is this good? i wrote it.?
912813
it is an excellent poem.I like it .good job.well-done
1037565
'fu_k me please'\n\nis it good?
722502
It seems to be well written, I like it, except maybe you could add a stronger conclusion to the poem. :)
191956
Yes.  Is this better?  :-P
801342
I think it's pretty good.  There's definitely good description, even though I don't really follow the story.  That's is probably because I didn't read the part before it.  Maybe you want to put the entire thing on here so it is easier to get revisions.  Good luck!
1107772
Cool thanks\nI bookmarked it\n☺
344183
Cool! Thats awesome, you should cut down on the letters though. Sounds like you write alot. Heidi
940026
OMG that is so sweet!I love it, did you write it?
1028608
like it allot .Keep writing and post some more
243271
Yeah, you did pretty good.  Hope you enjoy it!
1002797
couldn't have written it better myself\nthanx
759034
I would want it in writing, OK?
293712
I wrote a letter to my friend,\nit wasn't perfect, and i wrote that down.\nShe wrote a letter to me,\nShe didn't want me to be perfect, I wrote that down.\n\nI took my friend to the movies,\nthe movie wasn't perfect, I told her that i'd make it up\nMy friend hugged me gently,\nShe said that the night alone was enough\n\nI saw my friend at a party,\nI didn't look perfect, and i let her know,\nMy friend laughed at me at a party,\nShe didn't want me to be perfect. Although,\n\nI saw my friend while she was in the hospital,\nI brought her flowers that weren't perfect, I was sure.\nBefore my friend died in the hospital,\nShe said i was the perfect person for her.
184043
Yes, send it to me!! I have two days to write it!
598445
You have very good meter. The words seem to roll effortlessly off of the tongue. KEEP AT IT. I love the rhymes. \n\nI also like the mood you set up with your words. To be very honest, your lyrics are much better than alot I have read. I am not just being nice, either.\n\nAs a songwriter/arranger/musician myself, it is refreshing to read a good piece of material. Like I said before, KEEP AT IT. Good job.\n\nPeace and chicken grease\nJon
347914
That's nice.  Have fun writing it.
364486
Thats pretty Good!!! You made it up??