it started with me walkig throgh the woods and carrying my favorite rifle , i could smell the autom in the air and feel the cool nip of the air as well as the warming morning sun.\n I reach a clearing and go figure there is a large deer in the feild ,I slowly creep close carfull not to be heard or seen working ever closer then when i finaly feel im close enough i stand up and with all the strength i can gather i throw a native american type lance at the deer ( i have no idea where it came from or what became of the rifle) the lance stikes the deer his knees buckle and he topples to the ground ,then gets up and bolts for the oposite tree lin my lance still planted firmly. i go after the deer an find him just inside the tree line ,quite pleased i gab my knife and reach to dress the deer , just then the deer turned his bead facing up at me and said "watch the river of stones" and laid down his head. what is the meaning of this
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Be careful of any water areas.  Could also represent a girl, you maybe looking to persue.
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Yeah.\n\nWent out plinking with my .22, and when I came into small clearing up around the bend, I was face to face with a black bear and her cub. Range: 4 feet. I ran north. They, thankfully ran south. Happy ending.\nMoral of story: Carry a larger gun in the woods if you choose to wander into a tough neighborhood.
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=I went on vacation and was in the Blue Ridge Mt's.  It was breath taking.  I have never felt closer to God or Nature before.
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Cheney said that he thought the guy was a deer.\n\n\nLOL\n\nI think he was itching to shoot someone at that time.\n\nPhD guy doesn't sound smart to me. If he was smart he wouldn't be posting his picture for everyone to see. But hey, I could put PhD on my name too! lol
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Old Dan lay there in the sunshine, all stretch out and limber as a rag.\n \nDroplets of water, knocked high in the moonlight by Dan's churning feet, gleamed like thousands of tiny white stars.\n\nAfter two hours of chopping, my arms felt like two dead grapevines.\n\nTa-da! :O
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One time on a camping trip I was walking back from the bathrooms at that moment right between day and night and I saw someone walk across the front of the site and stop behind a tree. So I figure one of the people is going to jump out and try to surprise me, so I pull out my flashlight, walk up to the tree, turn on the light, and there's no one there.\n\nAs a child the chandelier used to swing from side to side, and the radio would turn on by itself in the middle of the night.\n\nOne time I was alone in a house, and I felt a presence. I looked a mobile hanging motionless, and said, "If there is anyone else here, make the mobile spin." The next moment, the mobile began to spin.\n\nOne time I was driving into Ponca State Park to set up a large camping gathering, and the sides of the road were lined with spirits. All standing there, clearly visible to everyone, calmly welcoming us back.\n\nOn another camping trip, we felt a spirit near the bon-fire. We had a ring of 40 tiki-torches around the bonfire. It was a still and windless night, but all the tiki flames near the spirit bent in. One of the people in the circle had a fancy camera. After the campout she went to get the film developed, and all the photos from before the visitor turned out, but after that all the film was blank. She took the camera in to be repaired. The repairman asked if she'd been in a nuclear power plant. All the innards were fried from electromagnetism\n\nMy grandmother died while my niece was in utero. After my niece was born, she would look up at areas where no one was standing, and laugh and giggle. We all knew that she was looking at gramma, so we never showed her any pictures. Finally, at about a year old, she could speak, and my sister showed her the family photo album. My niece picked out her photo and said, "That's Old Gramma."\n\nOne time on a camping trip, a witch and I created a psychic link which allowed us to keep tabs on each other without needing those family band radios.\n\nPersonally, I do spiritual healing with singing bowls. I play the bowl in someone's hand, and feel the vibrations as they extend through the person, and can tell them where the vibrations are and what they're doing.\n\nI used to work with a Reiki master who could tell people many details about their lives while we were doing our energy work. Very specific things\n\nmany people drain those around them of life force, but there are some who can do it purposefully. They have the ability to reach out and drain a person's energy. They say it's better than caffeine. \n\nI have a good friend who can do that. She's the only energy vampire I know who uses her power for good. She takes people's headaches. She also has an amazing ability to sense energies, making her one of the most powerful witches I know (I know a lot of witches who claim to be powerful, but very few who actually are). I have known her for many years and we are very close friends.\n\nOne time it was the dead of winter, she was sitting next to a window, and she felt someone looking at her. She looked and there was someone dressed in black with no color in their body sitting across the road, intently looking at her. She looked down for no more than five seconds, looked up again, and he was sitting on her side of the road, still intently looking at her. He was not dressed for the cold, but was not shivering at all. Just intense calm looking at her. She immediately closed the blinds realizing that she had just had an encounter with a real vampire. A real vampire and a kindred spirit. It probably wasn't a vampire like Dracula or what we see from Hollywood, but it was definitely something from outside of our mundane existence.\n\nOne time, on a camping trip, it was an especially magickal night. At some point, everyone in the camp noticed that something was missing, including a necklace from around one woman's neck. The area where we were camping was separate
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I was out walking in my neighborhood when I came across a kid who was 1 grade ahead of me. he had what looked like a pellet gun in his hand. we stopped and talked a while and I asked what he was doing in my neighborhood. he told me he just killed a guy, stole his truck, and wrecked it a little down the road. I thought he was just messing with me, blew off his little rant, told him "later" and continued up the street. with my back turned to him I hear him say "Hey Vincenti" (my last name). I turn around and he's pointing his pellet gun at me. I start moving side-to-side but he keeps it on me the entire time. "Knock it off B@#$" I said. then his points his gun in the air and fires. that's when I realize it's a real gun! he looked up at the sky, yelled "I'm crazy!" and continues up the road in the direction he was heading. I ran faster and harder than I ever had in my hole life. on my way to help I see the guys truck he had stolen in a ditch with a window blown out. I stopped and looked inside. it was grusome. I kept on to the nearest house, phoned for police, and my dad came to pick me up. the kid ended up doing about 7 years for involuntary manslaughter. the scariest part? THE CRAZY FUCKER HAD A HEAD FULL OF ACID! he could just as easily killed me if he wanted. then again I've always been lucky like that
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I WROTE A POEM FOR YOU TO EXPRESS MY EXPERIENCE:\n\nIt was in Jersey; I saw Ghosts; they are true,\nI believe them, I'm scared, my name is Drew.\n\nI used to live in a home that had Ghosts,\nThey whistle time to time, Evenings the most.\n\nThey attacked the nanny, they attacked my son,\nI was fed-up, was raged, showed my anger by shooting a Gun.\n\nI called a Priest, called a Monk, nothing seemed to work,\nI decided to leave'em alone and just moved to New York.\n\nI believe them, they are true,\nI'm scared, my name is Drew.
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Chapter 1\n The road was dark. I sat on the park bench waiting for my ride but I knew the stranger watching me from across the street was going to make trouble. He had a sour look of hate, peering at me with his cat-like eyes. In his hand he held what appeared to be a knife. I was scared. If my ride didn't show up the inspector would never get the information that I came here to get. Suddenly......\n\nYeah, I write a lot sometimes.
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I think of a quiet place where I am walking along a path . The path leads to a wonderful place where every thing goes my way . The sun is shinning . A breeze is blowing . The temperature is not over 70 degrees . You can smell the wild flowers in the air . I'm healthy and young . ( I'm not old or sick I just want to feel extra good) Every one in my world is kind . All the animals are so friendly they come up to you and want to play . I don't have to work . I can read or take a walk when ever I want to . I try to center my self and relax . Soon sleep will take me away .
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wow, what a beautifull piece of machinery, very nice demonstration of what it can do, thanks, i'd love to own one so i can go out deer hunting with it.lol jokeing.
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This is gonna be kiddish and cheesy, but it made me laugh.  And it works better spoken:\n\nWhaddya call a deer with no eyes?\n\nNo eyed deer  (No idea-r)\n\n\nWhaddya call a deer with no eyes and no legs?\n\nStill no idea-r\n\nWhaddya call a deer with no eyes, no legs, and no d*ck?\n\nStill no f*cking idea-r
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Here is the start of one campfire story...\n\nYears ago, when I was your age, I endured a night of terror from which I will never completely recover. To this day, certain sounds, smells, and sights chill me to the bone.\n... check out the website for the full story.
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While I was in prison about two years ago. I started studying scripture. No one forced me to read the bible it was a decision I made on my own. Well anyway I really enjoyed reading scriptures and I began to see the truth. I began to see all the lies we were feed throughout our lives. Once I started getting more into the WORD of GOD... I felt that I was becoming closer to him. About two months before I was getting out of prison. My day was usual I would take naps during the day to kill time but anyways I had just finished reading some scriptures and praying. I fell asleep, and next thing I knew I was in a state of mind were I was awake but not able to really move.. Basically I started having a vision. I am in a child hood home and looking outside a huge window pane..As I look outside this window I see a huge mountain with hundereds of trees...and above it a huge funnel cloud or massive storm over it. Okay so I am like.. what heck...and as I am staring into the window...I have my girlfirend at the time next to me. Whom I later married. and I hear this sound like a whilsting sound... I guess you good say it was like a horn...blowing.... And as I look up, there is streak of fire coming from the sky....one by one it started raining fire.. The sound became louder and louder...at this point I am so scared that I take my wife and we start runing to differnt rooms in the house looking for something to cover us from the fire... Huge fire balls come hurling down destorying everything and leaving holes where buildings stood.. But no matter how many fell I still was not hit by any of them.. I remeber the overwhelming feeling of wanting to hide my self.... so finally we made it to a closet..and covered our sleves with eachothers arms.. I heald her tight and covered her so she would not be hurt. Then slowly one by one the fire stopped and I remeber distinctly that last one sound...that trumpet...blow.... Next thing I see is huge amounts of hail falling from the sky and snow.. so much snow that I have ever seen.. there was so much it that it covered me and my wife to our neck..s I remeber vivdly wiping the snow away from her face.. and then.. I woke up.. with this overwhelming feeling that someone had poured water all over me.. I jumped out of my bunk.. and looked around noone was there.. But it felt so real... the water..to hard to explain... But I knew then... then.. that God had showed something to me... I remeber crying and breaking down praying and thanking God for his vision. I knew then that was the closest I ever came to his Spirit. That day I devoted my life to him JESUS I have never looked back since that day. Now I am a Christian...\n\nNow to make sure that my vision was real I put it up to scripture. Keep in mind that I was not familar with the Word of God.. So it was not like I subconjusly put those thoughts there. What scripture I did read after this happen was in \nRevelations 5:12 to 15\nI watched as he opened the sixth seal. There was a great earthquake. The sun turned black like sackcloth made of goat hair, the whole moon turned bllod red.. AND THE STARS IN THE SKY FELL TO EARTH AS LATE FIGS DROP FROM A FIG TREE WEHN SHAKEN BY A STRONG WIND. THE SKY RECEDED LIKE A SCROLL, ROLLING UP, AND EVERY MOUNTIAN AND ISLAND WAS REMOVED FROM ITS PLACE. THEN THE KINGS OF THE EARTH, THE PRINCES, THE GENERALS, THE RICH, THE MIGHTY, AND EVERY SLAVE AND EVERY FREE MAN HID IN THE CAVES AND AMONG THE ROCKS OF THE MOUNTAINS. THEY CALLED TO THE MOUNTAINS AND THE ROCKS, " FALL ON US AND HIDE US FROM THE FACE OF HIM WHO SITS ON THE THRONE AND FROM THE WRATH OF THE LAMB!\n\nnow from that time until hmm I would say four or five months had passed. In my mind I knew the vision meant more.\nBut God always has a way to present things to you later.\nWell on day as I was reading scripture I found this which made alot of sense in comparsion of my vision. NOw keep in mind I never read these scriptures before. \n2 Peter 3:07\nBy the same word the presen
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I hunted with my husband this year and got my first buck. It  was quite and expierence. Not sure if I will or won't next year.
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venuscolony,\n\nThis could take a long time because I like to tell stories, but I’ll try to be brief.\n\nAs a young teenager, I went camping at O’Neill Park with a group of boys from my church. We rented Stingray bicycles and rode or walked up the steep hills, so that we could ride down really fast.\n\nThe last time that I went down the steepest hill, I decided to wait until all the other boys were way ahead of me, so I could go really, really fast. I started to pedal as fast as I could. When the bike started to go too fast for me to pedal, I just steered it down the winding road.\n\nAs I rounded a curve, I was going too fast to stay on the right side of the road, so I was in the left lane going about 50 miles an hour. I was 6 feet from the station wagon that was coming up the steep hill as fast as it could go – probably about 25 mph – when I first saw it. I had no time to react in any way.\n\nTo my left was a very steep incline – about 60 degrees – and my bike steered all by itself up that hill. When I reached the top of the hill, the bike spun around in mid-air, and I was left sitting on top of the hill while I watched the bike fall about 20 feet below me and come to rest next to the station wagon.\n\nYears later, I was driving down the freeway, and I needed to change freeways. As I entered the new freeway, there was a lot of traffic, but a large truck moved into the lane to its left leaving a large place for me to enter the freeway. The man whose car was behind the truck was observably angry that I had pulled in front of him, even though there had been a large opening for me. I decided to go in the lane to my left when I had an opportunity.\n\nThe large truck was just to my left, and it moved into the fast lane, so I pulled into the large space that it had just vacated. It was just one of those days I guess, but the man in the van behind me was angrier than the 1st man that I had pulled in front of in the other lane. This man was angry and because we were both in vans it looked like he was almost in my backseat because he was driving so close to me. It was easy to see his angry face.\n\nI decided to move into the fast lane when I had an opportunity, and I turned on my left blinker again to signal my intention. The truck was moving faster than the traffic in my lane, and behind him, there were no cars. I looked over my shoulder to make sure that it was clear, and then steered into the left lane.\n\nIt was very strange, but my van moved a little to the left, and then abruptly started moving back to the right even though I was still steering to the left. I looked to my left and saw the angry man with the van was right there. He had decided to get into that lane and accelerate really fast, so that I couldn’t get into that lane. I didn’t see him because I didn’t look over my shoulder again. If I had continued to go left, we would have had an accident going 65 mph.\n\nThese 2 times, I am certain that God’s hand or an angel saved me.\n\n2 of my 4 children have had experiences similar to the 2 that I described above. I have experienced healing personally and seen my children healed. You can be sure that God will heal your deafness, too. Let me share some scriptures with you.\n\nWho has believed our message and to whom has the arm of the LORD been revealed? He grew up before Him like a tender shoot, and like a root out of dry ground. He had no beauty or majesty to attract us to Him, nothing in His appearance that we should desire Him. He was despised and rejected by men, a man of sorrows, and familiar with suffering. Like one from whom men hide their faces He was despised, and we esteemed Him not. Surely He took up our infirmities and carried our sorrows (diseases – see below), yet we considered Him stricken by God, smitten by Him, and afflicted. But He was pierced for our transgressions, He was crushed for our iniquities; the punishment that brought us peace was upon Him, and by His wounds we are healed. Isaia
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Overall, this is good, an apt description of a courtroom scene.  \n\nSome suggestions I would make:\n\n1) Your verb tenses are all over the place - past, present, etc.  You are describing what happened 3 days ago, so it should all be past tense - Suddenly Ralph [rose/got up/stood angrily] and [screamed/accused], "You're such a liar!"  - for example.\n"Flew" is the past tense of "fly."\n\n2) Did Ralph attack Jack or not?  The first paragraph says yes, the second paragraph says no, "almost."\n\n3) The courtroom did not start out a hush, it started out a courtroom.  It could have started out IN or WITH a hush, but a better way to put it might be "All voices were low and hushed as the court proceedings began.  Soon the murder trial started.  Jack seemed to be making very opinionated/wild/outlandish statements." ["incredible" is your opinion - are you supposed to be neutral?]\n\nA good start!  Good luck!