it ahs to rhyme or be a diamond poem but THANX for helping i suck at writting poems!
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There was a young fella called Chip,\nWho thought that all poets were hip.\nTried to get in the game,\nBut his rhymes were so lame\nHe gave up in disgust and enrolled in business school instead.\n\nWelcome to the Club for Loser Poets, pal.
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you're ok, writing disturbing poems is not an indication that you need help... the cutting is more of a problem... keep writing what you feel and let it out
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Doesn't matter too much about your spelling/grammar. There is no particular way of writing poetry.\nI write what's in my heart or find a subject, write stuff down and rearrange the words to give them rhythm.\nCheck out my blog fo ideas if you want.(most of the poems there are depressing though!)\n\npumpkinpoetry.blogspot.com
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this b***h prefers rhymes that actually rhyme'\nit all started so promising, but then u just couldn't follow through.....typical!
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damm u shud make a poem or a rap out of that
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That is beautiful. It's heartfelt and I used to write a lot and in High school I was picked best writer by the teachers. This poem seems as though you or whoever wrote this wasn't writing because they felt they had to but because these are feelings that plague them everyday. I feel that the only way to be a true writer is to be able to contact the feelings inside of you and bring them out in pictures instead of words and put those pictures into words on paper. It seems that's what the writer was doing and did a very good job at interpreting her own thoughts and pictures. That's what I do, I'm an only child so all I had was my own thoughts and imagination. Keep writing so you can get better and more refined and you could compile a book of poetry and get it published and make some good money off of it. Sorry that was my entrepreneurial side coming out of me. Good work though!!!! Practice makes perfect, you can be an excellent writer once you keep practicing and find your own style. Excellent hope to see more!
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How many words did you look at in your thesaurus before you settled with amity?  That's not a word that matches the feel of the rest of your writing. If you like poetry, you should read a lot of published poems and take a poetry class. You'll learn and grow a lot. Also, receiving honest criticism well will help you to grow and improve. I think I would enjoy your writing more if I felt you were honestly revealing some of your own experience and not trying to appear a certain way. It is not really poetry yet, but it could be lyrics. Even lyrics need to have a balanced number of syllables, though. Keep trying, you are bound to improve.
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Your poem gives me a smile. If your poems are as good as this one, i think you should publish more poems. I have heard that Xlibris will publish some quality poems. try to look into their website... in case you are interested.
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I LOVE poetry! I even try to write a little, its probably no good.\nmy favorite is Lucille Clifton. if you haven't read anything of hers, you really should! simple, clear, very poetic, beautiful language!!!!\nif you like nature poetry, try Mary Oliver!
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the poem is very good!!!
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Awesome poem!\nAmazing!! lol...\nu were 10 or 11? that's so amazing!
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AWESOME WORK.I AM A POET MYSELF AND I BEEN WRITING A LONG TIME AND I CAN SAY THAT YOUR POEM WAS SPECIAL.YOU ARE TALENTED YOU SHOULD SUBMIT SOME OF YOUR WORK ON POETRY SITES.ALL OF MY WORK IS AT LOVELANDIA UNDER THE NAME VALKATVAL.GO CHECK IT OUT AND START YOUR OWN PAGE,ITS A GREAT SITE,YOU'LL LOVE IT.
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Hey, I am so sorry that I didnt write a poem. I cant write poems very good. LOL. But I just wanted to tell you how good that poem is.I love reading poems about what others went through, and this is the best one yet! I hope everything works out between you and your ex.
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For most poems, any format works. Lets hear it for poetic liscense!\nFor easy readability, put quotes around words being said. You can also put one speaker in one font and the other in another, or by making one speaker right aligned and one left aligned if you have a word processor.
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Depends how good your poetry is.\n\nA lot of beginners think they are good poets because they can make a rhyme, but their meter is just awful and totally unsuitable to be a song. However if you do come up with a good set of lyrics for a song, I'm sure there are plenty of musicians that could help you come up with a few chord changes or a simple rythm to put behind it. Or maybe even just a drum beat, who knows.
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AWWW! I LOVE IT! i love poetry that is written from the heart and that poem was! great job!!!! why aren't there more men like you out there! you're gonna make some girl very happy! :)
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lol this doesnt help in any way, but u got nice handwriting!!