can you do a quick poem about missing your true love?
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i see you and i remember. \ni remember your special smile,\nonly for me.\ni remember my eyes following \nyou across the room.\ni remember how your hand fit \nin mine.\ni remember what the softness in \nyour lips did to me.\ni remember the way i held\nyou when you cried.\ni remember the tender way \nyou said you loved me.\ni remember the day you\nsaid goodbye.\ni remember the many tears\nthat i cried for weeks.\n\nwhen i see you, i remember\nhow much i still love you.  \nand my heart screams,\nbecause i want you back.
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The tip here is not to write a love poem, but rather use someone elses to show your love for your partner.\nIf you can do something sweet like remember a romantic poem and then recite it word for word to your partner, then their heart will be yours forever.\nThere are many quite short love verses that you can memorise, some of the most famous of these of course are the words of Shakespeare.\nRemember a romantic few lines from one of his romantic plays or perhaps one of his love sonnets.\nIf you can recite lines such as 'Love is not love which alters when it alteration finds' then you will really show the effort that you went to and this will go down very well with your partner; you will be the king of romance!
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damm u shud make a poem or a rap out of that
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it could mean that your missing love in your life and need to find someone
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thats a nice poem but let him decide if he want you because sometimes they do they just doesn't show it but in the mean time try this peom\never since i led eyes on you i knew my heart wouldn't skip a beat\nand when u asked a question i was hoping it was concerning me\nif only u knew how u make me feel \nthen u would know my heart is concelled\nwith your  expression of grace\nso i'll just wait until the day\nu walk in my face and say\n"i been waiting on you all day"
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Go see him unexpectedly, or send him a video of yourself tellling him that you miss him.....
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the trouble is with love songs you feel you have  to listen to them to purge the soul, when you are with someone they seem to express all that you feel. And then when you are not with that person any more they make you realize all that you miss and maybe....just maybe through listening to them you can reclaim some of that lost love......i don't know why it hurts so much when you hear them though
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Not sure, but you could check out my poems on my yahoo 360 \n\nand post a comment and vote for your favourite!!\n\nOh ok..try the links below as well!!\n\nGood Luck\n\nJimmy
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play a song such s "i just called to say i love you",find the hallmark card that says what you fell or write your own love poem,expressing ur feelings.i think this is neat,u took the time to write urself,it does not need to be "poem perfect",just direct from the heart. good luck
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if u can type the poem i cn help
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I think this is a great question (opportunity really) to get some of us closet writers to post our own writing...maybe even get some fun feedback, or just enjoy reading some other writer’s work as well. So, thanks for the chance. Well here is one of my earlier poems:\n\n"A Passing, Sulfur-Green Passion"\n\nThose green eyes, once filled with rage-rampant fire,\nFueled a whim obsessed fervor that partook of every desire.\n\nNot once did any glance go unrewarded in a closed-door fashion—\n   A youthful body withered by long nights of unprotected (un-sustained) passion. \n\nFeeling ephemeral stares, \nImagining they seek out what lurks behind badly salt-stained eyes, omens-old\nShe is forever surrounded by sulfur-smoke, \nLost in sustained moment of grey-cold.\n \nAnd those wet orbs cannot receive a spark of compassion\n \n   For anyone’s love.
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In this liquid crystal haze I wait,\nbreathe, feel the tautness of \nmy need.\nI scan, exhale, and scan again\nthe pixilated emptiness\nthat will not reorder itself\ninto an adequate display\nof love.\nWill I fall headlong into a deep\nchasm, that buries hopes\nof you in the corpse of me?\nYour eternal distance\nI cannot recover.\nI need your warm breath, the\nmagic \nof your laugh\nthe very goodness of you.\nWill me back to sense.\n\n(Copyright reserved.)\n\nI did get that you were using a computer motif (the headache!), and I realize that I strayed from that and went with the feeling of emptiness experienced by the end user that can only be resolved with the presence of another.  (Unfortunate, that!)\n\nSpecific changes, and why I made them:\n1.  "Of every expectant squirm" didn't convey serious intensity, it was more childlike excitement over something sure to happen, but from your poem I didn't get the feeling that the user would ever get the message he desired.  I changed it to a very serious "my need".\n\n2.  Changed sigh to exhale.  Sigh seemed to indicate frustration, and as I changed the level of intensity above, exhale conveyed a more physical withholding of the very act of breathing.\n\n3.  "Will not resolve itself into sufficient love" I changed to "reorder itself" as I pictured the letters on the screen actually shuffling around to say what he wanted them to say (I think you were going with a computer resolution becoming less blurry?); "sufficient" which seemed to ask for a quantity of love -- I changed to "adequate" as I was going with the quality of what was being communicated was not meeting the need.  Not sure if you meant quantity or quality, or maybe both.\n\n4.  Theme of chill/splinters/shards - I just couldn't make that work for me as a reader.  You lost me there because it was so physical rather than emotional.  I went with chasm/corpse/eternal to convey emptiness and despair.  \n\n5.  Changed the final question to a plea.  Changed Charm to Magic (the power needed to bring back life).  \n\n6.  The boiled down message\nMy need\nof love.\nI cannot recover.\nWill me back to sense.\n\nYour poem is cool as it is.  I'm guessing from reading some of your other Q&A that you actually did want people to rewrite/comment.  As you know, some people don't -- they just say they do.\n\nAnyway, yours stands well on its own.  It's different from my version, not better or worse.  Perhaps I put too much feminine drama into it and totally changed the character?  I'd be interested to know if I took it further in the direction you wanted to go, or went way off in a direction you hadn't wanted.\n\nThis was fun!  Thanks.
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that poem was so sweet im crying now\n\nu would be a great poet u have got a good talent :) xx
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when u miss someone...expressing your love to someone on the phone or online is romantic..makes u feel better
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i love your poems i wish i could write poem that well
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read him a poem that they think is a love poem but turns out to be a dump poem
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no, cause I want to read the poem. don't you dare delete yourself cause I will go and kick your a...! :)\n\nI would miss you, okay?!!