Instruct: Classify Amazon reviews into positive or negative sentiment
Query: Interesting plot; badly needs editing

I think this book has a clever, interesting plot. Unlike some other readers,I was entertained by the military jargon used. The only detraction to mewas the non-existent editing, which stuck out like a sore thumb to me, anddetracted from my enjoyment. A few examples would be: Injecting Procaine in atraumatic amputation victim; use of 12- and 24-hour time references in thesame paragraph; continuing to refer to pay phone use in a time frame "14years from now"; hiding from the bad guys while continuing to drive the samevehicle, not even changing license plates, etc. All in all, a good read.