why i am getting so lesss response for my poems ?
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It's possible that there hasn't been many people who have read them. Are they published? Have they been posted on answers? I have not seen them. If you want response get your poems out there. Get published. Good Luck to you.
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That is a very good question. It erk's me somtimes how people could care more about waht other people think about them than how they much they care about themselves. I never could find a way to explain this by just talking or typing, it seems as if I just cant get the words out. However, I have written a poem in the past, I hope you nor any one else finds it offensive. The poem is as follows:\nF**k you and your high society bulls**t rules\nYour so content to be alike, your such fools\nIm different than you and it makes me jump for joy\nYou care so much, society twist and turns you like a toy\nSo take your clan of dumbfounded minds and stuff it\nFrom looks to love to the size of clothes; that just wont fit\nYour mind works on a level thats considered primitive\nWhat happened to evolution, instead, your passive\nSo why dont you switch your side, here's the facts of life\nWhen you hold a standard for your own guilty strife\nYour left with a life of hate and most common shortcomings\nIve found and realized you live non-existent nothings\nYour determined that life is going in a set path with you in the lead\nYou dont understand, with that mindset you'll never succeed\nMy advice for a better world is simple, to thyself be true\nThrough this, you are your own person, with your choices due\nYour choice of what makes you, yourself, and others not\nNot to mean you live secretless and throw away your own spot\nYou decide what you are, who you are, and what you want to be\nNever let any one tell you your own feelings based on what THEY see.\nbored and thinking-may 29,06- "F**k Society"\n\nThis poem, I know, isn't anything fancy and is by far professional. I know it is flawwed and far from perfect. However, it shows what I feel and I wish everyone in some fashion could feel or atleast understand. I think it would make life much better for the rich and the needy, the pretty and the ugly, the happy and the sad, everyone big and small... lol, here I am sounding like some kindof activist or something. Im really not, just think a lot about how society puts a toll on every existing person weather they beleive in it or not.\n                                               Sincerely,\n                                                       Jamie
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Hi, I'm a Poetry, and I'm a yahoo answerer!!!
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it depends on the title!!! \nsometimes there are poems with 800 lines !!! in diffrent languages or in english doesnt matter...its all depends on the meaning of the poem
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Hmm, which poems are they, out of curiousity? Feel free to email them to me and I may be able to write you back their explanations. I have always enjoyed the study of poetry.\n\nOr, try searching Yahoo or Google for the poem titles and explanations - like "Death Be Not Proud explanation." Also, try out wikipedia.org. Many poems are listed on that encyclopedic site (along with many other things), and you should have no trouble finding the poems on there and their meanings.\n\nBest of luck to you. :)
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Your poem gives me a smile. If your poems are as good as this one, i think you should publish more poems. I have heard that Xlibris will publish some quality poems. try to look into their website... in case you are interested.
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Loveyou.com and poetry.com are both good. I have a poem on the first one and at leats 20 to 30 on the other one.
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Wonderful poem.\nDont do what you suggest though it wont have the effect you will be hoping for. My suggestion is to talk to her and tell her you wrote this poem abuot her and recite it. Good luck
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You have very good meter. The words seem to roll effortlessly off of the tongue. KEEP AT IT. I love the rhymes. \n\nI also like the mood you set up with your words. To be very honest, your lyrics are much better than alot I have read. I am not just being nice, either.\n\nAs a songwriter/arranger/musician myself, it is refreshing to read a good piece of material. Like I said before, KEEP AT IT. Good job.\n\nPeace and chicken grease\nJon
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I dont know much about poems but, do you work at mr gatties? i know someone with your same name who looks kida like your avatir.
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Honestly, an analysis of any poem is the opinion of the person reading it. There are really no right or wrong analysis to most poems. Everyone interprets differently. Its what you feel when youre reading the poem. Try to analyze it yourself. Believe me. I read and write tons of poetry. Good Luck!!
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id listen to your poetry i love poetry and write a little myself but its not that good I am guessing that your a teenager and so am i and Im pretty mature myself so email me!!!!!!!!!
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Something simple, like\n"ten poems I like"\nOr "a dozen poems, minus two"
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holy crap this is strong!\nlast line is the best. \nclearly you are writing with FEELING and I love that.\ntitle it and send it in some time to a contest.\n\nI simply feel the power in this thing!\nit had me look away in sorrow because i know someone that was bullied to death. IF it helps, you need to talk about you feelings. get help. It doesnt have to be face to face, maybe talk to someone on the phone or by email. But yeah.\n\nI also think that you could have ended at the line " I swear I saw blood" and that the other stuff could be a poem all by itself. OR you could have two separate poems that are meant to be read together like " poem1 and poem2".\n\nthis is amazing.Just write with feeling.See, doenst writing with feeling feel better?
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How can you kill someone if they tell you to do your own homework? And you did the poem yourself, you didn't ask someone to do it for you.\n\nBut, yeah, the poem sounds great. Personally, I wouldn't change anything since poems are more artistic than being grammatically correct. If you feel that you got your artistic point across, then you don't need to change it.
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What is that poem you'll maybe have better answer if you post your answer in litterature
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Being a poet myself, I have to say it's a good poem, but what it's saying is you are not really dealing with the pain and hurt too well. My heart goes out to you. I hurt for you, and also, identify with you. I'm compiling a book of my poems, called "Pain On Paper". The poetry for us is a release of our pain...........keep on writing! You're doing good! Talk to somebody though, a friend, a counselor.......\nSOMEBODY! Get the pain out!!