I need to end off my essay about the crusades and &#92;I'm thinking of ending the essay about how the crusades ended.
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Tempting to say which one?... there were SEVEN... but in the end they kinda fizzled out with a whimper not a bang...\nbasically folks got fed up and slowly support died out.\n\nThere are loads of good sites with further info... below is just one.
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PLEASE, right now you are going overboard. It's not nice to be insulted, and I simpathize. But best thing to do now is ignore those writing bad comments. If you stopped fighting back(I know it's hard) it would show these people that you have self-control, and that you're a mature Christian that leans on God and doesn't get taken in with these questions. Please, please stop this foolish fighting, if GypseyQueen reads this, please just agree to disagree stop antagonizing each other!
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I can't write the whole conclusion for you, because as far as I can tell, what you've written so far, is the intro. I don't know what you have for the body of the essay. But, you could include something like: \n\n"In conclusion, we can see that there are many differences between Poland and America, but we can appreciate the similarities even more, when we stop to consider important people such as the great engineer, Thaddeus Kosciusko, who served with General George Washington, in the American Revolution, to help the Colonies defeat the British; and the tremendous contribution to humanity by the wonderful scientist, Madame Marie Curie (who was Polish). Frédéric François Chopin, the great composer, has also added some beauty to our American culture. (etc)\n\nGood Luck, and Have Fun!!
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Depends on how long the finished product is supposed to be.  I would not give introduction and conclusion more than 5% of the words each, so that the meat of the document is definitely the meat.  The sandwich is not the bread, after all; the intro and conclusion are just to make it easier for the reader to scan first to get the sense of the essay.  Since your teacher is condemned to read the entire thing, no sense in making a lot out of the bread in the sandwich.\n\nWhile they should be short in length, they should be the most polished parts of the essay, as much to show that you understand the point of your essay yourself as for any other reason.  Every essay has to have a point: what are you trying to get across, really?  A professor of mine once started his classes by saying he would tell us everything three times:  First he will tell us what he is going to tell us, then he will tell us, and finally he will tell us what he told us.  That is, first the statement of what you intend to show (the intro), then the body of the essay, with the evidence for your thesis, and the logic and discussion.  Finally (in conclusion), put the whole thing into a succinct summary that shows you have successfully demonstrated that which you stated you would.
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No, I'm actually taking time off after killing myself with a 13 page research paper that was due yesterday. You are not boring at all, just so you know. *winks*
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You just skip that part of the citation and go on. I was really confused about that, too when I just started writing papers.   A really good site to help with citations is www.citationmachine.net
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I tend to have the same problem. Assignment is due and I'm off shopping, hanging out. Things I know I shouldn't do but by the time I realize that it is due like within 24 hrs I get in this mode of work. Lol. I usually put off writing essays till the last minute and so far I have done pretty well. \n\nEnjoy yourself for the time being, relax then when you feel that your mind is ready start studying away.\n\nGood luck.
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I think maybe you answered your own question. Obviously, a major setback in your life right now is finding an interesting topic to write on.
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Yes, I wont go into that section after 11 pm because of that. And that is all that is on the board in the time that I am on sometimes it drives me nuts...Have a good weekend and do keep up the great questions..
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I find it best if you can try to open an essay with a question. Get the reader excited about what they are about to read. For example if you are discussing the civil war you ask " Can a nation torn at the seams ever reunite with peace?" Then in your intro. briefly discuss each point that you discuss in the next paragraphs. Then state your purpose, or your topic sentence. Staying with my example..."The United States survived a war that tore down the middle and through the heart using strength and vigilance" Your conclusion is just a re-statement of your topic sentence, or your purpose. So a good conclusion to my civil war paper might be " Despite the harsh feelings shared by the north and the south the United States fought to stay a country United. "\nDon't make it too hard on yourself yet. English is an incredibly difficult language. Putting emotion in your writing will come once you are more comfortable with english.
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My advice for editing: a kindergartener called you a low-life inferior? use a more realistic term there... I don't know what the relevance is of the summer heat... "run" should be "ran". Get rid of the "of courses". First off, it is redundant to start two sentences in the same way back-to-back, and secondly it indicates a tone a little too casual for the essay. fix "going busting", change "can" to "could" (don't change tenses). "remembered" should be "remember", "hide" should be "hiding" .\n\nAside from all proofreading, I hate to tell you that the point of the story is moot. It is a great idea to use a story to illustrate something about yourself for college apps, but make sure that the story is applicable to what you're trying to say about yourself!\nA story about an elementary school fight is hard to relate to an epiphany about trying hard in school. Sure, you were berated, but not in a way that relates to your level of education necessarily. Maybe say something about your mother telling you to always try hard in school so that you can lift yourself to a higher place in society?\nGood luck with northeastern (if you choose it)! both my girlfriend and best friend attend, and they love it!
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Perhaps you could ask an actual question rather than copying directly from your book.  Sorry, but I won't write your essay.  You have to at least put forth some effort yourself.
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Document the incident as soon as possible.  Write him a letter as clearly and as objectively as you can describing what happened, including what you said and what he said, leaving nothing out and exaggerating nothing.  Give one copy to him and one to the department head.  Indicate on the letter who is getting a copy.  If the remaining page strongly hints of more to come (such as ending in mid-sentence), point that out.\n\nPropose a solution--you would be willing to write the essay again under similar conditions (make sure you refresh your memory on the subject matter).\n\nIf confronted by the professor, tell him you are sorry, but you really did write more and felt you had to do something.\n\nMake an appointment with the department head to discuss the situation.  Tell him you only want what is fair.\n\nUnderstand that you can never take a class from that professor again.
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Awesome essay! You have very poetic writing. The essay had barely any errors, but there are just a couple small things I would change:\n\nMakes sure you underline A Tale of Two Cities. I know you can't do that in Answers, but just in case you didn't know.\nIn the first sentence, the colon should be a comma. In the second paragraph (first sentence) conveys shouldn't be capitalized, and in the last sentence, "thing" should be "things." Also, the second sentance isn't complete. I would probably rephrase the first sentence of the last paragraph, "This section in chapter five describes the miserable condition of the peasants in Paris, France during the 1800's, and the Jokers graffiti foreshadows the war that is soon to come." There's also a period missing at the end.\n\nOther than that, it was very, very good and you should be very, very proud. Nice vocabulary, by the way.
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I would love to help you. Along with your essay, make a small project like a tree, and how each BRANCH(get it) works. Unfortunatly, You waited until last minute. I have done that; it is not the way to go
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I think you should post this on http://www.deviantart.com\n\nThat way actual artists and writers can critique it better than average Yahoo! people. \n\nPersonally, I think this uses slightly dull language. Have you considered writing it as an essay instead? Listen to this:\n\n"I believe in jihad. It's a word that holds many meanings, and I accept all of them. Each and every one combats the injustice and inequality that taints our world today."\n\nOf course, I disagree with that. The jihad of the sword has no place in modern times. In this time and age, we can work out our differences with diplomats and words, not Kalashnikovs and rocket launchers.\n\nOh I see. Well then I retract the bit about AKs and RPGs...however the other guy did have a point in saying it's a little flat and too much like prose. So why not build on your strengths and just make it prose? \n\nHowever, I do disagree that the events at the WTO had any justification at all. You don't respond to ANYTHING with terrorist attacks on civilian targets. I knew guys that lost family in that attack.
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study like crazy. the end. go to the library study. the end.