Monge. (Monzhe). What do you think? Will it stick? Makes haiku much more fun.
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Comment peut ceci etra ce qui parole de Gilligan de volonte!
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This poem has more than 4 lines, but it is the neatest poem I have seen about the English language.\n\nWhen the English tongue we speak\nWhy is break not rhymed with freak?\nWill you tell me why it’s true\nWe say sew, but likewise few?\nAnd the maker of a verse,\nCannot rhyme his horse with worse?\nBeard is not the same as heard,\nCord is different from word,\nCow is cow, but low is low,\nShoe is never rhymed with foe.\nThink of hose and dose and lose,\nAnd think of goose and yet of choose,\nThink of comb and tomb and bomb,\nDoll and roll and home and some.\nAnd since pay is rhymed with say,\nWhy not paid with said I pray?\nThink of blood and food and good;\nMould is not pronounced like could.\nWherefore done, but gone and lone -\nIs there any reason known?\nTo sum up all, it seems to me\nSounds and letters don’t agree.
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Haiku is a sensitive portrayal of emotion by understatement. It deals with a time and season of the year, usually one of nature. The outward form looks like \n5 syllables\n7 syllables\n5 syllables\n\nThat is not quite correct since Japanese does not have syllables exactly like English.\n\nAn American song, Moonlight in Vermont, actually is written mostly in Haiku. Look at this verse:\n\nPennies in a stream:\nTrembling leaves of sycamore.\nAutumn in Vermont.\n\nThis one I wrote might be too "telly" that is it tells too much. At least I wrote it:\n\nLife's fleeting moment.\nLook: a snowman in the rain!\nThoughts too deep for night.\n\nSee the time of day (night), time of year (almost spring), emotion (perhaps a little regret.)
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I have never heard of it before but didn't find it offencive.  Even after it was explained by someone else.\nMaybe it wasn't this word that got the response deleted but something you'd said........\nI like it.\nI think I'll use it.  lol
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Excellent poem. I printed it & hung it in my Living room wall.\n Thanks
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Haiku\n\nhttp://www.toyomasu.com/haiku/\n\nThe metrical pattern of Haiku\n\nHaiku-poems consist of respectively 5, 7 and 5 syllables in three units. In Japanese, this convention is a must, but in English, which has variation in the length of syllables, this can sometimes be difficult.\n\nhttp://www.ahapoetry.com/haiku.htm\n\nhttp://www.ahapoetry.com/keirule.htm\n\nhttp://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku\n\nGood luck for the future.\n\nKevin, Liverpool, UK.
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1.) Its was ok\n\n2.) I thought this one was pretty cute and funny, made me giggle a little\n\n3.) *YAWN*\n\nHope this helps you know what I think:)
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i think..this is the most unique anme ever...\n\njamila...it means beautiful..for a girl..\n\nso unique yet simple//\n\njah mee lah
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I love your poem.  It's very, very deep.  Keep it up! =)\n\np.s.\nDon't worry about grammatical mistakes.  No such thing when you're writing what you're feeling! =)
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Okinawa et Izu ? (en fait je ne connais pas grand chose en plongée). Izu pour permettre en même temps une découverte du Japon et Okinawa pour le côté "île tropicale". Ca me rappelle un passage des Bébés de la consigne automatique de Ryu Murakami... brrr... (à ne pas lire avant de partir !). \nBon voyage !
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You'd be better off saying it in plain English.\n\nCheck out hanzismatter.com and see for yourself what gets lost in translation.
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I think a limerick would be helpful in illustrating how rhymes work in a specific poetic form. I would have listed some sites, but it looks like there are too many to choose from. You might also use lyrics ( a few lines) from some of Weird Al Yankovic's song parodies to show how funny rhymes are used in music.
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F*cklebunny.\n\nHaven't used it in a whlie though...
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Oh Yes ! Fully agreed ! My mind needs a Dry Cleaning or needs to be sent to Laundry !! It has become very dirty....especially after reading your poetry , except for the last stanza !!! You call it a Naughty ? I must say it was an erotic One !!!  Ha Ha Ha ....Nice one....Quite imaginative ! I liked it !
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The world needs more Poets.\n\nI agree grammar is important..unless misuse is deliberate.\n\nI did get a laugh over someone chastising you for poor \n\ngrammar by stating one word was "more correct"!!!\n\nCheck my poems on my Yahoo 360 and let me know what you \n\nthink by posting a comment and voting for favourites.\n\nA 360 site would be a good way for you to post your works \n\nas well.\n\n\nGood Luck\n\nJimmy
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Dude!!! That hitomi girl has put up a post regarding you stealing her joke! Are you sure you asked her permission? And in what language?- Japanese? English? Chinese?\nDo something before she sobs and does something zany like copyrighting the joke!\n\nhttp://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AnUOXV00ioSuIPa0ZEtCs4_zy6IX?qid=1006040411915\n\nBy the way, joke was good.
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<b>Antenna snaps off\nCyclone kills television\nInteraction thrives </b>\n\nGood question!   old fashion html Haiku make it stronger!