Does anybody have a good poem about something you hate?
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i really really hate tofu\nit really tastes like goo\ni throw it in the trash\nand burn it to an ash\nand then i won't feel blue
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That poem rocks.  I know that it is controversial.  I would be interested to see what people thought of a choice line or two from the poem.
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if u can type the poem i cn help
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you can go on netpoets.com they have some good poems on there and I have a couple on there also
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hell ya hate all you want
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It would help if you post the poem or a link to the poem.
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in my personal opinion its a good poem but i find poems are always better when the person has experienced what they are writing about whether or not its racism, abuse or love and you obviously have some skills as a poet but i think you could reach your full potential if you write about something you have been through
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The Stinking Corpse Lily\nSee link below....;
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Hate...such a strong word. Such a strong emotion.\n\nI hate it when girl-friends are not faithful.\nI hate it when girl-friends are not honest.\nI hate it when girl-friends ar not respectful.\n\nSurprisingly, nothing to do with sex. I my self am surprised at my answer.
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Storms, I hate them so\nThe wind and rain take control\nStorms, I hate them\nThe hail and tornadoes cause cars to roll\nStorms, I hate them so.\n\nStorms, I'm glad they don't last\nThe power of nature is so so great\nStorms, I'm glad they don't last\nHope my fears don't determine my fate\nStorms, I'm glad they don't last.\n\nThere you have it!  Hope you get an A+  ;-)
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Thinking about Bill, Dead of AIDS"\n\nby Miller Williams\n\nI really liked this poem because it makes I think the poet wants us all to feel how horrible it would be to have AIDS. At one point in the poem he says "thinking of friends afraid to shake your hand", I cannot even imagine what it would be like if one of my friends would refuse to touch my hand.\n\nAlthough this poem is really sad, it hits home a lot and makes us feel that we should feel sorry for people who get AIDS because of the amazing suffering they go through. It would be very tough. Now more than ever does this poem get it's point across. \n\nAnother thing I noticed about this poem is that how much the poet loved Bill. He says they had more, they would have given it to him. That shows that they gave all their love and effort and it could still not keep him alive. It is a very good poem and one we should all read and think about. i read this poem on the net its alright
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Sweet Hatred.  "the more you hate the more you love"\n\nBoth poison the mind anyway.
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Try "The Poet" and "The Poet's Mind" by Lord Alfred Tennyson.  One is funny and bright while the other is dark and dismal.  Good luck!
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ANNOYANCE!\n\nI hate that!
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holy crap this is strong!\nlast line is the best. \nclearly you are writing with FEELING and I love that.\ntitle it and send it in some time to a contest.\n\nI simply feel the power in this thing!\nit had me look away in sorrow because i know someone that was bullied to death. IF it helps, you need to talk about you feelings. get help. It doesnt have to be face to face, maybe talk to someone on the phone or by email. But yeah.\n\nI also think that you could have ended at the line " I swear I saw blood" and that the other stuff could be a poem all by itself. OR you could have two separate poems that are meant to be read together like " poem1 and poem2".\n\nthis is amazing.Just write with feeling.See, doenst writing with feeling feel better?
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as there is evil in the world,,,\nthere is also good....\nwhenever i see someone do something bad,\ni also see someone do something good.\nwhere there is pain,\nthere is also joy.\nwhere there are tears,\nthere is also laughter.\nwhere there is rain,\nthere is also the sun.\n\nokay, okay...i'm not trying to sound like a POOR  poet, but these are my true feelings...i know that i am a good person and get my feelings easily hurt and therefore isolate alot....it's not healthy and it's also very lonely.\nwe all come in contact w/good and bad on a a daily basis...
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a poem praising someone or something....maybe