friend Shay shared their simpathy for poor Susan. Sometime soon they would see Susan smile and shake. So Sally and Samuel with the help of Shay squirmed and sat in the side walk while they found a solution for Susan's sadness. They were seriously worried to see Susan begin to spin. Suddenly a boy in second grade who saw Susan so scared stood next to her shadow and as she began to shout; Sally, Samuel, and Shay spied that Susan was shaking and shrinking in size. Susan then screamed when she spot her friends spying on her. Susan ran so fast past the swings until she got out of the street. Sally, Samuel, and Shay were behind Susan until she stopped in a school and said want to know why my stubborness and sadness? Well Saturday and Sunday night, Sandra my snail died, so as soon as the sun falls I sincerely will sorround her with sand.\n\nOk Ness I have finished my alliteration poem. I hope U like it. If U want U can use it unless U want to make up your own.\n\nGood Luck my friend!
732708
Awesome poem! I like the way it flows, and how you put feeling into the poem. Kick-A**-Tic. Let me know if you write any more. ROCK ON!!
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if u can type the poem i cn help
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I could probably make one up or find a few. There's a great site for love quotes and poems. Good luck!
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well, if u wrote it, CONGRAGULATIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!, if not i think this is just a ordinary poem, probably written to impress a lady or something. I have a friend who published poems, and this poem would be an B- or 7.5/10 grade, which would not make it to the poem industry. But as I said, this poem has a lot of rich text that is exceptionally enriching. It takes great skill to write that, and that is why we are not all writers.
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Awesome poem!\nAmazing!! lol...\nu were 10 or 11? that's so amazing!
511157
that is beautiful....can you help me write something for someone very special in my life, i belive he is my soulmate.
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I don't have the poem with me but I can email it to you if you give me your email address. The first verse is this:\n\nI'll write you a poem,\nA poem with a twist.\nI'll write it with a razor,\nThen carve it on my wrist.
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(m)\n\nNice Poem..... what happened next......
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Dear Bearded One,\n\nI wrote you a poem in honor of your passing. Ok, not that you are dead....yet. Ok not that passing the stone will kill you either....most likely. Ok it could, but I doubt it. Unless it's a boulder. In that case, I'm sure surgery would be imminent. And since you are on here answering, I'm thinking no boulders. Ok, so in honor of your passing of the stone, I'm writing you a poem. Here it is: \n\n\nThere once was a man from Idaho,\nWho answered the questions of Jimbo,\nI noticed a few,\nI would laugh right on cue,\nTo the thought of dating a zombo!!\n\nI finally decided to answer,\nThis TMBG romancer,\nThe moon it was full,\nConversation never was dull,\nWith this Kimchee diet enhancer!\n\nBut then he fell ill with a stone,\n"I'm in pain!" he often would moan,\nHe gritted his teeth,\nBraced himself with his feet,\nAnd proceded to pass thru his bone.\n\nNow we all hope that he will be cured,\nHis Yahoo Answer friends are assured,\nHe will return a new man,\nWith a quest and a plan,\nTo convince Yahoo! Amy he's absurd.\n\n\nGet well soon, Bud!