which sounds better ...\n\nshe tosses me to the floor like i didnt mean anything to her. i dropped to the ground and felt as if the whole world shook.\n\nor\n\nshe tosses me to the ground causing the whole world to shake, like i meant nothing to her.
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2nd one comes out better in my mind
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Never heard that one before, but I can present some scenarios...\n\n1) Person A does not get promotion that they believed they deserved. Person A is angry, and says... "I'm SO mad... Person B should not have gotten that job... that really BUTTERS MY MUFFIN!!!" (translation: I am so MAD!!!)\n\n2) Person A (different guy) gets flowers from his girlfriend (Peron B). He says: "Oh, I love her SO much... her thoughtfulness really BUTTERS MY MUFFIN!!!" (translation: I am so HAPPY!!!)\n\n3) Person A (different guy again) sees a very attractive woman in a bar (Person B). She is very sexy. Person A says, "Man, she's hot... I'd like to BUTTER HER MUFFIN." (translation: I would like to have se*x with her, enabling my ejaculate to provide lubrication to her southern genitalia)\n\n4) Opposite of scenario 3... A woman (Person A) looks at an attractive man (Person B) and says.... : "He is so hot. He can BUTTER MY MUFFIN anytime." (translation: See scenario 3)\n\nBest Wishes!
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I'm pretty sure that you can only use "robbed" in the sense of a person, or something animate.\n\nSo instead, I would say:\nMy home was broken into last night while I was out.  The burglars stole everything.
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i would say\nVan Der Sar:ma' cutie i missed u sooo much!\nReferee:not now pumpkin'...go!\n\nps:this is a joke dont take it so seriously
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The first one is better.But I'm sure U got mixed up.I'm sure ur GF said it when U wanted to give her "happiness"\n\nThe second one is a PJ
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Yep.  Makes perfect gramatical sense.  However, so does\n<Green dreams sleep furiously>  even though it doesn't make sense in any ordinary way.  \n\nIf there is any problem in your sentence,  maybe it has to do with the idea that something has <got frozen>. \nThat isn't something which happens often enough for it to trip off the tongue. \nAlso, does it mean that the program running froze/hung, or does it mean she dropped it in the icebox?  \n\nBut basically, no problem.  Sure it can be written.  Or should that be <certainly>?  :-)
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tlk 2 dem both and tell dem how u feel. maybe you could be with both. or a couple hours with one and a couple hours with the other.
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during: im not sure but of my mom has told me that your always nauseus (sumthing like dat) \n\nafter: your life changes because you have a responsability to take care of a child
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once a guy ask me to talk dirty to him. I was thinking dirty why does he want me to talk dirty. So I said shit, dam, and hell.  I told my friend and she said no you didn't and I said yes I did. She told me that's not what he meant and she told me what he did mean.
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I go with C. \n\na) Chickens don't fly very well.\nb)Water is denser than air, and mercury is denser than water. It's true.\nd)But, if the cat is drunk it won't land on it's feet.
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A girl asked a boy if she was pretty.\nHe said no.\nShe asked him if he wanted to be with her forever.\nHe said no.\nShe then asked him if he would cry if she walked away.\nHe again said no.\nShe had heard too much.\nShe needed to leave.\nAs she walked away, he grabbed her arm and told her to stay, he said,\n"You're not pretty, you're beautiful. I don't want to be with you forever, I need to be with you forever. I wouldn't cry if you walked away, I would die."\n\n- Unknown
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It depends on what you're trying to say, the first one is saying that\nIm one of many people in the barracks, and many of those people are tired. The second one is creating a situation in which it seems that only Im one of many people, but we are only tired in the barracks.\n\nSo based on that, and what i think you meant, I think you should pick the first one
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"As I ate" ought to be "As I was eating" (it's the imperfect tense).\n\n"Heaping" perhaps should be "heaped".\n\n"Sighed in relief" is more commonly written as "sighed with relief".
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hi,\nThere is nothing much wrong with this write up. you can just spruce it up by changing a few things here and there. \nYou can actually reduce the usage of I. This woman could be changed to she.(it sounds better) \nFrom that day on... could just be written as From that day, I begged my mother to let me play as I was like/the,King kong trapped in a small cage waiting to break free. Finally I was let out. I started to play....\n..and but is .
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they both seem to be a present tense, but i thing the second looks better, but not completly. it would sound better if u did "watch me do this"\nhope i help :)
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The basic approach sounds fine but it might be less threatening if you soften it a little. Instead of:\n\n"if you are free at 5 on tuesday, and like chinese food, i'm buying you dinner."\n\nTry:\n\n"if you are free at 5 on tuesday, and like chinese food, i would like to buy you dinner."\n\nSubtle difference, but much more neutral.
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You cannot use both these punctuation marks; you must choose one or the other. You can say, "What do you mean by that?" she asked loudly.